~Fate Has It's Own Way~[Part 16-pg 49]UPDATED//Sandhir & Vidarth.. - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Preetika-Sinha

Wow wow wow ! That's all I can say

Omg! The proposal was mind blowing!!
And so was RANDHIR!
And parth and RANDHIR as best friends! That's what I want!!

Hats off!

Keep writing!
Preetika! <3



Preetika... Thanks a lot 4 reading it... Seriously happy that u liked it..

Love
Ayesha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Ayesha!!!!!!!!
I didn't know that u wer updating this!!!!!!!
Actually I missed it!!!
The update wer awesum!!!!!!!
I just loved it!!!!!!
All the parts!
Vidushi-Parth...Just loved iT!
Keep writing!
With Love Rekha!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
the story is quite similar to the show but still u have done a great job...
mind blowing...
I like this one..
same but still different...
so cute..awww..
I even didn't know u were writing an ff...ayesha..
so good yaar...
Edited by anyania - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
aayesha...!!
you wrote this FF nd tune mujhe bataya tak nahi...!!
now m not talking to you...
ye comment me tumhe ye batane ke liye kar rahi hu that I m not gonna comment on your FF.. katti..! :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sandhirlover

aayesha...!!

you wrote this FF nd tune mujhe bataya tak nahi...!!

now m not talking to you...

ye comment me tumhe ye batane ke liye kar rahi hu that I m not gonna comment on your FF.. katti..! :(


Sry yaar ... Maaf kar de... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Wow its superb... pls continue waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

okk fine... tujhe to pata he na ke TERA FF ho or me comment naa karu aisa ho sakta hai...??😉 ab rona mat... jaa maaf kiya tujhe...😊

ye le tera comment...!!! I read all the parts in one go... [all thanks too you.. tune itna JALDI jo bataya mujhe...!!] 😡 nd this story is just Awesomeee...!!! 👏👏 first 2-3 parts were simmilar to real track.. but then ekdum u turn..!! 😲 villain Vidushi tere FF me to heroine ban gai re...!! 😆nd I loved that.. 👏 but I loved the fifth part the most... 👏🤣
girls hostel room scene was too good...!! abhi tak meri hasi ruk nahi rahi...!!🤣🤪
nd Randhir ka propose karne ka style..!! amazing... kash mujhe koi aisi propose kar de...!!😳
but the last line "kya tum Parth or Jiggy ki bhabhi banogi..?" omg kya dialouge tha... dil jeet liya tune..!!😆
then Parth worried about Vidushi... his feelings.. you penned it beautifully..!!👏
last part was superb... Parth ne sab ke samne Vidushi ko kiss kiya...!! kya baat...!! hua chokra jawaan re...!! hehee..🤣
nd ab uski bhi bari aa gai pipe se chadne ki...!! 🤣🤣 bahot achche...!!
ab update karo jaldi...!!
nd iss bar pm send karna bhul gai naa to dekh lena.. chodungi nahi tumhe..!!😡
Love you soo much
Ashka.❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sandhirlover

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">okk fine... tujhe to pata he na ke TERA FF ho or me comment naa karu aisa ho sakta hai...??😉 abrona mat... jaa maaf kiya tujhe...😊</font>


</div><font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">ye le tera comment...!!! </font>
<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I read all the parts in one go... [all thanks too you.. tune itna JALDI jo bataya mujhe...!!] 😡</font>
<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">nd this story is just Awesomeee...!!! 👏👏</font>
<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">first 2-3 parts were simmilar to real track.. but then ekdum u turn..!! 😲</font>
<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">villain Vidushi tere FF me to heroine ban gai re...!! 😆nd I loved that.. 👏</font>
<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">but I loved the fifth part the most... 👏🤣</font>

<div><font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">girls hostel room scene was too good...!! abhi tak meri hasi ruk nahi rahi...!!🤣🤪</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">nd Randhir ka propose karne ka style..!! amazing... kash mujhe koi aisi propose kar de...!!😳</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">but the last line "kya tum Parth or Jiggy ki bhabhi banogi..?" omg kya dialouge tha... dil jeet liya tune..!!😆</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">then Parth worried about Vidushi... his feelings.. you penned it beautifully..!!👏</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">last part was superb... Parth ne sab ke samne Vidushi ko kiss kiya...!! kya baat...!! hua chokra jawaan re...!! hehee..🤣</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">nd ab uski bhi bari aa gai pipe se chadne ki...!! 🤣🤣bahot achche...!!</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">ab update karo jaldi...!!</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">nd iss bar pm send karna bhul gai naa to dekh lena.. chodungi nahi tumhe..!!😡</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Love you soo much</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ashka.❤️</font>



Thank u sooo much... N thanks again 4 the lamba comment... N hopefully Mein parts jaldi update karungi... N yup sry tumhe Bataya nahi ki I wrote a ff... But promise Mein next time jab update karungi ull surely be the first one I'll send a pm me,.. Pakka promise...

Love u too
Ayesha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Wow its superb... pls continue waiting eagerly...


Thanks ... I'll update it by today...

Love
Ayesha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Awosame loved it upload next part soon

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