AvRaj SS: Melodious Tunes(Updtd) Part 9 on pg18 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Hey shruti its an AWESOME update.😳. hmm.. so finally AvRaj ka milan ho hi gaya.. good.. eagerly waiting for Avni's performance!
Its was very nice update keep it up.. 👍🏼
Edited by Sammy11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
This was a superb chapter. Your writing skills are improving day after day! 😳 It was a treat reading this... Please continue asap! Take care! Cheerio! 😃
Edited by .LiveLaughLove. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Awesome Blossom Chakde phatee... Too cute

Shru I loved it 🤗

Voilin gonna play cupid between Raj and Avni... mesmerizing and I loved how u showed AvRaj convo...

Continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Sammy11

Hey shruti its an AWESOME update.😳. hmm.. so finally AvRaj ka milan ho hi gaya.. good.. eagerly waiting for Avni's performance!

Its was very nice update keep it up.. 👍🏼



thnx Sammy..ya..AvRaj met...aage aage dekho hota hain kya...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas

Awesome Blossom Chakde phatee... Too cute

Shru I loved it 🤗

Voilin gonna play cupid between Raj and Avni... mesmerizing and I loved how u showed AvRaj convo...

Continue soon



Thnx a lot Jas🤗...i wanted AvRaj to b diffrent here...so here it is...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Wow Shru...u rocked it yaar...more dat I had expected...so finally Avni met Raj...can we expect Avraj romance in ur next update?
Plez. update asap and PM me...eagerly waitin 2 know wat'll happen next?

Completely

Edited by tina_sre - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: tina_sre

Wow Shru...u rocked it yaar...more dat I had expected...so finally Avni met Raj...can we expect Avraj romance in ur next update?
Plez. update asap and PM me...eagerly waitin 2 know wat'll happen next?

Completely



thnx a lot Tina...really happy...hmm AvRaj romance...? yeah...some romance n surprises will b surely there...😉ok..u'll get ur nxt updt soon..pakka..😆

tht smiley is soo cute...😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle



thnx a lot Tina...really happy...hmm AvRaj romance...? yeah...some romance n surprises will b surely there...😉ok..u'll get ur nxt updt soon..pakka..😆

tht smiley is soo cute...😳




O gr8! can't wait 4 d update...O dat yup it'z cute...goggle baba ke jai ho😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-3

Avni is sitting on her garden n looking at her phone..There r some pics of her with Raj. She remembers those days..

*************************FLASHBACK***************************

It has been two days since Avni met Raj..n she's very eager to meet him again..Avni is sitting on the canteen n waiting for Devika..she sees that Raj was sitting there with some of his friends. Avni was looking at him for some tym..bcoz she can't get enough of him..She was smiling..Suddenly Raj sees him..He also smiles..Avni looks other side. Raj gets up n comes to her.

Raj: Hi..Avni.

Avni: Hello.

Raj: why r u sitting here alone?

Avni: Oh..actually I was waiting for my friend..but I guess she's busy.

Raj: May b we were destined to b together today..

Avni: umm..what?

Raj: I mean...may I sit with u?

Avni: Oh..sure.

Avni was really happy in her deep heart..but she cudn't express it. Raj again starts the talk.

Raj: Avni...

Avni: Hmm..

Raj: What r u thinking...if u have problem with sitting me here..thn I can go.,.

Avni (In hurry): Arree..no no plz...I was just...

Raj (Laughs): I know..no girl can say no to me..n tht too u.

Avni: Means?

Raj: Nothing lyk that..leave it..anyways u r in 1st year right?

Avni: Yeah.

Raj: Hm...that's what I think...or else such a beautiful girl was in my batch I didn't see..!!!!

Avni (Blushing) : umm...u say anything..stop joking..

Raj: What? Raj Purohit never jokes.

Avni: Yeah..i'm seeing tht.

Raj: Girls die for these jokes dear.

Avni : But I'm not tht types of girl.

Raj : I know..u r already dead.

Avni(Shocked): What?

Raj: u understand very less..u r very nave.

Avni : I think it's the nice way.

Raj: May b..i lyk it this way.

Avni: Raj...from when u started playing violin?

Raj: From childhood..

Avni: Really? Who taught u?

