#2: ArHi SS: !!Eclipse!! *Thread 3 link on PG 1* 22/July/13 - Page 9

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-Megha thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Awesome chap, Kiraaan !! <'3
So arnav finally admitted his true
feelings to khushi! *happy dance*
Iknw tht was the flashback, bt they are
the one who plays like a balm on my
heart seeing the current situation! :(
& I really admire the way arnav and
khushi submitted their feelings to each
othr! ^_^
No extra talking, but to-the point
baatein! ^__^
But again im left in a dilemma as to
how did khushi change her mind to
marry abhay whn it was arnav all
throughout!! o.O
Did somethin happn b/w thm?
Or did Lavanya or Rk did something?!
And yeah, Im a bit too scared fr khushi
too .. 'Cuz ofcourse, Abhay had seen
the whole scenario b/w her & Arnav ..
& I wudn't be surprised if he tries to
harm her! :(
Aaannnddd i wudn't want tht to happn
at any cost !! *fingers crossed*
-Megha thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Awesome chap, Kiraaan !! <'3
So arnav finally admitted his true
feelings to khushi! *happy dance*
Iknw tht was the flashback, bt they are
the one who plays like a balm on my
heart seeing the current situation! :(
& I really admire the way arnav and
khushi submitted their feelings to each
othr! ^_^
No extra talking, but to-the point
baatein! ^__^
But again im left in a dilemma as to
how did khushi change her mind to
marry abhay whn it was arnav all
throughout!! o.O
Did somethin happn b/w thm?
Or did Lavanya or Rk did something?!
And yeah, Im a bit too scared fr khushi
too .. 'Cuz ofcourse, Abhay had seen
the whole scenario b/w her & Arnav ..
& I wudn't be surprised if he tries to
harm her! :(
Aaannnddd i wudn't want tht to happn
at any cost !! *fingers crossed* !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
I read the whole thing in one go and wowww it's just sooo awesome:)...
laksh65 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
hi kiran
welcome back and read AAO and SOL
will you update this one too? please dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: laksh65

hi kiran
welcome back and read AAO and SOL
will you update this one too? please dear



Will surely update this one by tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: mints23

Meri Kiran...🤗Thank you for the dedication darling... for such a wonderful and eventful update.
That was totally my pleasure and the most I could do 😳 I love this story... it is so intense and makes me wonder if I will be able to write such passionate and intense love story... with a little dark setting.
Of course you can. You already have that charm in you. You just need the want to write it and you'll be terrific with it. I count on it.Totally loved the progression of this story... and thankfully there was no MU with Lavanya in concern. But I feel for Khushi and the emotional chaos she is going through... he body always giving away her needs. Loved the fact that finally Arnav had bared his soul and clearly shown her his intent. And she has taken a step forward too... a big one at that. But what went wrong after this??
We're getting there with time 😊I feel bad for Abhay... that after what Khushi and Arnav go through... he is being only a backup for Khushi...
No comments :p Want to see how Arnav deals with this engagement... and so does Khushi.😃


Frankly I just love your existing banner... Its one of my favorites on the forum... but had been itching to try out something... hope you like it!!😳

[IMG=http://s30.postimg.org/5xgscyzdt/Eclipse.jpg[/IMG]

And lastly, thank you hell lot much for this beautiful banner..!!
This is too damn awesome.
I love it absolutely..!! 😃
Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: sreemeera

Congrats or the new thread..
Finally Khushi accepted Arnav's love and she realised what he said is true.
What made her to decide to marry Abhay? Even Anjali knows the truth??




We'll get there with time and Anjali only knows that Khushi is close to Arnav. Nothing more. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: sarun22

Just got the link to this one and i am loving it pearl.
Beautiful story and the characters you portray specially fiery n possessive arnav .
Very nicely written.
Do update soon



Thank you very much for liking/loving it 😃

The words mean a lot.

Will update today :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Congrats on the new thread,


The update was amazing and superb,

The flashback was awesome and very interesting,

So it was Lavanya the cow that kissed Arnav, I'm glad he told her to back off and put her in her place.

I can't believe RK the pathetic man asked Khushi to sleep with him, so happy Arnav turned up and threatened him.

Wow they finally confessed there true feelings and emotions, loving the bold Khushi she actually kissed him.

You are so cruel you ended the flashback at such a interesting point, lol.

The present part was superb, so Anjali and Arnav will be attending the engagement part I'm sure that will be very interesting.

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM xx



thank so very much..!!

It's always good to read a few more words. :)

Helps me with updates 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

A/N: I think I have already confused you all with the developments of this story so, before you start with the new chapter, l would prefer summarising the story so far.


STORY SO FAR

Starting with the prologue, we see Khushi visiting an extremely inert Arnav and invite him to her wedding. After a round of heated conversations Khushi finds herself on the couch with Arnav kissing her passionately and she complies back. The scene is witnessed by Abhay Singh; Khushi's to be husband and Arnav's friend.

Khushi walks out of the Raizada Mansion thinking this was her last encounter with Arnav as she's pretty sure Arnav wouldn't be attending the wedding functions and on her way to home she visits the flashback and recalls how did she end up in the present situation.

We further see that Arnav has bought Sheesh Mahal in Lucknow where a grand fashion show is to be held and Khushi is a struggling model who actually aspires to be a designer but the lack of opportunities pushed her into the modelling field. On her frequent visits to Sheesh Mahal in search of job, she gets acquainted with Abhay who offers him a role in the show. She's roped in after Abhay's efforts and trained under AR Technicians.

On the day of the final practice, a day before the fashion show Khushi walks down the ramp she comes to face Arnav Singh Raizada who looks smitten by her and Khushi too finds some strings of attraction pulling her to him.

In daze, she falls into Arnav's arms and is later manhandled by him where he criticizes her on the grounds of lack of talent and hard work.

This angers Khushi and she spends the entire day working hard to prove him wrong and succeeds as the show goes a hit with her own contribution of a flawless performance.

After the show as Khushi once again encounters Arnav, she realises that Arnav had deliberately criticized her to get her work harder and make the show a success. She feels obliged about it but is frantic that Arnav is getting more and more drawn to her. his touch works as a drug to her body and there is a palpable sexual tension between the two while on the other hand Abhay has started liking Khushi but is scared to confess.

During a next meeting in a caf Khushi is outraged when Arnav offers her to get physically involved with him and she slaps him swearing that she hates me which makes Arnav realise that his need goes deeper than physical need though he still is unable to name these feelings.

After the show, Arnav has soon to head back to Delhi and while he was having a me' time on the terrace of the palace, he finds Khushi having a merry time with Abhay is his garden which ignites a fire of jealous in him.

He walks down and with turn of events, drags her to his personal library where he happens to confess his feelings to her in the heat of the moment but later backs out asking Khushi to forget his words and storms out of the place, leaving Khushi in utter surprise and anger.

The same day Arnav flies back to Delhi with Abhay (who still hasn't expressed his feelings to Khushi). Judged by her performance in AR fashion show, Khushi is offered a job in another modelling company and has to visit Delhi.

In the company party, she once again come face to face to Arnav who has had a hard time ever since his returned back from Lucknow. Khushi's thoughts dominate his mind and he's in a serious mental mess.

In the party, Khushi witnesses Lavanya, another model of AR kissing Arnav and she's very hurt but later learns Arnav had to part in the kiss and overhears him saying that Khushi is all he cares about and thinks of.

This helps her to realise Arnav has missed as much as she had missed him.

After the party, Arnav decides it's time for him to put aside the pretence and act of indifference and he decides to share his feelings to Khushi.

He offers Khushi a ride back to home and Khushi agrees. On reaching Khushi's hotel room, Arnav confesses his feelings to Khushi and asks her to be with him. After much thought and convincing from Arnav's side Khushi finally agrees to give each other a chance to be together and Arnav kisses her passionately.

The flashback here gets interrupted and we find Arnav in his room where Anjali (his sister) visits him and confronts Arnav about Khushi getting married to Abhay to which Arnav doesn't replies but informs Anjali that he and she have to attend the engagement ceremony which would be held tomorrow.


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Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago

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