Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 25) - Page 78

Nice update !!!

I am wondering what would be the exact moment or event that would make arnav realize, his love for khushi. He needs to realize and accept the fact that all possessive and irrational behavior he is showing stems out from his love for khushi than his past insecurities. I am a little annoyed with him for dictating what khushi should do. His behavior towards rishab was understandable in the sense rishab was romantically involved, unlike karan who is her only real family. Sigh! Looking forward to next chapter. Anamika, another thing I have noticed is, that you take so much pains to not only write the update as in story wise, but also the font. The bold, italics you use give the right affect on readers mind. It is commendable and so thoughtful of you! 👏

Doobte hue ko tinke ka sahara kaafi hota hai...waise aapka hafton baadwala update bhi hum pyaason ko kaafi hota hai...😃...kitne din intezaar ke baad finally aa hi gaya!!!

Kitna acchha likhte ho bacchha..👏...you are unbelievably good. You know the best thing I like in your writing...chaahe jo ho donon ke beech, aap unke personality ko change nahin karte...kiss hua, tab nahin...consummation hua, tab bhi nahin...aur ab confession, bhale hi one-sided hua, tab bhi nahin...dheeth hai yeh ladka...bacchhi ki jaan lega kya???? 😲

oh my khushi confessed n he juz remained silent n ran away...oh my...n now he is throwing tantrums lyk a child...ohhh my...khushi gotta b strong n patient nough 2 deal wid him...well loved d update...

So what IS his definition of love then- ds s sumdng nly arnav cud answer

hehehe yeah then what IS his definition of love?

The last line took away the cake. If his not loving is this how fierce would be his love.

it was one amazing update

OMG!You are an absolutely amazing writer! Beautifully written. Arnav just DID run away. Khushi's attitude is very impressive. The last para of all has been simply fantabulous. Ofcourse Arnav loves her! But maybe not in a way khushi expects him to and he himself isn't ready to accept it as 'love'. Khushi's gonna take this one month 'BREAK'? What's gonna happen? Please continue soon. I will die out of frenzy now. :p


P.S.I don't know what crap I wrote. You are just too fine and sophisticated that it makes me umm..well,complex.

P.S.S. All I comment is just to let you know how much I love your work. Thank you for such an amazing FF.

Absolutely lovely update!! I had a big smile on my face while reading!!