Raj's smile fades..his face beams with disappointment..he tries to cover it up.

Raj: People can b taught by the environment..n in many more ways.

Avni understands that Raj wants to cover up..so she ignores the topic.

Avni: Ya..u r right..will u take coffee?

Raj: No..no...I'll b going now. Have lectures to attend.

Just then Devika arrives there n Raj sees her.

Raj: Look..ur friend is here..i'm going now thn..bye..will definitely meet u later.

Raj winks at Avni..Avni is surprised n blushed..She slightly smiles.

Avni : Ok bye.

Devika comes n sees Raj going..

Devika: hayyee..Avni..u r very lucky tht u were sitting with Raj..

Avni: I too think so..

Devika: Every girl of college dreams of spending tym with him..n u did it..congrtz.

Avni smiles..She thinks to herself tht she cannot understand this guy..he seems to b very fun loving n sweet guy but what happened to him all of a sudden..n the way he talks...but she's happy tht she talked to him again.

The next day Avni was walking through the college garden..Suddenly Raj appears there.

Raj: Hey,Avni..

Avni (Shocked): oh..hello.

Raj: Meet u at 4.30pm on college lake side.

Avni: But..

Raj: plz yaar..no if no but.U r coming n that's it.

Raj goes from there n Avni is in surprise..

Avni(In her mind): what shud I do..i really want to meet him..But..no I'll go.

*********************FLASHBACK ENDS**********************

Avni is thinking that it was a very beautiful surprise for her..a beautiful afternoon..She was very happy that day..Her heart started to beat more for Raj from thn..She cud never forget these memories.

Avni goes to her cupboard n opens the drawer...there is a chocolate packet...she kept it safely as it was the first gift Raj gave her.

************************* FLASHBACK***********************

It's 5.10 n Avni goes to lakeside running..she founds no one there..Avni looks at the watch n thinks tht she's late...may b Raj went from there. Avni feels sad..she tried to come on tym..but stuck with some work...Avni was about to go from there suddenly she hears Violin..She can feel it...she can recognize it..it's Raj's violin. Avni truns to the other side...She sees Raj's shadow..The sun is setting n Raj's shadow of playing violin is seen..n the tone is making the scene more serene.

Raj completed his tune n came to Avni with a big smile...Avni was also smiling..

Raj: how's tht?

Avni: Mesmerizing..

Raj:thnx.

Avni: but why u called me here?

Raj comes near Avni..he was very close to her..he moves his hands through her face..he removes the hairs on her face n whispers in her ears...

Raj: to do something special for someone special. I called u here to propose u.

Avni was shocked n blushing...she cudn't believe that Raj was telling this to her!!

Avni(Smiling): Raj...?

Raj(Laughs): arre..i was kidding..nothing lyk that...just wanted to gift u something.

Avni(Confused): But why?

Raj: yeah..u know I've seen many fans of my violin...but u r someone special..u connect very deepy with my violin..i don't want to lose someone lyk tht..so wanted to gift u something.

Avni: u knw Raj..u r someone very special to me too..i can't forget u..i mean ur violin.

Raj(Smiles): thnk u so much Avni..here take ur another gift...chocolate..After all violin tune will not fill ur stomach.(laughs)

Avni: but tht tune can fill my heart...

Raj looks at Avni..Avni smiles n takes the chocolate.

Avni takes her hand forward..

Avni: Raj..friends?

Raj gets a big smile on his face...he shakes his hand with her

Raj: friends..but b prepared..i'm a dangerous friend..(laughs)

Avni (also laughs): ok...I'm prepared..anything for u.

*****************FLASHBACK ENDS*****************

Avni holds the chocolate packet n says to herself

Avni: I was so happy that day Raj...I was more falling for u...Even I treasured ur chocolate packet...but...I didn't know that these will give me pain now.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Super AWESOME and entertaining! 👏I visualized the complete update! It was spectacular! Brilliant! I just loved the lake side scene! 😳Hmm something is up with Raj's past? Its getting very interesting and gripping.. please continue.. i'm eagerly waitin for next update! Lol...😉

Thanks again.. a big thumbs up for your work!👍🏼

//SammyExpress!!
Edited by Sammy11 - 11 years ago

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