Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 2

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: _disha_

At this rate they will soon burn down the city ! 😆

🤣 Now I need to find a pic for "CITY ON FIRE"

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#972

Originally posted by: Crazy4Sobti

🤣 Now I need to find a pic for "CITY ON FIRE"

Nahi nahi ...city ko burn down nahi karte ... yeh hi kaafi hai !😆

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Originally posted by: _disha_

Nahi nahi ...city ko burn down nahi karte ... yeh hi kaafi hai !😆

OHMMGGG Disha!! You will not believe I had the exact same pic saved to post as well "Hi Five"🤗

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daljeet

@daljeet

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#974

Loved it, oh so Shyam is behind it!

I did doubt Akash.

But will Payal be alive to reveal this????

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#975

another amazinggg update dear...

enjoyed every bit of it...

eagerly waiting 4 more...

plxxx continue soon...

n thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#976

Originally posted by: Crazy4Sobti
One thing we can strike off our wishlist "Hospital bed" 😉 With a simple kiss they set the bed on fire 😳

Too good ... 👏 ⭐️

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Aplihs

@Aplihs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#977

What an update...and what a emotion you touched on...the day a girl realizes someone other than her parents have become more important in her life...sad but so true complexity of life.

Very very happy to see such a strong payal.I hope is able to shake up Akash that a meek one was never able to

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Saima

@naj84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#978

Originally posted by: kushiarnav1

me tooo😃..

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Me tooo

😆😆

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#979

In honor of one of my favorite Author's:

"I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel."

Maya Angelou

A good writer weaves a tale that makes a reader hungry to get to the end. The story starts to live inside ones head and the characters become someone who you discuss and debate over.

I have told you Shweta that I love this story so nothing new there but today I want to take a minute to applaud you as a writer. You flow of writing, your consistency, your development of each character, your ability to balance emotions, love and hatred is astounding.

Arnav & Aman: In most chapters we have been shown the bond that lies between them. So when the deep emotions that ran in this chapter were discussed, it seemed like a natural conclusion for these two. A sign of a consistent writer!

Arnav & Khushi: We have seen you plant the seed of love within Khushi's head and heart, we have watched it flourish and today we see it standing tall and proud. This is a sign of an author who has planned out her characters and been able to show the growth and changes a characters goes through in the story!

Akash & Payal: We all have known what an a**h*** Akash is from day one, but did we expect this, maybe, maybe not. The last scene between these characters I applaud you, it was very difficult to write and your words were bang on. This ability to surprise the reader, another strong trait of a good writer that you have shown throughout

Hands down one of the best stories on IF!

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 11 years ago