I never falling for you....PLEASE READ THE NOTE PG 28

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: angleroops
wow a new ss
the concept is very nice
plss update soon

THANQU SO MUCH I WILL UPDATE SOON😳😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: marium-zamamii
nice concept kritz...👏
i thought its other way round...

hawt hawt guys in this...☺️

update soon...

THANQ 😳😳 LOL YES IT IS 😃😃

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz
Hey dear! This is amazing concept plz do continue it!👏
And update soon!!😉

THANX ALOT I WILL 😳😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
interesting concept...😃...but why manyata didn't return to her family , inspite of knowing that who she is??...& why she is hiding from uday??...😕

AWW THANQU YES .. ITS SHE SHE DIDN'T RETURN TO HER FAMILY IF YOU WANT TO NOE Y SHE DON'T GO BACK THAN .. PLZ READ THIS STORY 😳😳😳

Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: preya_radev
really lovely concepts too gd and cs r amazing too please do update the first part soon and thanks for the pm

THANQU SO MUCH .. I WILL N THANX FOR COMMENT 😳😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Anvijanya
Looks like a great story and has a great concept! Already liking Manyatas character on here. Continue soon 😃

THANX ALOT ... IN THIS STORY U LOVE MANYTA ALOT ... ITS MY PROMISE 😳😳

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

its a very good concept,wll be looking frwrd to it!!!!!!😊

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: pia.raha
its a very good concept,wll be looking frwrd to it!!!!!!😊

thanx pia ... 😳😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

hey guyz wats up here i give u i never falling for u so plz do comment n like ... n enjoy the update n ya its very important thing that i never told u yet its not like dek its something different thanqu so much now u have to read it 😳😳

i never falling for u ! Oops I Did

screen 1

Everyone come in a party hall there is a huge party in Taj hotel organise by MAJNU BHAI today its a engagement of majnu bhai's sister anjali ... everyone bizzy to meet there relatives frndz n many more majnu was sitting on a huge chair like a boss every one luk at him greeting him n gave him a respect majnu luk at his gang mammber n wispered in his ears ...

WHAT HAPPENED ?

BHAI EVERYTHING IS FINE ?

U MEAN HEROINE ...

YES BHAI EVERYTHING IS FINE

OK N CHECK THE SECURITY ONCE AGAIN NO ONE COME IN THIS PARTY WHO WAS NOT INVITED

YES BHAI EVERYTHING IS IN OUR CONTROL ..

GUD !!

IN OUT SIDES

security guard check every person and invitations

n in a sec

a black limousine stop front of the Taj hotel's gate everyone luk at the limousine like some superstar come out in this limousine

n then security guard come n open the car gates two legs were visible ...

everyone luk at her legs like she is a model or something ...

n than her hair will be visible

everyone luk at her ... n than someone shout

SHE IS SO SMOKING HAWT YR ... !!

she luk at the person who saying this n give him a killer smrick ...

n turn back to the security guard ... security guard luk at her n said

YES MAM UR INVITATION ?

I M ANNANYA SINGHANIYA ... N I HAVE A VIP PASSES

security guard luk at the passes n than her OK MAM U SHOULD GO IN

thanku !!!

...

ds take a aarti from uday uday band down n take her ashirwaad ...

ds: hume bhoth khushi hai ki aaj aap humare samne khade hai ...

uday : hume bhi bhoth khush hai hukum ...

ds: nhi uday jab aap hume dadishaab bulate hai na tho hume bhoth acha lagta hai

uday : thik hai DADISHAAB

ds: aaiye bethiye ...

they both sit on a sofa ...

ds luk at him n said HUME KHUSHI HUI JAAN KE KI IS BAAR BHI AAP jit gaye

uday luk at her wid surprise luk aapko pta chal gaya

ds smile n said or kon jit ta bhala ...

acha uday beta hum soch rhe the ki AAP JAGAT KO JANTA HAI NA ?

JAGAT SINGH !! HE IS INTELLIGENT SMART N GOOD LUKING HUM JAANTE HAI

dadi shaab smile n said hum soch rhe the ki unka rishta jaynandani ke sath tey kar diya jaye aapka ka khyal hai

uday luk at ds n said dadishaab agar apko ye rishta manzoor hai tho aap hum se kyu puch rhi hai

ds luk at him n said uday beta aap jante hai aapki raaye humare liye kithni important hai ...

uday luk at her n said hume koi problem nhi hai ... wid smile

ds luk at him n sad wid low voice hum chate the ki aap is ghar ke phele damad ban kar aye par ...

its kk dadishaab uday take his hand to her n ds smile lightly ... !!!

...

majnu bhai luk at the girl from head to toe

majnu stand behind her n said wid lusty luk

EXCUSE ME CAN I NOE U ?

SHE TURN HER FACE

HEY I M ANNAYA ... !!!

I NEVER SEE U BEFORE

I M ANJALI'S BEST FRND ...

but ? he said wid confused 😕 expression

n suddenly his gang memmber was vissible n said ... wispered in his ears bhai heroine aa gayi hai ...

she can listen every n each word properly

he luk at her ... n she gave him a cute smile like she don't noe about anything ...

he take excuse her n she agreed happily ...

he go outside of the party n she followed him

in outside ... she take her mobile n click every n each photo ... many peoples come out of the ship n they have a heavy boxes ... that was DRUGS ... n suddenlly her phone rang ...

majnu shout WHO THE HELL IS THIS ?

MAJNU LUK AT THE GIRL WHO WAS HIDING BEHIND A TREE ...

n she luk at her phn n she said SHIT !!!

majnu shout

CATCH HER !!!

she mummured MAR GAYI !!!

KRITZ 😳😳😳

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LazyBing

@LazyBing

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Awesome update! This is quite different from DeK as to how manyata is like but very interesting! So majnu is trapped on a drug case? Loving Manyatas character in here.. Can you please make it a little bit longer next time? Continue soon 😛

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