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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Awesome story... Hope arnav does not believe Shyam

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Akorshi Oroni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

hey dear i'm your new reader...

read all the parts in one go...

khushi sacrificed a lot...

arnav save khushi please...

update soon...

i've already sent u buddy request ,...pm me...

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

anjali deserves the slap. she has become ignorant of the life around her to the extent that she is unable to differ good from bad. and she has become evil. seems like being with shyam she too has become the same. a shock treatment is what can make her realize. and arnav has done a good job in shouting at his sister. payal has for the first time stood up bravely for her sister. waiting eagerly for the next update

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lavanyaraj

@lavanyaraj

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

payal stood up as a strong person for kushi...
anjali should understand the truth of shyaam atleast now...

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Read Your Other Stories Too In Your Blog. Please Update Those Too Pretty Please 😳

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afsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

No ofence but i dont get it why u have showed Khuhsi so weak in this FF

Let that be mental or physically

In this its like there is no respect for her and im hating that

Lets c whats ahead

I love that Payal stood up for Khushi n slapped Anjali

I would have loved it more if Arnav have done that but he is spineless creature in this FF for me

Waiting to read whats ahead

Plz add me to ur PM list

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Dhanya C Babu

@dhanyac

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

nice update...

loved payal & akash...

anjali is dumb...

hate shyam...

hope khushi is safe...

thanx 4 d pm...😊

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

I was right.. it was Payal... loved the update.. waiting to know whats in the paper..

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jenshad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

I Really Like Your FF Cruel Reality, Could You Please Update Part 3? 😳

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arshiforever123

@arshiforever123

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: -afsha-
No ofence but i dont get it why u have showed Khuhsi so weak in this FF
Let that be mental or physically
In this its like there is no respect for her and im hating that
Lets c whats ahead
I love that Payal stood up for Khushi n slapped Anjali
I would have loved it more if Arnav have done that but he is spineless creature in this FF for me
Waiting to read whats ahead
Plz add me to ur PM list

helllooo! dont worry..no offense taken...i appreciate critisism...i like to know my weaknesses and thus how to improve them...yea in this ff Khushi does seem as a pushover and not that strong...and to be honest I think I couldve made her character much stronger and more resistant towards Arnav, but i think it was a mistake on my part...becuase when i think about the real ipkknd this is how Khushi would have reacted in my mind...shes not that strong of a character but shes random and gets her way...and shes cute lol :p and in this ff...because ive decided to not include her weirdness and childishness (which i do findd adorable...at times) it may make her look as weak. And your right...there is no respect for her...and Khushi will stand up against that..eventually...shes not one to accept disrespect...that will come in future chapters.

and its interesting you think Arnav is spineless...i can see where you may get that from but Im still interested to know why... :)

and yes i shall ahhaha...dw you will recieve my constant pms...i can only hope you dont get super annoyed of them after a while since I do update so frequently.

Originally posted by: Sindhuramakrish
anjali deserves the slap. she has become ignorant of the life around her to the extent that she is unable to differ good from bad. and she has become evil. seems like being with shyam she too has become the same. a shock treatment is what can make her realize. and arnav has done a good job in shouting at his sister. payal has for the first time stood up bravely for her sister. waiting eagerly for the next update

ahhaha totally agree with you sistaa! lol

Originally posted by: Akorshi
hey dear i'm your new reader...
read all the parts in one go...
khushi sacrificed a lot...
arnav save khushi please...
update soon...
i've already sent u buddy request ,...pm me...

helloo and welcome to this Arshi FF a twist of events...thankyou for choosing to read this ff and I hope you enjoy your stay with us ...ok now how good was my impression of a pilot? No come on...really? 🥱

lool...heyy thanks for reading and commenting, im glad you enjoyed it..and hope that you continue to do so...yes mam i shall pm you 😃

Originally posted by: Sanz.
I Really Like Your FF Cruel Reality, Could You Please Update Part 3? 😳

heeyoo! Thanks girlee!! 😳 After the 23 of May I shall update all my stories and add new ones...cuz right now i have exams...but I WILL BE FREEE on may 22 inshAllah 😊 im glad you enjoyed my other storiess!!

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