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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

My heart goes to Khushi, she has gone through so much, and now this..it's devastating!

And my heart goes out to Arnav, for being unfortunate, he lost the baby, he did'nt even know he had.

Your writing is amazing, the journey continues with such heartfelt emotions.

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faffy

@faffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

So happy to have you back with the next phase of this heartbreaking story.

The update has left one emotionally spent - the pain and anguish is so palpable, you make it so real!

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cosmina

@cosmina

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

i wonder how much Arnav's heart could fight? the last line was so sad! thank you ,both,for this heart touching story!

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

baap re... u dont update when i am here and when u update.. i am not here😡😡 Smitaji

But for such a long wait this update is not done

BUT BUT

thanks for updating

happy with what we got

so we were right

Khushi suffered a miscarriage

Damn DAmn

and all the while Arnav was there in his own Devdas world

Waqt ne kiya esa waar

Haye re nandakisore

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Awesome update

Truly now everything is out of their hands. Khushi lost her child but it's nice that now to share her grief Arnav is with her. Both need each other.

Waiting for he next update

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

oops.. there was a baby and Arnav didn't know.. how is he and Khushi going to handle the loss..

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pree2605

@pree2605

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

awesome...
omggg poor khushi suffered soo much...poor girl...and dey lost der child...if only arnav wud hve cme dat day. ..
thnxx fr email

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hydsri

@hydsri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Happy to see you back. A super update. Poor Khushi!.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Finally... Time never passed this slowly like last three weeks...

Beautifully written Smita Di... Brought tears in my eyes once again... Its heartbreaking... Poor Khushi... Nd Arnav is right... He should've known... The consequence of his decision... Yeah, we've forgiven him long back, but in moments like this, cant help thinking what could've happened... How life could b...*sigh*
Looking forward to read more... Thanks for the mail Rashmi...

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Yaaay! Updated ! 😃 The wait was too long! It seemed like eternity!

Loved the update Smita!

Feeling so bad for Arnav and Khushi. Arnav is a completely broken man. So many repercussions to his one meaningless decision. Just when everything was in the process of getting slightly better, things have fallen apart...

It's going to be such a trying time for both of them and their families!

Looking forward to the next update. 5 days more to wait! 😒

Thank you for the email Rashmi! 😊

P.S: Hope you're both doing fine!! Take care! :) xx