#KSGonlyASAD-Beautifully Broken *THREAD 2 - CHAP 16 - Page 42

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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read the last 4 chapters...it's too painful to see ASYA go through all this😭...and you've written every bit of it so beautifully...I'm still confused about Zoya's past,her affair with Altaf and how she fell in love with Asad eventually...can we get a proper flashback?😊...Tanveer😡you've tried your best to portray her as a bechaari but I just can't stop hating her..she was a fool to have fallen into that jerk Farhaan's trap😡...my heart went out to Zoya...now she thinks Asad is the father of Tanveer's child😭...but I'm happy that Asad heard everything😊...I feel things are going to turn positive soon😳...keep up with your great work😊...again sorry for being so horribly late with my comments but I really can't help it🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
gud mrng
tiara werz my update yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07



ur every update made me cry hard..

The way asad, let her go
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. Was vry painfull
1 time any ff made me drop tears to core
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. Beutifully written
love
niyati

aww.please dont cry i am so sorry to make u cry so much
Thanks a lot dear. Yes it is painful for him to go but still hr cant backoff 🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07



god!!
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. They broke the nikaah
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. How difficult could it have been for asad to
yell his love.

I m feeling pang in my heart.
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. You write very beautifully
love
niyati

thanks a lot niyato 😃
Yes they broke it finally asad plan got successful. Thanks a lot and sorry to make you cry
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

Hi tiara!!
Sorry for late comment
bt here i except i m fan of ur story, it always left me moan n in tears... 😭
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. Zoya going away frm asad..
It will be better for her. Atleast pain will be less. Man rashid is such a jerk. He even dint care for his son. My god, he said to gaffur zoya is characterless. Shame on u man u took away ur own son's happiness, what to accept frm such a man.

Zeenat preggers...
Zoya saw tanveer there,
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. I felt gr8 pang hereing mrs.khan fr tanveer how will zoya be feeling.

Man wat hpnd to zoya.
Cliffy! Cliffy?

Plzzz updattteee asas asap...


Waiting hard
thanks fr pm
i cn comment late
bt will comment fr sure
love
niyati

thanks a lot dear 😃
Iys ok if you're late I'm happy atleast you commented 😳

That is a silence complement i take it 😆
Its not better fot her to leave asad her happiness is with asad.
Rashid did ehat a normal person who cares for his famly prestige and family will do. Perhaps i canot say him right for messing up asya.
Yes she is pregnant.
I will soon. Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07



hope u dnt mind , me spaming ur thread
love
niyati

thanks a lot . aww ots so sweet.
Hey why would mind taking your feed backs here i am happy on contrary that you are repliying me your pov.
Thanks a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Just read the last 4 chapters...it's too painful to see ASYA go through all this😭...and you've written every bit of it so beautifully...I'm still confused about Zoya's past,her affair with Altaf and how she fell in love with Asad eventually...can we get a proper flashback?😊...Tanveer😡you've tried your best to portray her as a bechaari but I just can't stop hating her..she was a fool to have fallen into that jerk Farhaan's trap😡...my heart went out to Zoya...now she thinks Asad is the father of Tanveer's child😭...but I'm happy that Asad heard everything😊...I feel things are going to turn positive soon😳...keep up with your great work😊...again sorry for being so horribly late with my comments but I really can't help it🤔

thanks a lot dear 😃
It is painful but the pain is worth it 😆
Right now atm i can only brush over their past but as i can see many wish to know complete story before this. I may start a prequel to this love saga so you all could relate better.
But only if you all too want it to read in deep. Or brush up is fine!
No body knows how the man is in relation when hr is masking all the fake goofiness to world. Bechari tanveer i dont think its her miatake here
Tanveer herself made him listen everything lol 😆
Its ok with late comments until you do comments 😆
Thanks a lot 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shishiksg

gud mrng

tiara werz my update yaar

good morning shishi 😳
Eeeh!! Kal to kiya
N dekhte h if i have time to update it today 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shishiksg

gud mrng

tiara werz my update yaar



mujse baat nai karogi 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu



mujse baat nai karogi 😭

good morning gowtu...abd bye thoda busy hu 😃

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