SANDHIR SS:Love Keeps US Together chapter 11 updated COMPLETED!!!

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@..Mellifluous..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Anarkal
rula diadi itNa toh main srk ki kal ho na ho mein bhi nhi roi thi

hehe...don't cry yar...and thanks for reading and commenting...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
Harikait was really emotional. The portion of Sanyukta's POV was like poetry. It was flowy like blow of wind. Randhir had telepathy that that girl be Sanyukta and voila here she is but why why destiny had to play its role. I know it ould be miracle seeing her condition but I hope she will get well soon. Randhir's love brought her back to life.

hey di...thank u so much...for the lovely comment

am glad u liked sanu's pov...

thanks for reading and commenting...

love,harika

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liyaliya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

it was awesome

good job

update soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: liyaliya
it was awesome
good job

update soon...

hey thank u so much...

am glad u found it awesome...

thanks for reading and commenting dear...

btw..what's ur name..?

love,harika

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SHREYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

wow harika...awesome👏

its such a treat to read ur ff😃

sanyukta's pov was amazing

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Tanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Harika! Huge apologies. U always make sure to comment on my updates and here, look at me! I ve been busy wd school..hav school tom also bt den remembered ki I ve to read Harika's updates. So I stayed up and read ur updates. I missed 2 updates! Dey were touchig...I dont wnt sanyu to die please ...im sleepy now but promise to unres tom for a long descriptive comment xD ~Unres~

Okay. Harika...Ur a great writer! Mark my words...GREAT!!

The plots dt u brew up in ur creative lil mind!

The hit nd miss...sanyu arriving at the spot mins after Randhu left...so Touching...

Sanyu is DYING!! Of what? Cancer, I guess?

Yaar pls unravel the mysteries!!

What happened in the first place? WHy did she leave?

And update soon...save Sanyu re x(

Apology once again :/

Love,

Tanya

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Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: riyasenak
wow harika...awesome👏
its such a treat to read ur ff😃
sanyukta's pov was amazing

hey shreya...thank you so much babes...

am glad u liked it... and u found it awesome

thanks for reading and commenting di...

love,harika...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: TashaForever
Harika! Huge apologies. U always make sure to comment on my updates and here, look at me! I ve been busy wd school..hav school tom also bt den remembered ki I ve to read Harika's updates. So I stayed up and read ur updates. I missed 2 updates! Dey were touchig...I dont wnt sanyu to die please ...im sleepy now but promise to unred tom for a long descriptive comment xD

hey tanz...no probs dear...u stayed up ...aww thank you so much dear...

am glad u found them touching...

take ur own time dear...

thanks for reading and commenting...

love,harika...

P.S.waiting for ur long review...:)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Guys this is dedicated to all the girls in the IF ...and in this u won't fine sandhir and am sorry ..next part ...I don't know...

CHAPTER 5

Randhir is standing ..leaning to the near wall and thinking about what happened an hour ago...he don't know whether he should be happy that he found his love Sanyukta or he should be sad that his love is in a life-death situation...he never thought that sanyukta will do this thing.He always thought no he believed that she is a strong and determined girl ...but what she can do this time..she was shattered and collapsed and completely broken from inside...her dreams are shattered ...he remebered sanyukta's last words which she said to him..randhir promise me ..that u will talk with your mother...he thought she is unbelievable ...how can she be like this...she is dying and thinking about others...he have tears in his eyes..he took his phone from his pocket and dialed his mom number...

Fortunately or unfortunately..his mother is in mumbai...when he called she is in a meeting...her assistant lifted and said that she is in a meeting ...but he said I don't give a damn ...just connect the call..the assistant got afraid and she went to the meeting hall and said Mam,am sorry to disturb but your son is on the line...and with that she left and renuka's happiness have no bound and she have tears in her eyes and she immediately left to talk with him ..when she was going her P.A. said mam,meeting...she turned her face and said ...cancel the meeting and deal..i won't care...her P.A. just nodded his head and she left and shestarted talking with him...beta...and randhir on the other line...maa,city hospital now...!!! with that he kept the phone..and his mom got tensed and hurriedly left for the hospital...

She reached the hospital and went to the receptionist...and now she remembered that she don't know where is he?? so she remembered his voice it was like he is in pain...so she asked who was admitted in the I.C.U. recently...the receptionist said wait a second mam,yes Sanyukta Agarwal was admitted...she shocked ..what the hell?? now she understood everything and she went in the direction which was instructed by the receptionist and there she found her son...leaning to the wall looking completely lost..by seeing his conditioned her heart ached..she can't see her son like this ..she goes to him and keeps her hand on his shoulder ...Randhir...

Randhir realized who it is..and he just hugged her ...he is crying on her shoulder ...the tears finally came out ...he is crying and his mother didn't stop because he want him to cry because it will reduce his pain to some extent...he cried on her shoulder maa do something...i can't live without her...she is my life mom...and she was there for me always...and she helped me with our relationship also...she is so sweet mom...I LOVE HER mom...please mom do something...her mother consoled him and said shh beta she will be fine...i will talk to doctors...and i will do what can i do..okay..now please relax ..u had ur dinner and he nodded his head no...I don't want to have..she said ...stup up and have it..if sanyukta will know about this..she won't like it...hmm okay...he said...

After that they are sitting and waiting for the doctors and suddenly they listened some shoutings and cries at the receptionist so..they went there and they saw a woman is crying ...and her husband is shouting...renuka went and asked what happened? she said they want to abort my child as she is a girl...she is shocked...what? and randhir" anger reached the peak ..his anger is boiling... and he just catched the man's collar and asked what u r going to do?? oh mister stay out of this...this not ur matter...and randhir punchem him on his face..and said u r really disgusting..u want to kill a unborn child..as she is a girl...

yes,i want to kill her as again we should think about her marriage and her studies...which i don't want so...before he complete the sentence randhir punched him...and said u r really disgusting...and u know what a girl is ?how precious she is? ...u hava a MOM right ...she is a GIRL..and there is a sister who sacrifices her happiness for her brother sometimes and supports him and she is a GIRL..and U need a girl to roam with u as a GIRLFRIEND ...and u need a girl to buy you your WIFE..and U need love and u will get this from GIRLS and WOMEN...they are so caluable and sensitive and a girl can rule the world and remember one thing that GOD MUST BE BORN FROM A MOTHER'S WOMB...so please respect girls ...they are sensitive..and they are storng as well...If girls are not there ..then nothing is there...so remember that...and he went from there ...and his mom have years in her eyes and she is proud of her son ...and the man realized his mistake...and took his wife and went ...

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Guys !!! i want to ask yu people somthing..shalli end it in the next part or shall I continue...please leave ur reviews...:)

am done with this part and please leave your lovely comments and like it...

love,harika..

keep smiling..it costs only two lips...

Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago

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unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

awesome.. Love it.. Randhir mending his relation with his mother.. Randhir's break down.. Randhir gave insight to that man.. Randhir's opinion about women love it.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..