Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 2

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#951

Is Aman not Arnav's real bro or what? That douche bag Akash who is Arnav's blood brother tries to kill him and his bud saves him. Love Payal for standing up and giving it to Akash. What remains to be seen now is whether he rises to the challenge or continue with his cowardly acts.

Btw who is Priya? She is dead but can't recall reading about her earlier. Maybe I need go re read.

I love the way you described Kushi's reaction to the news, not daring to move a muscle in case if there is an adverse effect on him. I am so looking forward to her helping him since he cannot use that right arm. . .

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#952

all i can say about this chapter i can see only payal and her out bust wow i didn't expect this soon..,but better late than ever...feel good to read strong payal...the way u written very well hoping akash will change...i guessed it, akash will do something ,i thought he will be some damage to elections but not like this he wants his brother to be dead...hoping he deserves his punishment...

liked arnav and kushi moments...kushi at her age she is so strong and brave,she did not cry infront of arnav...liked her thinking..hoping soon arnav will understand kushis love...

love Aman buss...

thanks for the lovely chapter...

cheers..

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago

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NISHI

@nishi22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#953

awesome part...I Dnt like this akash...waiting for next...plz do pm me next part...

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

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Posted: 11 years ago

#954

amazing interesting update just loved it

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#955

Arnav is really lucky to have a friend like Aman. What an amazing bond they share. Very rare that we find such people.

You explained Khushi's thoughts and reactions beautifully. The part where she thinks that Arnav has taken precedence over her love for her parents was very well written. That's comes naturally i guess. He is the only family she has after all.

What a sick man Akash turned out to be. If he couldn't be loyal to his own blood, what else can we expect from him.

Liked how Payal took a stand.

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napk

@napk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#956

Chapter 33:

Oh I felt for poor Aman... he feels something for Anjali... he wants to correct the wrong and see her happy but still hes not doing anything about it... hope he does something soon before she gets married...

I was thinking that someone would attack his campaign but from that close was not what I expected... that was scary and I could see the fear in Aman's eye...

Khushi loves Arnav so much that she wants to give her anything for him to change his mind and love her... and the assassination news shocked her... the only time she chooses not to go with him and this happens...

Chapter 34:

Aman and Arnav... glad that they are there for each other, showing their support for the person they are and not judging each other... I really admire Aman for being there with Arnav...

Khushi's thoughts on her reaction and how Arnav would react was really touching... and also when he tells her the truth behind her parents death she puts Arnav above her parents... hes the only one who is there for her whether he loves her or not...

Coming to Akash... this guy has some serious problems... he doesn't want to fix himself... finds faults in Arnav and wants to destroy him... all he sees that Arnav has what he doesn't & wants to take away everything from him... does he ever think snatching everything from Arnav will actually get him nothing... I loved Payal here she didn't hide after eves dropping on his conversation and went to confront him and didn't give him a chance to belittle her again... she gave him good advice will they idiot atleast realize what he did? Does he think his mom will appreciate this?

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#957

aman is a friend for life he did at best his ability the bond the share is incredible hope he'll do something for Anjali he is effecting too he may like to deny but he has feelings for her too poor soul

somewhere I was sure about akaash how he hates Arnav moreover Arnav helped payal stood against akaash successful in career which akaash lost,fail in every step of life jealous from his little brother altogether made him furious that was obvious reaction

glad payal's stand for herself refused to take more that good from nothing man

arshi moments was good but not enough khushi is giving him all hoping against hope he'll come around soon the way she put Arnav above everything even her parents was very touching

nice job

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#958

Shweta, I was totally stumped reading this chapter, hence the delay in collecting my thoughts... Even now, my thoughts are all over the place. It is just amazing the way you have depicted the varying emotions of all the characters in the story... From Arnav & Aman's mutual trust & friendship to Anjali's genuine fear & sympathy to Arnav's mother's stiff reaction to Aakash's fake concern and finally Khushi's acute fear of losing the one man who has come to mean her life now... Her fear of losing yet again someone who is dear to her... Just loved the way you have captured each & every emotion in all these characters...

I wonder why Arnav is so scared of losing his feelings for Khushi on account of his past?? What happened then to make him so skeptical of his own feelings which have done nothing but steadily increase in intensity for Khushi?? Hopefully, we can learn about his past soon... I really hope nothing separates the two now, as I don't think Khushi will be able to handle any more rejection or separation from the only person who is her family now and whom she loves so dearly...

Another thing I would like to mention here, I just hope that with this incident that Aman, realizes that life is too short too wallow in grief for ever. He has mourned long enough for Priya, there is really no point in grieving further, she won't be coming back, but at least, he can live his life with someone who loves him a lot & he likes a lot too. Maybe this incident will give him the impetus he needs to propose to Anjali & marry her...

What can I say about Aakash?? He does not even deserve a mention for the dastardly cowardly act he has committed. He is beyond redemption now. I just hope, his hand in this comes to light & he gets his just deserts. Cannot say enough about Payal's guts & courage... Taking on Aakash like that, I just hope no harm befalls her for all her bravery that would indeed be too sad... She deserves her freedom from hell for good now. Aakash needs to be put behind bars without a second thought. It would be sweet retribution for both Payal & Arnav, nothing short of public humiliation & severe punishment will do for him now. He just cannot be let scott free. All actions have to be accounted for, especially that of a perpetrator in a homicide that too of his own kid brother.

Shweta, please take bow for spinning this wonderful & gripping tale, you truly have done a marvelous job so far. 👏

Edited by pixiegirl - 11 years ago

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#959

After reading till now ..my doughts..

Will Payal now file for Divorce are wait till voting day and then turn into witness against Akash if necessary .

Will Asr will know the truth and will he want to take any legal action.

Will the shooter who attempted assassination on Asr confess Akash name and will Jhangid turn this against his way..saying its preplanned one by Raizadias to get sympathy votes.