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shipra.aqua

@shipra.aqua

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

I am sorry for the delay in commenting...

Such an emotional update...

I just couldn't stop my tears

What's going on, I mean how has it come it come to this...

Everything was so good & in a second, nothing's left...😭

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

This is a blow to Raizadas especially Arnav !!!!!!!!! the guilt will eat him that he was not able to stop the inevitable ... Nani & Anjali two strong womens in Arnav's life , hope they recover ... Khushi is forgotten , we cannot actually blame Arnav too ... i hope this incident doesn't change the dynamics of Arnav - khushi's relationship ... may be this accident is an eye opener to mami ...

well written... loved it

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Painfull & emotional update😭 beautifully written ..love it

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Gawd !!! What was this ??

I was still wandering in the garden of passion and love bloomed by you and then suddenly booommm...

I am still breathing hard after visualizing Arnav's plight. A man with such baggage is further inflicted to fate's attrocities..

Khushi felt so helpless not being able to comfort Ana and most importantly pacify Arnav.

This was a heavy update.. Could feel the seriousness till my spine..

Thanks for the Pm.

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sheena29

@sheena29

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

This is the first time I am commenting on your FF. Really appreciate your work and I must say that you are a prolific writer. There's such a flow in your story and it's unfolding brilliantly. In this update you brought forth the anguish, incredible guilt and helplessness that one feels to be alive and breathing when your loved one is struggling for their life or already lost it. Right now it's only Anjali and Arnav that are crowding my mind and no one else. Hope the siblings find both the physical and mental strength to overcome this.

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

That was sad. You have written it beautifully about the emotions everyone was going through.

Arnav is regretting he was so happy in the morning when his Di was suffering in the hospital. If he thinks Khushi is responsible for keeping him away from his Di, then that is bad for Khushi.

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

No u can't do this...!!! Pls save anjali she deserves loebely life ahead...!!! Feeling bad for all of them... Why..???

Here khushi forgot to take pills.

Now will arnav hate her..??

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Oh no... Yeh kya ho gaya... Achanak... Why fate has to play such game... Why life cant b easier... Feeling so bad for them... It's only natural for Arnav to feel this way... But its not the time to break down or feel guilty... I wish he had it in his mind that its not his fault, neither is Khushi's or their relationship's... But again we cant accuse him at this moment if he doesn't think this way... Nd I'm having a bad feeling that the outcome of this whole accident is gonna b worse... I hope I'm wrong... Plz plz prove me wrong di...

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Please dnt kill Anjali...

keep her safe and alive and healthy...

good one..

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Amazing update as usual! Arnav's rage was because of his concern for his Di and his own guilt that he was not there for her at the time of the accident. Anybody can behave irrationally when faced with such crisis. Right now he probably can't think of anything else other than his Di and his family. But eventually when things start stabilizing I hope he comes around and doesn't let Khushi go. However, till that time Khushi will have a hard time coping with everything... poor thing. But I fervently hope that Khushi doesn't get pregnant and is left alone by Arnav. That would be too retro-bollywood-ish. I can visualize Asha Parekh crying and being taunted at because she is going to become a 'bin byahi maa', but not Khushi. 😆

I'm glad that the twist in the story in this chapter is realistic and very well written. I love this story a lot and would not like to see it take the 'wrong' turn. I know I should not speculate so much on a story, but then I love it too much to not do that. 😆 Don't let my speculations and musings make you think that I want you to change the course of the story in any way. You are doing a great job with it anyway! 😊

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