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purnima209

@purnima209

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

awsme yar so nice part u now that game is awsme... i m lauging when i m readg this part not stop i loved this part

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sandhir.candy

@sandhir.candy

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

this one was really hot☺️

i can just imagine everyone's expression on learning about real situation🤣

update soon dear

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Rekha

@Rekha85

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

The update...Mayuri!!!!!!!!!

Even if u wer late...The update was just awesum!!!!!!!!!!!

Beautiful mistake revealed!!!!!!!!!

I just cant believe...this was wat just happned!!!!!!!!!

Anyways Update sOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep writing

with Love

Rekha!!!!!!!

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Asapom

@Asapom

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Awesome update

Fight who kissed first😆

Loved it

The flashback was described very well

Continue soon

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mani choudhary

@mani choudhary

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

wow it was tooo gud.. truly luvd it

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Foram

@G.R.

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Hey...this FF is very nice

unique story...and d latest update is superb

keep up d good work

and update d nxt part soon please

If u cn plz pm me nah wen ul update d nxt part

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HappyST

@HappyST

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Awesome update.

Thanks for the pm.

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Omg !!!!

Man!!!! This was something what you call mind blowing !!!!

Fantastically written

My favourite part was the flashback, you portrayed it perfectly and the start was breath taking...

I'm still amazed that Yoyo witnessed it all hehehehe that was perfect...

I was imagining the whole update and the characters ...

I bet kaustuki would have turned red like a tomato hehehehehe

I'm eagerly waiting for the next update

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Mayuri

@xxMaYxx

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Thank u guys sooo much! your comments are always awesome! 😃

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

wonderful wonderful update!
do continue soon!

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