ARHI OS : THE PROPERTY

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OS : THE PROPERTY

FOR AAMIR18 WHO DEDICATED A POST TO ME EVEN THOUGH I DID NOT GIVE HER EVEN A SINGLE COMMENT (A THANKYOU NOTE FOR HER GENEROSITY )

please note SUICIDE IS NOT THE BEST OPTION(THERE'S ALWAYS A WAY OUT AND TRUST ME I HAVE MYSELF EXPERIENCED IT ) . By this os I'M NOT PROMOTING SUICIDE .This is from khushi's point of view . This os highlights the angst of a depressed person who clearly needs help and that is why I have left the ending open because there's always hope .
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She tried to slide the blade across her wrist , but courage was not

something which could be brought from shops . Yet another failed attempt gave
way tears , it was a long night after all .

Khushi ,the name that became the mockery of her life ,

the only thing she owned . But then he came and snatched
away that as well . In the dirty lanes of Mumbai slum she was now
known as Champa , the woman who scrubbed the floors of some
rich Madam's bungalow . It all happened some six months ago ,when
their six month's marriage came to it's expiry .With their divorced finalized ,
much to the family's disapproval , Delhi was rocked by one of the biggest
scandal it had ever witnessed . The wh**e Arnav Singh Raizada gave shelter
to became the back stabber . The innocent son-in-law of the Raizada family was
lured by this witch into adultery and deception .People sympathized with him
and his wife bid him goodbye with teary eyes as he surrendered to the
law for the crime he committed in the haze of hypnotism of black magic .
But Khushi became an outcast and Arnav Singh Raizada made sure that
she remained one . With no one to turn to she ran away ,in the dead
of a dark night to this place of anonymity .

Suicide had always been called a crime , maybe because till now

she was always somebody's property. First her foster families'
and then of a man who called her his wife .She was had always
been the property people sold ,acquired and desired but now she was free .
She was a no man's land by but fear of encroachment always lurked .
Life in these was
not easy , especially with a pretty face and ripe body
. After all how much can a burqa hide from a man's eyes .

But something else had happened today which had shaken her

to the very root -Arnav Singh Raizad had found her .The
tiny grainy black and white picture hadn't escaped her
employer's eyes neither did the hefty amount with it . She escaped
in the nick of time and with the humble amount she had safely tucked in
her blouse's secret pocket she bought another blade .

Arnav Singh Raizad would find her ,this she knew .In fact she could

hear some commotion outside .The dilapidated door won't be enough to them out for more .

She was no-one's property to be sized , she was born free

and it would be a shame if didn't die as one . Dying for freedom
aren't
criminals they are martyrs and she was going to be one.

All she needed was courage...

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PS: because of some technical errors I could not post a new thread hence editing an old post ,hope you don't mind .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
simply fabulous
loved it
thats terrific..pls post this in IPK forum..people over there would love this...
do continue to write such awesome stuff in IPK forum.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IsleOfCapri , thankyou so much for the encouragement 😊 , yeah will try to do that
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really very nice...
pls do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
what did he do
he sealed her fate
and his with it
how could he do this to her
well too late he has lost her completely now
serves him right
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: MarriedLove

really very nice...

pls do continue soon...

Thankyou for appreciation , it was really encouraging , well I haven't yet planned on continuing but yes I promise future post of such kind as I'm working on improving my blog writing skills
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thats horrible...sorry to say but Arnav was never this bad... he was a much better person then this...he respected women...his mother and his sister...and also the Nani, Mami Payal and Garima...such a person wud never sell his own love to dogs...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

what did he do
he sealed her fate
and his with it
how could he do this to her
well too late he has lost her completely now
serves him right


YES i wanted to highlight his extremist nature , I wanted him to start sacrificing for her , not to adjust her in his life , to look beyond her imperfections .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is interesting.waiting for next parts. Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjs

thats horrible...sorry to say but Arnav was never this bad... he was a much better person then this...he respected women...his mother and his sister...and also the Nani, Mami Payal and Garima...such a person wud never sell his own love to dogs...


yeah , he was not this bad with women , but here wasn't seeing her as a woman . It was later when he realized his mistake that he accepted her beyond her imperfections .

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