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Kamala

@Kamala05

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Congratulation for new thread.

Waiting for next update eagerly, wanted to know the reason for Arnav's anger.

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Surleena

@Surleena

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Sandhya u do wonders with words somthn i cant even dream of doin ... Getn such amazingly written updates is just wow ... Crave for the next one even bfore i finish reading the last one ... Another author im n love with is meera ... Her comment on ths update is exCtly what i wanted 2 say but i guess words r nt me ... She is also truly amazing ... Both of urs stories updates r shat keep me goin the entire week ... Reading is my thing ...
Abt the prolouge im also worried like the rest of ur readers ... But im gonna wait 4 ur story 2 unfold ... Juzt dont sant anythn goin wrong n their paradise ... But i guess u still hav the dusk part so i guess v hav 2 brace ourselves 4 some twists
Also misn Anya n aman

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Bookmarking new thread!

Quite intrigued about how you ended the chapter with Arnav and the helicopter. The sensual scenes were so well written but can't shake the prologue out of my head either.

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

congrats for the new thread dear...

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rulama

@rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Sandhya,

Bookmarking!

Edited by rulama - 11 years ago

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Congrats on a well deserved thread 7! Looking forward to the next update to find out what why Arnav was so mad. Although I told you I'll stop speculating the reason, I can't seem to stop doing that. 😆

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Oyester09

@Oyester09

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

That was brilliant... Sensual and yet so beautiful. I could feel their yearning for each other... I have no issues with premarital sex... But unprotected sex definitely was NOT wise.

I do hope this does not lead to an unwanted pregnancy...

Now waiting for the fireworks and of course the reason that has brought in this wrath from a much Smitten few hours ago... Mr. Raizada.

Sorry I couldn't comment on the last couple of chapters.