Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 25)

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#561

love dis story
love d way u writeee

yaayy regular updates frm nw on..yupppiee

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#562

Thank you for this beautiful note. The story is simply perfect, brilliant and hits the bulls eye when dealing with all the characters and their emotions. You have done justice to all the characters so marvelously. There is not a flaw in this story. It is so original , refreshing ,and realistic.

And I know that you will bring a closure to Arnav's insecurities in the most beautiful way we can ever imagine. You will mould him , change him but still retaining his original possessive and passionate nature in such a way that Khushi herself will not be able to believe her eyes.😊

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va21

@va21

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Thanx A for d note!!

I also never felt that u wer bias towards arnav!! We all knw for sure ki not a single word is thr in d update without prior thought...n we all love u for that!!

Anonji ur every note is really an insight for us as in d flow of this lovely story we realy tend to forget lil details like u said about 'Arnav getting a second chance'...m so happy for Arnav..😊..coz he really deserves it!!

Eagerly waiting for next update!! Weekend ko to banta update...pls next wk pe mat dalo...itna intezaar nahi hota!!😉

Vibha.

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

priye anon... 😉

ye beech beech me hint fenk ke guess karne pe majboor na kren... ab hum sochte rahenge ki ye second chance kab aane wala hai...n yahan to hum guess karne me bhi bade bure hain 😒

aur.. gd phase thoda lamba karo naa pls... pls .. pls..

haan agar ho sake to ek baby bhi ... 😉

i knw i knw.. meri demand list / wish list... already bahut lambi hai.. bt then.. its almost discarded list naa.. to ye new hai.. n isme bus itna hi hai ...

filhal 🤣

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#565

A good clarification note and thanks for it. I didn't think of the fact that Arnav's insecurities are surfacing because he has Khushi to lose. I only thought it because of his demons from past. And yes now he is openly showing his insecurities and keeping distances from Khushi both because he doesn't want to lose or hurt her.

Yes, khushi is a girl and unrequited love will hurt irrespective and irregardless of whatever. In the last update even Khushi doubted her earlier resolve that her love will be enough for both.

When will he touch his low? I'm assuming that is when he'll get his second chance to life, his Khushi.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Thanks for the note... As I said always, I'm in love with this man, with all his flaws, nd I understand him, coz he is just too real... If I were in his shoes, may b I'll do the same... Same applies to Khushi too... If I were in her place, I'll DEFINITELY act the way she is acting now... Both of them are absolutely right in their own place... Perfectly imperfect... Nd I just love them this way... Waiting to read more...

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lujainshaikh

@lujainshaikh

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#567

A clear POV was surely needed 😊 Luv u for this...n will always wait for d updates in all phases 😉

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metitaliya

@metitaliya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#568

cool...its my favourite story...i love reading it...waiting 4 next update..😃

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9351594004

@9351594004

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#569

We r waiting please bring it on

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#570

Thanks for the note. Its so true that me being a woman have always sided with Khushi. Now after reading your note, I am thinking what is going on in Arnav's mind.

He is desperate to have Khushi in his life, as his wife, companion, friend, well wisher, quite literally everything to him. He is hanging onto Khushi like a drowning man hangs to a wooden plan for survival. Khushi also loves him heart, body and soul. Then why are these trust issues cropping up?

Waiting to see what that second chance Arnav gets and how he makes use of it.