Sandhir SS: One in a million updated 29/3 Pg 13 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: suumi

Its amazing... 😳
Plz cont. soon

thanks sumi :)
Edited by _-NeHa-_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: themockingblue.




This is amazing man! Love all the three parts :D Update soon!! :))

hey!thanks :)
I loved ur dp .randhir *eeks*.. I m in love wid dis guy .Gosh! That edit is supab!
Will try to update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Prizi

Amazingg part
hayye their zip moment

glad u liked it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
I guess ur comment just got lost somewhere :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: angel_anisha

totally rocking man! update soon!

hey Anisha
Glad u liked it :)
Will try to update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Jaldi update! This is such a beautiful story with so many SanDhir scenes xD
Your so creative and imaginative xD
Please update as soon as u can :)
Love,
Tanya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: TashaForever

Jaldi update! This is such a beautiful story with so many SanDhir scenes xD

Your so creative and imaginative xD
Please update as soon as u can :)
Love,
Tanya

Hey Tanya..
Thanks for taking out your time n reading my story!
Glad u liked it.
Next part in few mins.
P.s : I remeber my words.Will pakka read ur works n comment.Just wait till my exams :)
Do PM me ur works!😃
Love
Neha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Part 4
He tried her cell for the umpeeth time..
No response..
Where the hell was She..?
It was 8:30 now n she hadnt return..
His anger was raising with each passing second..
What would he say to aunty.."unki pyaari si beti apne Boy friend ke saath gulchare uda rhi hai"
I called parth..
P: haan randhir..? Wassup..
R: sanyukta ko phone do..
P: wat? Kya mazak hai ye..she myt b home by now..
R: Dont try to act oversmart ok..? U were suppose to drop her..where. is. she?
R: calm down randhir. Yes i was going to drop her but she insisted me to go home as mom was waiting.but wait dude..she isnt home..she isnt at work where the hell is she..?
Randhir disconected the call .Threw his cell on the bed.
Took his bike keys and rushed downstairs..
"I shouldn't have done that..uss farzi ki baat maani nhi chahiye thi..its all my fault" Randhir thought
he got on his bike n drove like a maniac..
After 10 mins of search..he enterned a lonely dead road..
The scene he saw there tore his heart into millions of pecies..

He saw her lying on the floor.Blood oozing out of her leg.Her eyes closed as if reconciling sumthing..
He saw 3 boys move towards her ..
"Sanyukta " he screamed
~~~~~
Sanyukta's pov
for the first time in my life i felt so helpless...i didnt ask god for any kind of super power or sumthing..i just wanted my pain to reduce so tht i can get back and fight
i saw them coming towards me..
I closed my eyes again..sending a silent prayer to god..
As soon as i shut my eyes..i saw HIS face..
I didnt know why but even in this diffcult situation..Just HIS thoughts give me hopes..
I sumhow sneaked out my phone n dialed 100..
Those goons were dangerously close to me now..
"sanyukta"..i heard his voice..
"Randhir " i tried to scream..but i came out as a whisper..
Just like always..He was there for my rescue..
I looked at him ..
His eyes were moist.His hands clecnched into fists.
"Leave her" He said..
"Wat if we dont..and tu kon hota..." the goon was immediately cut off due to the hard punch on his face
He got the hold of the other two as well and beat the hell out of them..they were badly bleeding..He kept on hitting them till they fainted on the road..
I tried getting up but in vain.
He came to me..thats when our eyes met..
I could see that concern in his eyes.He took my duppata tore a peice out of it and wrapped it around my wound.
*Oucch* i screamed..
"just look at me..dont pay attention to the cut..look at me" he said..
All this while his eyes didnt leave mine.I kept staring at his brown orbs which were filled with concern and pain.His eyes..they said volume.
We kept staring at each other god knows till when.
It done" he said and took me in his arms..
Wasnt this magical? I was screaming in pain few mins ago..and now i didnt even feel a pinch of it..
Oh! They seem to be the safest place in this world to me..
To my suprise,he didnt say a word.I thought that he'll taunt me..or yell at me for such an immature behaviour..but Nothing.He said absolutely Nothing.
He carefully placed me on the bike ..took his seat.He carefully reached for my hands and without telling a word to me he locked them on his waist!
I didnt protest or quetioned him.
I didnt had strength. I looked at the speed of the bike.20km/hr. I chuckled.This guy is unbelieavble,at first he acts that he doesnt cares and now look at him..riding a bike like a bullock cart..so that i can b comfortable.
I shifted a bit and leaned myself on him, resting my face on his back.This gave me a soothing effect. I felt good.I dont know when sleep invaded me.
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Randhir's pov:
I felt sumthing heavy on my back..and a shiver ran down my spine when her soft lips touched my back.
She was leaning over me.Sleeping like a small child
i slowly parked the bike and took a sleeping sanyukta in my arms..
I took her to her room n made her lay on her bed.
He stared at her face.Even in this condition she managed to look so beautiful.
He heard some steps and rushed to the bedroom door ,stepped outside and shut it.
It was sanyukta's mom ..
Sm: arey randhir beta..sanyu aa gyi na..chalo hum sab dinner ker lete hai..main usse bula deti hun..
" Randhir..ma ko iske bare mein mat pta chalne dena..plz" mumbled a half sleep sanyukta during theie ride back to home..
"No" i screamed.
"Woh aunty..she is actually very tired.she said she wants to sleep and she had had food a few hrs ago" i stammered..
Sm: uff yeh ladki bhi na..kon samjay isko..chalo beta tum toh khalo
R: no aunty bhuk nhi hai..
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Randhir got in his room and started his sessions with his punching bag
Thoughts of wat could have happened to sanyukta if he hadnt reached on time was bothering him..
Those jerks..he could imagine them touching her..
"*Urghhh* i wont have spared them..they would have been dead by now..dont they dare touch my sanyukta"
he muttered to himself..
He lay back on his bed..sleep was far away ..
He glanced at the watch

12am it showed..
Before he could think wat he was doing he found himself standing in front of sanyukta's bed..staring at her..
HE slowly took out a bandage from the near by drawer.Went and sat at the edge of the bed.Very carefully he unwarpped her dupatta which was tied at her wound.
He could see the cut clearly now. It was deep.He could imagine the pain she must b going through.
"All coz of u randhir..its all ur fault" he mentally cursed himself
He then dressed her wound making sure not to hurt her.
He was feeling heavy.He kept blaming himself for Sanyukta's condition.He got up and went to the terrace.
~~~
Sanyukta got up with a heavy head.She was thirsty.she carefully got off the bed .
"OUCHH" she hissed in pain..
Thats when she noticed her leg..It was properly bandaged.
"Ma ne kiya hoga" she said to herself
Thats when her eyes fell on the calender..n then clock..she smiled to herself.It was a spl day today.
She drank water n was about to sleep when something..no someone caught her eye.
The terrace was clearly visible from her window.
It didnt take her a second to guess who it was..
Holding the railing.His eyes towards the sky.The moonlight shining over his face.His face Calm.He looked like a greek god.
She thought to go n thank him.

