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Posted: 11 years ago
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This OS i have written specially for @kapoormeneka... Hope you like it meneka... Loads of Love... Muaahhh 😃

SWARON - Your Wish is My Command (OS)😊

Today is special... thinks sharon... she has planned to make her swayam a surprise .. who has now finally and offically become her...
Sharon excitedly... sits and thinks... make a few calls to people here and there... so that all things should be perfectly planned... as after patch up after so much of ups and downs they were together...

It was 6 am in the morning... she gets ready and calls swayam...
C'mon Swayam phone uthao... kitna soyoge... (getting imaptient)

Swayam - Hello (in sleepy voice)

Sharon- Hi Swayam...

Swayam- Sharon. (in sleep smiling)

Sharon- You know kitna cute you sound.. when you talk in sleep..

Swayam - Acha, you can call me everyday morning... or you could just sleep with me... (teasing her)

Sharon - Swayam tum bhi na (blushing)

Swayam- Wow... itna acha good morning... i could have never had...

Sharon- Ohh Shucks... Swayam... tum na... jis baat ke liye call kiya.. woh toh mai bhul gayi... Tu fatafat... in like 15mins come home... ASAP...

Swayam- Kya hua sharon.. everything fine??

Sharon - Swayam no questions... come fast...

Swayam - Aree Sharon... batao na kya hua??

Sharon- Tum aa rhe ho... ya mai ghussa hojao??

Swayam- No No No dont get angry I am coming...

Swayam immeditely... without wasting a minute... goes for shower... gets ready.. picks up his phone... his bag... dressed in white tee and blue denim... and leaves for sharon's house in his bicyle...

Its 6 30 am..

Swayam reaches sharon's house... As soon as he parks his bicyle... he gets a message on his phone...

Sharon- Is baar darwaze se aana... ;)

Reading this message.. Swayam smiles as how well sharon knows his... he heads towards to her house... rings the door bell... Ting Tong..

Sharon - Swayam andar aa jao...

Swayam enters... He sees the house very well decorated... a table in centre... with two chairs... Like the perfect breakfast table... and few decor... to give it a perfect morning look..

Swayam - Sharon kahan ho tum?

Sharon - Swayam I am in the kitchen

Swayam heads towards the kitchen...

Swayam - Sharon

Sharon turns and sees her love dressed so perfectly and looks so handsome.. she just kept staring at him...

Swayam - Sharon kya kar rahi ho?

Sharon (coming out of her trance )- Making breakfast for you... (she said excitedly)

Swayam was confused... as these wishes were already fulfilled, then why is she taking so much effort to do it all again..

Sharon- Swayam i know what you are thinking... but today the whole day... you are spending your day with me... and we are gonna relive your wishes.. and fulfill the one that was left too... aaj hum dono ek saath... is day ko memorable banayenge... with love romance masti... and little dance... (she said all this coming towards him)

Swayam felt really loved and touched... he pulled her into a hug...

Swayam- Thank you so much sharon... Thank you for loving me soo much... thank you for being in my life... thanks for everything... I LOVE YOU SHARON...

Sharon - I LOVE YOU TOO SWAYAM... (coming out of hug) Its 7 already... cmon now let me... make breakfast...

Sharon starts making... two omlette... she toasted 2 slices of bread... She took oranges and put them in juicer and made fresh orane juice two... she was doing everything fast... as if she was a perfectionist... she made breakfast...

Swayam was standing there and adoring her... that she was taking effort for fullfilling his wishes... every moment he thanked god... for giving his sharon back to him...

He felt like teasing her... he slowly went towards her... while she was preparing the breakfast... and held her from behind... Sharon felt chills in her spine...

Sharon- Swayam kya kar rahe ho...

Swayam- Tumne hi toh kaha... todha love todha romance... wohi kar raha hu...

Sharon- Swayam tum bhi na... chalo chodo mujhe... let me finish...

Swayam (leaving her ) - Okay

Sharon - Chod diya (disappointed)

Swayam was smiling at her cutenes...

Now the breakfast was ready... Swayam helps her to take it to the table... They both sit together... and eat the breakfast...

Sharon was talking countinously and swayam couldnt just stop staring at her...

Sharon- Swayam hows the breakfast...

Swayam - Really nice... I loved it...

Sharon - Thank you... Chalo now...Let me get ready... we are going out...

Swayam - Kahan??

Sharon- wait and watch my love... (giving him a peek on his cheek and ran to get ready)

Swayam was sitting there all stunned...

Its 8 30 am now... they are done with breakfast and sharon comes down... in a pink kurti and blue denims...

Swayam could just think khubsurat khubsurat in his head... he couldnt stop staring at her...

Sharon comes and stands in front of him... snaps her fingers and gets him out of his trance...

Swayam - Wow sharon you are looking...

Sharon - Khubsurat (says it with excitement)

Swayam- Yea... Khubsurat..

Sharon - Cmon cmon its getting late...

Swayam and Sharon go out... and there... there are two bikes...

Sharon- Time for the next wish...

Swayam just looks at her..

Sharon- Mujhe baad me ghur lena... (pulls him to the bikes) Lets go now... Hume pahadi ke wahan jaana okay...
Swayam- Okay.. lets go..

Sharon and Swayam leave on their respective bikes... and go to the destination choose by sharon...

Swayam was so busy adoring sharon... who was enjoying the morning breeze and the ride...

Soon they reached their destination... Sharon won the race... and she reached and was jumping...

Sharon- Yeahhh I won... Swayam Yeah yeah yeah

Swayam- Yes you won... Me My heart too... (coming closer to her)
Sharon stopped jumping and just stood there looking at swayam... They both had an eye lock... they both didnt release it... Swayam was walking towards her... He came and stood so cloose to her... held her by her waist and pulled her closer to him.. their torso were touching... sharon wrapped her arms around his neck... his grip tightened around her waist... and now so close that even air couldnt pass from between... Swayam made the move... he got his lips close to hers and slowly just touched their lips... He was wating for sharon's permission... Sharon didnt move... now he knew that she was ready for it... He deepened the kiss... Sharon also equally responded... Yes they shared their first kiss... The beautiful one... Which made them more into love... and more for one another...

They both released the lip lock... as they were ahort of breath... Sharon rested her head on swayam's chest...

Sharon- Swayam I love you a lot... Kabhi mujhe chod ke mat jaana

Swayam- I love you too... and I promise Im always there with you... for life...


Part 2 coming soon... 😊


Edited by ShwePoo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I could just think khubsurat khubsurat infinity times in my head... I couldnt stop smiling and blushing at while reading this☺️☺️...

First part is like this second me kya hoga😳😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kapoormenka

I could just think khubsurat khubsurat infinity times in my head... I couldnt stop smiling and blushing at while reading this☺️☺️...

First part is like this second me kya hoga😳😳😳


Yeaahh... I am so glad u liked it... hahaha... be ready for the second part... 3 wishes baaki hai... 😆😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice read both the parts
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks guys... will update part two soon...
please do comment and let me know your views on my workkk...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jaldi update kar do please
khubsurat woa
i felt current through me
while reading this

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes... I will update soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2

Sharon slowly pulls out of the hug... It was 10am

Sharon- Chalo lets go...

She takes Swayam's hand and leads him to the place where the whole Camping has been set up...

Swayam was stunned seing how she had prepared everything...

Swayam- Wow this is so beautiful..

Sharon- Thank you...

They both go inside the tent and sit there... Swayam lies down... and asks sharon to come close to him... SHaron without heisitating... goes and sleeps next to him... Swayam hugs her from behind... by her waist... sharon's beck is completely pressed to Swayam;s chest... They both coluldnt be more happy and content with their life...

Suddenly Sharon gets up...

Sharon- OMG yaa... I totally forgot...

Swayam- Kya hua...

Sharon- Its time for tea...

Swayam- Chalo i'll make...

Sharon - No No... Today you have to only relax and enjoy... Today everything I'll do for my swayam..

Swayam- Thanks Sharon..

Sharon just smiles and gets up...

Sharon- Dont come there and distract me like last time... Chai banegi nahi phir... and she runs to the place where everything was kept ready...

