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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

I'm really happy you chose this particular scene, Choti.

In the show they made a hotch pitch of what could have been a lovely scene. Suicide is a serious issue and should have been dealt with seriously.

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Love how how you write all genres beautifully. Its always a pleasure reading something from you.

Thanks.

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docs

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Posted: 11 years ago

Brilliantly written... I dont like suicides ... Even when all doors close in on u ...u need to hv faith that things would turn around... Esp when v devout ppl try this it just shows their devtion was lackin they never believed their almighty will get them out of the mess...

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

Clearly one of the best take on this scene.

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lov it but i hate that scene in our shw hw they mk mockery on that serios scene butifuly writen n justify that part

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Pastellitesoulx

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Posted: 11 years ago

It is amazing shot.
Beautifully written.you described the scene so well.
Your note is such sweet gesture.like you i also want to see arnav as lovely,caring person in the show specially in that suicide scene and show little respect to khushi who did so much for him and his family.well suicide is not funny at all.
Thank you for this shot.truly enjoyed reading it.

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Shalma/Suman

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome series Choti. Loved it.

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ahhh well chosen

This couldn't have been more perfect setting

They thought she deserved for being brash

For eloping with him

But what they could see in his eyes was love for her

And that he does love her

Though he may not show

You are right suicide is never to be taken lightly

If these women knew that arnav is better than that creep they would never have thought that way

Wow they knew too

Arhi are clueless with they

His anger hides his love for her

Khushi is one free spirit not easy to tame her

Only he could do it and so could she for him

Damn that was touching

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

Just read all of these but I most say my favurites were the last two! Difficult to write, particularly the last one but you executed them flawlessly!

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saschades

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update!

true about ur note on suicide

thanks for pm x

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Param

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely Os!! Laxminagar comes to know about arnav's love for khushi.. nice.. loved it.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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