Smitar's: Recalling Arnav-II Parts 1~9 Link to #2 on Pg 1 (4/5)

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Megha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

really very nice...

but very sad tht she lost her child...

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Arshipriya16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Very nice start di. But a bit sad.

E khuda itna dard bhi na dena,
ke use sehane ki takat bhi na ho...

dena bhi hai to kishton me dena,
ke ek se ubhare to dusare ke liye taiyar ho...

gum to gum aur khushi to khushi mat dena.
jaise 1 dhruv pe raat aur ek pe din ho...

kabhi hume akshansh aur rekhansh par rkhana
taki zindagi jine ka bhi maza ata ho...

I know it was a crap but what should I do???? Can't help it...😉 Thank u di for the update... waiting for Friday.

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nikki-73

@nikki-73

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

amazing :)
i was so eagerly waiting to start the second part to this story!!

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Oh poor Khushi. How will she live with her loss?

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

That was an amazinggg update!!!

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Zania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Gr8 update but it was too short :(

cont soon plz.

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

loved it

tangle in a web of their own mistakes

that will suffocate them slowly

hw will he mend this

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Welcome back🥳 with the awesome update even if its a heartbreaking one

Eagerly waiting to read more

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Smita ... I ws just asking Rash abt when u will start part 2 and here u are !! 😊 Rash told me u both r busy tis week so take ur time !! 😳

the story is off to a pain numbing start ... Arnav is going to curse himself to death ... Khushi's trauma ... god ... its unbearable ... what made me smile a lil is that she sought comfort in his arms and didnt push him away ... they wept together ! ... but when she wakes up .. ... her reaction to Arnav scares me ... will she go aloof on him ?? I hope not ... but its very much plausible ... Arnav himself is going to curse himself ... there is much agony and only Arnav & Khushi can HEAL each other ... they need each other. am keeping tissues ready.

love you both.