ARHI OS : THE PROPERTY

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nandu3991

@nandu3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: adhara17
It is interesting.waiting for next parts. Continue soon

Currently I yet haven't planned for continuing but will try .😊 THanks for appreciations , it matters a lot .

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

@Sindhuramakrish

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

i think this is the first time i have come across such a plot which is so emotional, painful and what not. such extremist characters do exist in this world. i would like to request u to continue this into either an ss or an ff. u can even mention the past in flashbacks. it may or may not have a happy ending. but its worth a try. do consider it. what u write is not about arnav and kushi alone. there are thousands of such people who come across such situations and they are even i worse conditions. i really appreciate u for having the guts to take such a bold step and pen down the story. if u continue , kindly send me a pm.

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@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

First of all Nandu, I am touched, honored and soaring above the moon that you dedicated this to me. Thank you. For the kind words, thank you. You have always supported Serendipity, and for that reason I've always had a soft corner for what a kind person you are. The dedication validates my thoughts. Thank you so much.

Coming to the OS, it's absolutely beautiful.

Khushi's emotions are heart wrenching and her pitiful situation brings a tear to my eye. You have written this so well, maintaining the balance between angst and a sick kind of hope, while using language that is so simple and pleasant. And like the comment above me has pointed, these are situations real people face everyday -- which makes the OS all the more impactful.

You have a talent, my dear! I encourage you to keep writing and sharing your talent with the rest of us. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago