Sandhir FF - Moments of Life Part 11- Page 35

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Its beautifull chp..i kus wan to gv u one advice if its okk with u..
While writing convo plzz use inverted comas cuz its difficult to read sometime..who is talkin to whom!!
😊 😃

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: -DamnedDrooler-

Hey no probs there glad u took time to read it😃.. it really nice of u to take time and read what I wrote means alot ..

let's see what happens or what these 2 comes up with ...

Sanyu is somewhat's in love already ...

will update soon ...

hey no worries on pm's

Well if u will write so much nice then u deserve na
Chalo abhi jaldi update karo

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Asapom

@Asapom

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Awesome update

Their plan backfired

Continue soon

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purnima209

@purnima209

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

awsme yar atlast sanyu and randhir marriage date is coming soon i m so happy and ha vidhushi should be soon neglect frm ur story yar

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supriya

@angelsfernandez

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

superbb, just luv it.

pls update nxt part

thanks 4 pm😃

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Rekha

@Rekha85

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Ansah di!!!!!!!!!

The update was awesum!!!!!!!!

Randhir was sunk in Sanyu laughter!!!!!!!

Why cant he accept that he loves her??

Anyways waiting for ur next update!!!!!!
Keep Writing!

With Love Rekha!

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29
Its beautifull chp..i kus wan to gv u one advice if its okk with u..
While writing convo plzz use inverted comas cuz its difficult to read sometime..who is talkin to whom!!
😊 😃

Sure any advice is so much welcomed and thanks for letting know where I can improve ..I will look into it when I update next time ...

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

Well if u will write so much nice then u deserve na
Chalo abhi jaldi update karo

🤗

yes boss soon

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Asapom
Awesome update
Their plan backfired
Continue soon

Thanks ... yes it so did

will do it soon

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: purnima209
awsme yar atlast sanyu and randhir marriage date is coming soon i m so happy and ha vidhushi should be soon neglect frm ur story yar

It is unless these 2 decided to try n break it ... vidushi is a good girl here