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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey,,Wt an awesum fiction...First update mein hi dhamaaka!!!!I cn just imagine wht firewrks are in store for us in the future...Such a spellcasting work!!!!!You hv done absolute justice to sandhir..U took me back to the village track,,probably the best ever track in SH... ,,the nostalgia of old days just engulfed me back...👏👏So,,thnk u so much for tht...Its wnderful nd keep writing ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki08

Hey,,Wt an awesum fiction...First update mein hi dhamaaka!!!!I cn just imagine wht firewrks are in store for us in the future...Such a spellcasting work!!!!!You hv done absolute justice to sandhir..U took me back to the village track,,probably the best ever track in SH... ,,the nostalgia of old days just engulfed me back...👏👏So,,thnk u so much for tht...Its wnderful nd keep writing ...



Oh my...😳. You're making me blush and smile like mad!
Hahaha, yes abhi toh starting hai... there are A LOT of twists and turns to come... hence...a rollercoaster of emotions (like where you just want to strangle the person...)

Yes, actually I wanted it to be like right when they started the village track. 😆 And that's where there is a huge plot twist that deviates from the main SH track...

Thanks so much,... you have no idea how much reading your comment has made my day..🤗. well night now... but still.. Thank you sooo much. I get the encouragement to continue this😃

Share with your friends!!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!! it was awesome
sandhir😳 their fights were very cute
muh par kuch and mentally tareef
loved it
contnue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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do pm me when u update...I found it nice😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asapom

OMG!!! it was awesome

sandhir😳 their fights were very cute
muh par kuch and mentally tareef
loved it
contnue soon!!!


Hey! Thanks so much!!!
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Sandhir is just amazing!
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I will continue soon! Thanks!
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Share with your friends!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: riyasenak

do pm me when u update...I found it nice😊


Hey! Thanks sooo much! You're the first to ask for a PM! Awww!🤗

Thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks so muchhh! This made my day...🤗

If you would add my on your buddy list, I will be sending PM's too all the people in my buddy list... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ya'll🤗

😊I am so excited to post on Friday(or Saturday) the mysterious Chapter 2...

😆Fasten your seatbelts...and prepare for take off!

Hope ya'll are enjoying it so far. I know in one chapter not much is established. But it pretty much is parallel to the serial until the Dream Team Competition... the rest is going to be different. Completely different.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello! I hope you all enjoy. Please remember to imagine the villagers dialogues in a thick hindi accent. I wrote in English, so all the non-hindi readers can enjoy as well. This is leading up to a dhamaka. I wannnttt LONG comments on this one! If I get at least 15 LONG comments... then by tomorrow I will post Chapter 3. That's my promise. Anyways! Keep loving me and this Story! :) Love- Kri

Chapter 2

"Didi! Didi! Didi! Now what are you going to do?" The kids were curious running after into the cottage.

They looked at their mentor, their sister, their best friend, their second mom, their favorite person- the girl was a homely girl, tall, and her chubbiness was evident on her curves but her traditional ghagra choli suited her figure, her long black oiled hair in a side french braid, her eyebrows were hairy as well as her arms, and her eyes with evenly outlined kohl conveyed that she was stirring up a mischievous prank in her mind.

"Ab aap log dekhte jao. Kitna maaza aanevala hai. Par aap log na... meri raaz kissi kho bhi batanna mat." The girl mimicked a soft childish voice.

"Your secret?" The kids said in unison.

"Are yaar! You guys know my secret, but I don't want them to know! I want to see who they are before I tell them who I am. By the way, where did these people go and what did they want?" The girl asked the oldest kid that saw the group.

Before the older kid was able to say anything, the youngest said, "Par didi, everyone in the village knows your secret... that you are..."

"Yeah, yeah. I know that everyone in the village knows. But they all will keep quiet about it. I will tell Dadaji. And he loves me a lot, so that will be taken care of. It's you all that are going to have to help me. Who are these people?"

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Meanwhile, the FITE group stood there dumbfounded at what they should do next.