"Whats up Mr. mcp ?" randhir heard sanyukta say..
He instantly turned back to look at her..
"Wat the hell are u doing here farzi..?"
He looked at her wound..and before she could answer his first que..He started again
"What do u think of urself? A Superwomen..? U should have been resting now..dumb girl"
sanyukta saw him freak out..What was wrong wid him?
"Randhir i m fine..and y do u even care..?"she questioned
"I do dammit..it all happened coz of me..i should not hav let u stay"
She saw his eyes softing..
Now she got it..so thats the reason he was so queit.
"and now look at u..running around like a liitle girl..
She cut him off
"U dont scold a girl on her b'day" she pouted.
For a second randhir didnt get her.But then later he realised.
Its farzi's b'day" he thought
"Give me my gift now" she asked innocently..
She had newly noticed this side of Randhir..and really wanted to know it..She knew this was the right chance..
"umm..gift..u know neither i celebrate birthdays nor i tend to get into others celebrations"
There was silence for next few mins..
"We will act as frnds for today" she said..ignoring his previous remarks.
R:What..? No ways..
S:Y dont u accept that it wont b possible for u to do this.? She smirked
R:well..then challenge accepted.
Sanyukta did a Happy Mental dance..Thats wat she had wanted..to get this sadu out of this *Blame-Game* mode..
But then wat he did next was unpredictable.
He slowly bent his face towards her n pecked her cheek.
She gasped in shock! The sensation of his lips on her cheek made her blush.
She looked at him.Her eyes widening
R: Happy b'day sanyukta.
He whispered her and left smiling to himself .
He turned to look at her..
R: and by the way..u luk cute while blushing.
He said and winked..
To say Sanyukta was shocked would be a understatement.
"Friend banane ko kaha tha..Boyfriend nhi" she mumbled to herself and smiled.
Whatever it was She was loving it and was waiting to discover a new side of Mr. MCP
.

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Hola guys!
Thank U so much for liking my work.
Hope u guys like this part. Do leave me ur comments.It encourages me to write more :)
Sorry No pms this time..
I M not done wid my entrances still..
Please Bear with me.
Thank U :)
Neha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Neha!!!!!!!!!! U knoe wat ???? I was really eagerly waiting for ur update for so many days!!!!!!!!!
I really fell in love with this one yaar!!!!!!!!! And the last part...It was damn goooddd!!!!!!!
Ur ss makes me crazy!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
...frnd bnne ko kaha tha boyfrnd nai...
Baad mai bolegi :" Boyfrnd banne ko kaha tha husband nai!!" /olll 😛

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