Chasing Dreams- THD 8- CHP 43, PG1- End of Book1-Thanks You note- PG35 - Page 20

I am a new reader.. Got into reading arshi stories to ease my real life tensions.. Chasing dreams was one of the first stories I picked to read. I love your writing. You have a talent.

That came at am abrupt. Though I was prepared for a such end but didn't know it's the end in a chapter. Anyways, agree to your note. I have known someone similar in my life but sadly after being forced to be married, it ended up bad after few years. Now, both are indeed happy in their own lives. I guess it's very individual and they should never be imposed on what the society typically is.

Though I don't expect khushi to be married but I expected she would bounce stronger. Somehow, that didn't happen at the end of yours. She was helpless and broken but I don't know if it's her fault of accepting arnav being too accommodating or it's the consequences giving in too much to her parents. Somehow, her unability to put her foot down has influenced to all these and perhaps at a certain, she could be blamed as well. Maybe that's why love is blind, when you gives too much unexpecting, you end being hurt the most.




I'm not sure if you'll share the blog list as I'm not in your PM list but I would love to read more. Just wondering when book 2 starts, how old would they be?

Very well thought and absolute execution.. Keep writing!!!

It was an amazing the way you have written the story. The ending is still quite traumatising for me to digest - the chapter 42 in some ways even more painful the miscarriage . But waiting for the next book - & hoping somehow inspite of all Arnav's misdeeds Arnav & Khushi get married & are together .

waiting for the book 2...the last chapter is very emotional and felt very sad...

After having caught up with the story, I was extremly susprised by the manner in which arnav and khushi behvaed...where i could understand and sympthaize with khuhshi's love for arnav pushing her to give him a second chance, to give up her own intentions for marriage, and sacrificing so much, in the later updates i felt as if she was completlty loosing her own sense of identity: she was either doing something to please arnav or her parents and her own needs and idnetiy got lost somewhere within.

i guessed it, this is how the ending of the first phase because khushi is so vulnerable she hoped against hope for arnav to change but it did nt happen.
very practical ending loved it. waiting to read the next book on your blog.

I had a feeling the something of this kind would happen..
Waiting for book2
Pls pm me the blog link

you are one of the very few authors on IF who let us pause and think like adults. Not everything is a bed of roses and thank you for bringing that to the forefront in your story. Cannot wait to read the next chapter of their lives.

Very emotional ending book one, waiting for next chapter

an amazing ending to the book...even though khushi is heart broken i think arnav made the right decision ...he just wasn't ready for marriage...can't wait for book 2 ...continue soon...