"Goodness! Where is Vardhansir? What are we going to do? Where is the competition?" Vidushi began her harangue while the rest, still tired from the journey, attempted to ignore her.

After a couple of minutes, Randhir had spotted Vardhan. "Guys! Vardhansir," he said and waited until Vardhansir was close to them.

"Well, you guys. We're here at the competition arena. How do y'all like it?" Vardhan asked knowing their replies.

"Vardhansir, don't be angry, but is this really where we will be staying?" Jiggy asked not realizing he was still holding Kaustuki's hand.

Upon seeing their joined hands, Vardhan sir spoke, "Why? Is there a problem? Let me remind you guys that you are here for the dream competition, not for a vacation with your sweethearts."

Jiggy and Kaustuki immediately released their hands.

"Oh hoye! Vardhansirji! You worry not, ji. I will make sure that no chupa-chupi here in this competition. After all, I am your assistant sirji!" Yoyo began. At this occasion, he took the advantage of breaking up Jiggy's and Kaustuki's stance, and stood closer to Kaustuki. He could sense the rage that Jiggy built within himself, but since Vardhansir was there, he could not do anything.

"Whatever. You all must be tired. Just find a place to stay, and then I will give you all instructions on the Captaincy position later. Talk to you all then." Vardhan concluded and left from the place.

Right after, Jiggy pulled Kaustuki from behind so that she'd be closer to him. Yoyo made a face and put his arm around Sahil's shoulder.

"Are yaar. What are we going to do now?" Sahil finally spoke. "And on top of everything, there isn't anything like a hotel or even a hostel nearby. Who are we going to ask?"

Randhir and Sanyukta looked at each other hoping to find some solution. Although, this time, they both said nothing as they had nothing. They knew it wasn't going to be easy.

And plus with everything being so new to them... what they didn't know that a whole kichidi was being cooked for them.

"You all farzi engineers, I am going to find it my own way. See you." Randhir left getting agitated at hearing his peers comments.

Yeh Randhir bhi na... Aapne aapko samajhta kya hai. Sanyukta glared at Randhir. The awkwardness between them from the beginning of that day vanished as Sanyukta sensed his MCPness back. With that, she thought to have a competition to find the place first.

"Mr. MCP! If you think that you are the only one to find the housing first, then you're absolutely wrong!" Sanyukta walked toward him and pointed her finger at him.

Staring at her finger pointing at him, Randhir took a hold of her hand and bent her finger back causing Sanyukta great pain. "RANDHIR!"

"FARZI" Randhir shouted back still bending her finger.

"Let go of my finger!" Sanyukta shouted, her pain could be felt with the tone of her voice.

Immediately, Randhir withdrew his hand and smirked at her. "Oh Farzi, you can't even take that much pain. Now you know never to point at me like that again." Thank god for that course. So that I knew how far to bend her finger before a fracture, otherwise, Vardhansir would have scolded me. Nonetheless, it's better that she knows not to mess with me. This... I mean... What we had... Back in the bus... Was not good...

That just annoyed Sanyukta to the zenith and she stomped her foot on his. Randhir winced in pain. How heavy is this girl? It's like she put all her weight on my toe.

And with that, Sanyukta left leaving everyone astonished. Randhir acted normal, and in anger told everyone to do their own thing.

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A few seconds later, Randhir left to go ask for help.

"Bhaisaab, do you know where I can find a place to stay?" Randhir asked.

The villager began, "Haan, aapko-na -"

"ARREY SAAHIBJI!" A person from a distance called interrupting the villager.

Randhir, annoyed now with all the disturbances, looked over where the voice came from and looked disgusted.

I know... I know. It's a bit boring...This isn't the exact perfect chapter, but this isn't a filler. This is essential for everything to continue smoothly. And I promise that I will post Chapter 3 by tomorrow if I get at least 15 LONG comments! Please please please! Love you all! (Dashes from tomatoes and onions...)

Edited by kri1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Unn dono ki choti choti fights main hi tho jyaada maza ata hain
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suumi

Awesome update...
Unn dono ki choti choti fights main hi tho jyaada maza ata hain


AWW! Thanks so much! Comment #1!
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