Swayam gets lost in his thoughts of how Sharon fulfilled his wishes... then their fight... Their breakup... The way sharon was trying to get thins sorted... His mistakes... how he ignored her purposely... Her Crying... feeling lonely...

Meanwhile Sharon comes up with tea and some biscuts... to the tent... SHe sees swayam lost in his thoughts... She snaps her fingers in front of him...

Sharon- Hey kya hua??

Swayam- I am Sorry Sharon (lone tear excapes from his eye)

Sharon- Swayam kya hua... Sorry kyu bol rahe ho... Dont cry... (worried)

Swayam- Sharon i am sorry for everything... bahut hurt kiya hai maine tumhe... bahut pareshaan kiya hai... tumhe itna try kiya... mujhe mannane ke liye... but i behaved like a stone... I dont know mujhe kya hoaya tha... I am really very sorry sharon... I love you a lot... and maine hi tumhe bahut hurt kiya...

Sharon- ssshhh swayam... Its all in the past... (wiping his tears).. aab we have to move on aage... Lets promise to one another... We will fight we'll argue... diffrence of opinon ho.. kuch bhi ho... but we will never part ways... hum kabhi ek dusre ka saath nahi chodenge...

Swayam- I promise... (hugging her)

Sharon- Chalo bahut rona dona hogaya... Lets have tea... Wish 4 (winking to him)

Sharon gives him the cup..

Sharon- I have made tea for the first time... tell me hows it... (nevervous)

Swayam takes a sip of the tea... and is totally stunned... he just didnt know how to react...

Swayam- Wow Sharon.. tea is amazing... Just perfect...

Sharon- Really... (excitedly)

Swayam- Yes of course... aise chai toh mai bhi nahi bana sakta hu...

He has the entire tea... Fast as fast as he could...

Sharon- Swayam aaram se piyo na... tumhara khatam hogaya... Mujhe company toh dete...

Swayam just looks at her and smiles...
Sharon- Ok now let me also taste hows it...

Swayam- Sharon rehene do na... lets talk...
SHaron- Arre.. lemme try the tea atleast...

Sharon takes the cup and sips the tea... and within no time... she spits it off...

Sharon- Yucckk this is so bad... i put salt instead of sugar... and the milk is also not boiled properly... (looking at swayam) Jhoot kyu bola mujhse...

Swayam- Sharon you made it for the first time for me... How can I tell you its not proper... The gesture of yours itself was so sweet... Chai me Shakar kaam nahi laa mujhe...

Sharon- THat was very filmy... (laughing)

Swayam and sharon... Laugh their heart off...

Sharon-Tumhari wishlist ke ek aur wish baaki hai... Chalo lets go...

Swayam- I wanna stay here for a while... just cuddling you and lying here... Abhi jaana hai??

Sharon- Nahi todhi der baad bhi jaa sakte hai...

Swayam- Come here na...

Swayam and Sharon cuddle there and dose off for a while... They both with total pleassure and content dose off...
It was 1 pm... Sharon and Swayam had slept off for a while now...

Sharon's phone rings...

Sharon- Mujhe todha time lagega... everything should be set perfectly... I want no mistake...
Tum sharon raiprakash ko jaante nahi ho... Koi bhi galti hu... then god only save you... Got it..
.
SHe turns and looks at swayam staring at her...

Sharon- Kya hua?

Swayam- Kispe itna chila rahi thi..

Sharon- Uhhh... Nothing...

Swayam- Waise bhi sab tumse darte hai..

Sharon- Tum bhi ??

Swayam- aahh... You wish... aaj kal toh tum chup ho jaati ho... Wen i pull you close (pulling her)

Sharon became quiet and started looking down..

Swayam- Kya hua.. abhi itna chila rahi thi.. abhi chup...

Sharon- Swayam tum bhi na... Chalo chalo lets go... Duphar hogayi hai... Next destination paunchne me bhi time lagega...
Swayam (giving a peek on her forehead) chalo lets go...
They both come out of the tent... and walk towards... where their bicycles were parked...

