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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#251

The inhabitants of Lakshminagar sure love to observe and judge!! This one brings forth how much Khushi really went through... She was either the scapegoat or made an example of...Arnav's actions at the end put to rest the speculation the observers had, a couple addressing their martial issues..

Your note at the end is a very caring gesture xx

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Choti!

This scene is special to me. Very special.

This is the scene that started my journey as a writeR. In fact, my AN on my first ever story read much like your own.

I hope you know that I have a wistful smile as I am reading this.

I loved being on the outside for a little bit, if you know what I mean? We always knew what was happening in A & K's life. We were privy to all the details. But it's interesting to see what people who didn't have that would see.

And that was done bloody brilliantly.

I also love you for turning that scene around, for making it something memorable for the sweetness and poignancy of it, rather than the absurdness.

Simply put, I love it.

Edited by BlueMystique - 11 years ago

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just_juhi

@just_juhi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Sigh... am I allowed to cry? Seriously... absolutely loved this!! Like you, this scene didn't sit particularly well with me in the show... I think it would've been more appropriate if this happened AFTER they realized their love for each other and NOT as a way for Khushi to be out of Arnav's life.

Do you plan on doing any more of When I Knew OS's? Maybe from their own (Arnav & Khushi's) POV? That would make for a great series ending? 😳 NOT to put any undue pressure on you or anything.

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

I loved it...the place has been witness to a lot of arshi moments...the way khushi was always made a bad example of...tat was real...nice OS...

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Nice one. You have nicely included LaxmiNagar people in this OS.

Edited by pinkly - 11 years ago

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

That's v good! Like this version!

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

I loved it. It's good to see their journey as a third person with the eyes of Lakshminagar residents who knew Khushi. I won't say their observations were wrong given what they got to see especially Arnav dragging her half the time or coming home late at night having a fainted Khushi in his arms.
I liked how you showed the worried side of Arnav in that suicide scene.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

As I'm late I'm reading all other one-shots of the series too.
I completely absolutely loved the first shot - When Shashi knew...
His love for Khushi, his trust in her was unshakeable. I loved how you wrote it.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#259

OMG You've scarred JP for life!!! If HP's begin a witness to the almost kiss wasn't enough you did this to JP. 😳

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Aww... NK... I absolutely loved it. NK may have experienced unrequited love but he was way too perceptive even after all his sunny persona. He has been a great friend to Khushi and also has helped Arnav-Khushi to come over obstacles especially one snake.