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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

superb update...

well done shashi...

he did best thing...

arnav deserves this...

update soon...

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arhi_love_boni

@arhi_love_boni

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

LOVED IT...HEART TOUCHING UPDATE SERIOUSLY

SHASHI GUPTA'S RESPONSE ...THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED...LOOOVED IT...REALLY REALLY GOOD ONE👏...HOPE ARNAV READS THE CRUMPLED LETTER

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manali garg

@manali garg

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

very painful...nw i wont arnav to regret what he has done badly...cant go thru this pain anymore plz...

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Wow loved it plz update soon would love to read abt Arnav's reaction while he reads the letter

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Skyfall

@Skyfall

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

I unresed my earlier comment on Page 48 (Sorry for being so damn late)

I love Shashi.

I love the way you described him in this update, so freaking fantastic.

Now I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

*prays and hopes Arnav's redemption track starts so I can enjoy reading him feeling pain after what he has done to khushi"

This is what you've done to me, what your writing has done to me.

Such flawless writing brings out this response from your readers!

Can't wait until the next update Zee :)

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

one of the best👍🏼!!! m so so happy that the person whom khushi adores n care for the most is now fit n fine to actually show arnav his way. a father's love n care for his daughter can never be measured. sometime a mother can compromise her daughter's happiness for the sake of the society, but a father usually nevr does. his daughter's wellbeing stands first. shashi is such a striking example of a doting father. he's now my fav charactr in this story. loved the kicks n punches! never ever expected those. came as a pleasant surprise😃 hope arnav now gets to knw khushi's innocence...cant wait for the nxt dose of update..

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sadbad

@sadbad

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

congratulation 😊u did it 😛i have been reading stories on IF for 5 months now but never i commented or liked any stories.its not like i didnt like any other stories. there are many brilliant writers in IF and i loved some of their arshi stories but never commented on anything lol dont hate me i am too lazy to comment.but ur story did it. it made me comment on your wonderful writing skill.this ff is brilliant👏.i looove it.its my most favourite ff after his gardening her jalebi.i read all the parts in one go.pls pm me when u update and make asr fall on his knee and beg for khushis forgiveness😡again brilliant work😊

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

oh both chapters were fantastic. I loved your shashi, that's what a father is like, I could imagine him as the ideal father. so easily. beautifully written scene where shashi shows arnav his place, in fact if only shashi hadn't passed out, he could have beaten arnav singh raizada to pulp.

I cannot believe how amazing you are and what x fantastic approach you've taken to this story. brilliant.