Sharon- We are going in one bike now... Dusra toh sirf tumhari wish puri karne ke liye thi... I like to sit in the front...

Swayam- Come lets go...

Sharon sits in the front and swayam starts riding the bike... she sometimes purposely will kiss his chin to distract him... or held his hand... while he is riding... and swayam couldnt resist sharon doing all this... he used to get chills on his spine as he was riding the bike and had to concentrate on the road...

Swayam- Sharon distract mat karo... Mai ride nahi kar pa rha hoo...

SHaron(laughing) Okay Okay

Soon they both reached a set... Sharon had arranged this set specially to fulfill Swayam's Final wish... The rain dance... As in this weather... Rain wasnt possible... So she planned to do it with shower...

Sharon- Wow we have reached... lets go...

Swayam- Yeh kya hai??

Sharon- Chalo toh tum...

Swayam- Par Sharon...
She pulls his hand... and takes him in...

Sharon- Tum andar jao... I am Coming in 2 mins...

Swayam aimlessely starts walking... Its all dark inside... He couldnt see anything... He starts worrying for sharon... as it was really very dark...

Swayam- Sharon where are you?? Sharon Sharon...

Suddenly... One spotlight comes on Swayam... He gets very confused... and then it starts showering... He was getting more and more confused...

Swayam- Sharon??

One More spotlight on sharon... She was dressed in a white saaree... Swayam was stunned to see her in that attire... he couldnt believe his eyes... She comes close to him... and then music starts...

Yeh sazish hai bundon ki... koi kwashish hai chup chup si Dekho na Dekho na... song from Fanna...
They both start dancing in the tunes of the song... The enviornment was etting heated up... their dance was heating it... They were getting more and more close...

In the rain... Their body was swaying to the music and in the tunes of love...

Swayam pulled her close held her by her waist... in no time they were kissing passionately... and swayam's hand goes to the pallu of her saaree... he was about to remove it... He realized that they were out... and it wasnt correct to do anything of that sort here... Sharon understood what went in swayam;s head...

They both pull out of the kiss...

Swayam- Sharon this was beautiful... One of the best days of my life...

Sharon _ I love you swayam... and i am so glad you liked it...

Swayam- I love you too .. Chalo lets dry ourselves and go..
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Sharon- I have got some clothes for you... you can change in to them...

Swayam- Thank you... Saath me change kare ya alag alag... (winking and teasing her)

Sharon- Swayam tum bhi na..

Swayam just smiles and goes...

They both change and come out... Swayam rides back to sharon's place...

It was 5 pm by now...

Swayam- Thank you Sharon... Bye...

Sharon- What bye... (confused)

Swayam- Ghar nahi jau??

Sharon- Obivously Not... Come on in...

Swayam- Aur bhi kuch plan kiya hai tumne...

Sharon- Yeh sab toh tumhari wishes thi... Lets just chill for a while na... Dinner karke jaana..
Swayam- Okay... Chalo...
Sharon and Swayam... go to her bedroom...

Sharon- Mai change karke aati hu...

Swayam- Come soon...

Swayam got really tired ... as his whole day... went off as a dream... but was tiring too... In no time swayam dosed off in her bed... Sharon came back wearing a strapless tee and shorts... and saw swayam sleeping... She came close and just sat next to him... Swayam got up.. realizing that she came there...
He slowly made her lie down.. and started kissing her... Sharon responded equally... Her hand was inside his tee... feeling his torso... THey both got rid of their clothes...
Swayam- Are you sure.. you want us to go a step ahead in our relation... I dont mind of waiting...

Sharon- I love you.. and all i want is you... (pulling him closer)

Swayam was happy to know that she didint mind them getting closer... In no time... They make two bodies one soul... they made love... with each other... and with immense pleassure rested in each others arms...

After a while they both got up... Dressed up... and were having dinner together... teasing loving troubling and romancing with one another...

Edited by ShwePoo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am just speechless what should I comment there is no proper words to describe this part. It's just just just beautiful and heavenly. My hunger for for OS increases now I want more and more keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Meneka... This OS was specially for you...
though i wasnt very happy with part 2... m so glad you liked it...

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