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nadiafarjana

@nadiafarjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

sad but wonderful update
beautifully written...

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#312

a sad update but definitely a fantastic update dear

a heart wrenching update

arnav, don't do this to khushi

loved manu aunty - oh oh she stood out in this update - I never ever expected such a behavior from her - it was so nice of payal to have gone along with the flow of manorama - fantastic part

good to know that arnav is ok with anya and aman's tangle

great update sandhya

will wait for the next

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

tht was one awesome chap... it was sad..so soo sad...arnav's past was horrific...to witness ur parens death...nightmare...oh did aman n ana not hear anythng?? or did they...oh arnav u r hurting her more but letting her go :(

pls update soon dont make us wait too long

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Loss of words...very emotional update...
Well, do understand Arnav's pov..but some one needs to really put some sense into him.

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AUMM

@AUMM

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Oh no!!!!! I knew this chapter will be sad hence it took me few hours before I opened it instead of me running to a corner with my iPad.:(

I was in two minds to wait for another chapter and read both together but couldn't stop myself;)

At least Payal and Anya are happier at this moment:)

Waiting for the time when Khushi comes back with her great boyfriend, wicked;)

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

what a heart wrenching chapter! Arnav's emotional turmoil was very well written.

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sugandha mishra

@sugu2569

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#317

one question !!
would there be a new dawn in this story .. i hope u would bring a new savera aftet this shaam i.e. dusk
i am really hoping for it !!

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#318

m not surprised with all the heart break thing...arnav messed-up every thing in his emotional draw...don't know how khushi gonna bear this heart-break and the other thing she has some answering sessions with ana too...

and in between all these things, khushi-arnav both forgot about morning after pills...as expected...

well written...loved it to the core...

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#319

wow...this was one massive update and might i say the best you have written so far. you covered so many things, its hard to point out all the things that i loved about this update but mainly the way you brought out arnav's past was mindblowing. the imagery you created with your words was just wow (my vocabulary is so limited, sorry i cant praise enough, i mean to say much more).

the way you brought mami and payal together was poignant and heartwarming, i loved that scene.

and the arshi scene was angsty and sad but it was brilliantly portrayed. and separation in stories just makes them more of a treat to read (at least for me).

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#320

Awesome update... Loved it bt it made cry buckets 😭
Arnav is being an idiot...
This is nt d right way, someone needs to put some sense in him...
I m still waiting for d prologue part to come up...
Waiting desperately..
Update soon d nxt one.

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