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Posted: 11 years ago

Shweta,

Thank you so much for the surprise update on my Birthday. My dear, you left me speechless. I am touched, floored and overwhelmed with your gesture. This got me all emotional, not just because you gave me a surprise treat but more for the fact that you stretched yourself to give this treat, as the update was very moving. That too, just three days after a shocking update. I know writing such updates is not easy.

You my friend are immensely talented and thank you for giving us this amazing and awesome story. I thank the moment I clicked on "Hopes and Ambitions" thread back in January and found this story as well as met a simple, humble and thoughtful person like you.

This truly means a lot to me. Thanks again for making my BIRTHDAY VERY SPECIAL.

My heartfelt thanks to everyone who wished me here 🤗


Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just got caught up with the last two chapters and I'm kind of at a loss for words on what has happened but I guess I really should not have been surprised since the dirty game of politics is at play here.
First off, I loved Arnav's frustration and Khushis sadness during their separation - really liked how you portrayed that. Lol at Arnav's answer to what happened to his old phone - if only Aman knew😆

Aman proved to be the hero and for him we are all thankful. Glad his instincts paid off and he was able to mitigate the harm that came to Arnav. And he even found out who was behind the Guptas demise - just love Aman!!! Now if only he could figure out his feelings towards Anjali.

Akash proved himself to be a despicable excuse of a man. I loved Payals outburst at the end and hoped that Akash pays heed to it though I think he has gone off the deep end already and is not in the right frame of mind for her words to seep through properly.

Arnav and Khushis reunion at the hospital was one of the sweetest scenes in the whole story. It just showed both their emotions and feelings so well - can't wait for Arnav to realize how deeply he feels for Khushi because though he hasn't voiced it yet, his actions have definitely proven it.

I'm loving this story so much with, with the characters and all the different dimensions at play here. Thanks for the PM - can't wait for part b!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a nice surprise for a Sunday...thank you Shewta!!!


Loved the update, awesome as always and what a shocking revelation!!! Can't beleive Aakash wanted to kill his own brother...this man makes me sick!😡 And Payal you go girl! That slap was right on and well deserved after all the things has done to her. This strong and confident Payal was an absolute delight. LOVE her!!!


Our Arnav is safe and not too bad of injury makes me happy...😊 The Aman and Arnav scene was so nice, their bond is so admirable. Aman from this story has to be the best from any story thus far...what a great character who plays such a important role here. Looks like he has lost Priya which explains why we haven't heard anything current about her. Something can actually come about with Aman and Anjali with this latest development.


My favorite scene in this update...Arnav and Khushi. Khushi inner turmoil seeing her husband in that state breaks your heart. The emotions were protrayed beautifully. She has realized what he means to her and there would such a hole without him in her life. Arnav wanting Khushi to get closure about her parents death shows how much he loves her even though he won't admit it. Love this jodi!







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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely early update. Shocked that Akash has ordered the hit.
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Posted: 11 years ago
If I cry will he shutdown?, if I bare my peaked intense feelings for him, will he freeze me out?
Oh the turmoil ... Beautiful emotions captured in words ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Shweta,

That was sheer brilliance, what a power packed update it was. For me this will be one of the best chapters. This update had all the key characters in it and every character was so vulnerable including Arnav and Aman. The emotions were running so high, that it left me all drained.

Arnav and Aman are two lost souls who sail in the same boat. They help each other maintain their sanity. They know every detail of each other's past hence no pretenses, guards or walls. They are themselves with each other. When it comes to their past, they both want to keep it as far away as possible and they help each other do that. Yet, they both want the other to heal and move on. Even without saying or expressing, they are each other's support system and strength. If Aman was in Arnav's place, Arnav would have done the exact same thing Aman did, push himself in front of that bullet. Their bond and camaraderie is instinctive.

After last update I was restless thinking about Khushi and her state of mind. All I kept thinking was that she will be shattered to see Arnav lying on a hospital bed and here she froze. I shuddered reading that scene and how much she restrained her feelings, when all she wanted to do was shower those on the man she loves, how she weighed every step she took, when all she wanted to do was take the man that has become her life, in her arms and relieve him of the every pain, physical and emotional. This girl just awe-inspires me with her persistence and resilience.

Khushi realized the intensity and depth of her love for Arnav. So much so that earlier her every action was to make this man fall in love and get closer to him. Now her every action or word spoken is not to push him away. Those tears that she shed are nothing but her love for this man. Khushi has finally reached the phase of love where she has crossed the boundaries she set for herself, broke the limits around her, pushed away her pride, happiness, pain and hopes. For all those are associated with Arnav and defined by her love for him.

My favorite scene was when their eyes collide and they communicate in the language that never existed between them. Arnav is not at a stage where he can give words to what he feels for Khushi. So physically intimacy and painting her are his way of expressing. That kiss was him telling her how much she means to him. She is his solace and salvation.

A standing ovation and bow to Payal. I always had faith in her and knew that she is an underdog here. Arnav and his career was one of the reasons why she tolerated Akash but with his heinous act of trying to get Arnav assassinated, he severed that reason and dung his own grave. He underestimated Payal and tolerance. Payal is a true example of women who are an ocean of patience but can create a tsunami when pushed up the wall.

I love how well you portraying strong women without going all feminist.

Here is a song for Khushi, Payal and Anjali:

"She's Always A Woman" Billy Joel

She can kill with a smile
She can wound with her eyes
She can ruin your faith with her casual lies
And she only reveals what she wants you to see
She hides like a child
But she's always a woman to me

She can lead you to love
She can take you or leave you
She can ask for the truth
But she'll never believe
And she'll take what you give her as long as it's free
Yeah, she steals like a thief
But she's always a woman to me

[Chorus:]
Oh, she takes care of herself
She can wait if she wants
She's ahead of her time
Oh, and she never gives out
And she never gives in
She just changes her mind

She will promise you more
Than the Garden of Eden
Then she'll carelessly cut you
And laugh while you're bleedin'
But she'll bring out the best
And the worst you can be
Blame it all on yourself
Cause she's always a woman to me

[Chorus:]
Oh, she takes care of herself
She can wait if she wants
She's ahead of her time
Oh, and she never gives out
And she never gives in
She just changes her mind

She is frequently kind
And she's suddenly cruel
She can do as she pleases
She's nobody's fool
But she can't be convicted
She's earned her degree
And the most she will do
Is throw shadows at you
But she's always a woman to me

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zkfkJCyqCBc[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazng
I nevr xpctd dis 4 akash
I hope he realise wat he is doin b4 it gets to late
at lst payal stood up 4 herself
n hope arnav realise he luv Khushi
Both d raizada brothers r in similar position in deir on twistd way n jst dat arnav is luckier n optimistic
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a fabulous update, loving the husband and wife bonding..your writing it beautifully!
So much happening, can't wait for the truth to unfold..

Amazing update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh awesome..im so glad payal stood up for herself... way to go payal..wohooo
the chap was awesome..arnav-aman interaction...arnav-khushi interaction was just too good...
really enjoyed reading this chap :)

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