A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON)

don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

loved the update ...!

super funny

thanks for the PM

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Awesome_Annie

@Awesome_Annie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Hey updated!!!

I loved this chapter. It was beautifully written.

Twins? lol that wasnt expected! but it awsm!

Aw u described kaustu and Sanyu friendship beautifully.. and then our sandhir fights.

The hospital scene was good.. that kiss talk was awsm! Hahah i was laughing like a fool.

m glad that finally our sandhir agreed to do something together. They will be getting close now!

Hey pls update soon! This is one of my fav story and I just want to keep reading. U r a great writer so never stop writing.

Btw i like the name evelyn! My suggestion- Jenna or andrea or eva? for boys- John, nick or Matt?

Ps. thnx for the PM!

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: Awesome_Annie
Hey updated!!!
I loved this chapter. It was beautifully written.
Twins? lol that wasnt expected! but it awsm!
Aw u described kaustu and Sanyu friendship beautifully.. and then our sandhir fights.
The hospital scene was good.. that kiss talk was awsm! Hahah i was laughing like a fool.
m glad that finally our sandhir agreed to do something together. They will be getting close now!
Hey pls update soon! This is one of my fav story and I just want to keep reading. U r a great writer so never stop writing.
Btw i like the name evelyn! My suggestion- Jenna or andrea or eva? for boys- John, nick or Matt?

Ps. thnx for the PM!

aw thank u soo much!! Im glad u liked it!

Hey thanks for the names. I liked it.

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: don girls
loved the update ...!
super funny
thanks for the PM

Thank u!! I'm glad u found it funny 😃

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luvsandhir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Res ..( I knw dre's no point reserving coz I'm already very late but still Res for now)

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

It is awesome ...

Thanx 4 pm me ...

Update soo

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Anshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Gosh! This was superb
Hahhaha Sanyukta's blunt answer was fab and Randhir freaking out? Gosh that was worth reading..
The thoughts going on were worthy
The evening part was the best especially the ending when he said that the washroom is the other way... Poor sanyukta! How much embarrassed was she
Thanks for the pm and update soon!
Btw
Try out names like Raisa, anika,

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Nia | Rii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

lovely..u r giving us many surprises..
I mean twins..now I bet they neither they expected nor think of this...
I really loved the convo between them..
sometimes hilarious, sometimes mature...
I really loved the kaustuki-sanyu buddy talks..

I am now greatful that actually they understood they behave like kids...
eagerly waiting for the next part. .
update soon.waiting. ..

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