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Posted: 11 years ago

thanx alot guyz for ur support n love its really mean to me n firstly thanx alot ... for liking my story ...
thanx for appreciate my work 😳 n do comments in my story ...




so here i will update i never falling for you !Oops I Did ... so enjoy ...



in this story u find out



i never falling for you !Oops I Did
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he go outside of the party n she followed him

in outside ... she take her mobile n click every n each photo ... many peoples come out of the ship n they have a heavy boxes ... that was DRUGS ... n suddenlly her phone rang ...

majnu shout WHO THE HELL IS THIS ?

MAJNU LUK AT THE GIRL WHO WAS HIDING BEHIND A TREE ...

n she luk at her phn n she said SHIT !!!

majnu shout

CATCH HER !!!

she mummured MAR GAYI !!!

...

there is a huge party in mahel ya its a royal party ... every one was bizzy to meet each other n talking about there stuffs...

raj mata is bizzy to attened there guest n mhasbhaah members ... n sudden ... everyone luk at the enters door n found a dashing personality ... wid such a good luks.. when he entered in the party hall every person who was luking at him start mummring about him ... some were jealous some were drool on his charm he was pretending like he don't care ... but he noes very well how much he affect on girls ...

he go toward dadishaab n bend down take her blessing

she give him a sweet smile n luk at him proudly ... she said to him jite rahiye !!

he gave her a sweet smile ...

n he turn around n luk at his father who is talking wid mharaj of devghar he go straight to them ... n he bend down n take mharaj blessing ... he luk at him n proudly says UDAY !!! beta kese hai aap ..?

he luked up n small smrick cross his lips ... he said luk at his eyez uncle brij ... hum bilkul thik hai ... infect aapse milne ke badh ab phele se zyada thik hai ...

brijraj smile n said wid proudly jab bhi hum apko dekhte hai tho sochte hai kash humara bhi apki trha koi beta hota tho is mahel mai humari side lene wala bhi koi hota ...

uday luk at his dad n give him a evil smrick n his dad gave him evil smrick too ... he just change his expression he was try to pretend that he is really console about his would be father in law ... but truth is something that was undefined ...

uday luk at his would be father n law ... n said wid consoling expressions what happened uncle brij ?
brijraj luk at uday wid confused n anger luk n said did you noe why maa shaab throw this party so urgent ?

uday noe's this but pretend like he don't noe what the reason behind this party n said wid confused expression NO !!!

maa shaab try to tied a rope between jay n that JAGAT SINGH ... CAN YOU BELIVE IT ?

he noe's this very n hold his smile back as that was his plan ... n he again pretend like he is confused n srs WHAT DADISHAAB TRY TO MAKE A JAY'S RELATION WID JAGAT SINGH ? JAGAT SINGH WHO IS A ENEMY IN R BUISSNESS REALLY HOW CAN DADI SHAAB DO THIS ? RIGHT DAD

his dad noe's him very well n luk at him wid evil smrick ya don't worry brijraj i m alwayz in ur side ... he luk at brijraj wid consoling luk ...

brijraj luk at him wid smile n said thanx alot grijraj ...


...

in other side on the road ... CATCH HER ... !!!

a girl is running for her life ... n five mans running behind her try to catch her but unfortunatly she is too fast ... she shout top of her voice CATCH ME IF U CAN .. f**kERS ... IF U FEED UR MAMAS DRINK ... n she is continusly running ...

oye ladki stop if u not than i will shoot u ... they have a gun on there hands ... n sudden she stop of the bottom of road ...

smrick appear on his face .. n said wid lusty luk ... now who will save you from us there is no god ... n there is a no super hero

she turn her face n luk at him wid tashan ... I DON'T NEED ANY SUPER HERO ... COUZ I M SUPER GIRL WHAT I WANT I DID ... N LISTEN MR. UGLY DUNKLING... IF U THINK UR DAMAKI AFFECT ME ... SO I FELT REALLY SORRY FOR YOU ... n than smrick appeared on her face ... she luk at left side one truck come across front of her

n when that truck gonne ... she is disappear ...

EVERYONE TRY TO FIND HER BUT THEY LOST HER ...

now majnu bhai will kill me !!! oh god plz save my life ...

...

luk she is luking beautiful ...

jagat luk at up n found a most beautiful girl he did ever see

uday luk at jay wid smrick

uday n jagat were go toward her... jagat take his right hand n forword to her try to hand shake wid her but she just rolled her eyez and luk at another side her rejection make jagat sad once as he didn't excepted something like that ... he luk at her wid smile ... n said wid patienly

THATS NOT OUR FIRST MEETING !!

she luk at him n said wid smrick
AAP HUMPE KOI TRICK LINE THO USE NHI KAR RHE ..

jagat smile n said leave it !! n he luk at another side n said he was waiting someone else WHERE SHE IS ?

j n uday listening each n every word ... uday said wid smrick ... jagat my friend your would be wife standing front of u n u r waiting for someone else ... ?

j luk at jagat n said WHOM U R WAITING

jagat luk at her n said wid smile shanya ... !!!

...

oh god now where i m hiding my self .. she luk at the mantion ... i think this is the best place ... she try to go inside but unfortunatly two body guards were there ...

NOW WHAT MANYA THINK THINK she luk at another side one girl was standing wid her so called puppy n she have a passes ...

manya luk at up n said wid pleading eyez i noe what i m doing its wrong but this is last time sorry !!

she go toward n luk at her n said wid smile

HEY I M MANYA

she luk at her wid attitude SO ... ?

she luk at her smile n says .. wid pleading eyez SO I M SORRY

she luk at her wid confused expression for what ?

she take a stone on her hand hit her head hardly ... n she is unconsious ... SHE SAID IN LOW VOICE ...FOR THIS !!

she take her pass n closed her eyez n said I M SORRY ...
...

SHANYA ? uday said wid confused expression ... even j also confused

body guard intripute between them
SIR ... !! SHE IS SHANYA SINGHANIYA ... everyone turn to see her .. uday luk at her bottom to top ... n sudden one word flash on his mind n that was HAWT !!! no doubt she is ... 😉
n jay luk at her wid smrick so she is shanya jagat's friend ...
n other side jagat is shocked because this is not his shanya ... well because when she was small she alwys wear suit n she have big big glasses on her eyez .. but now luk at her she is luking smoking hawt !! jagat thought why the hell i get married with jay when i have shanya ..

in other side ...

she luk at uday wid shocking expression ... she thought no plz god plz ... if he noes who the hell i m than everything is finished ... i will keep him a safe distance ... one sec... if he is here than OH GOD !!! why the hell i m here ... ?

jagat hug shanya tightly

HOW R U ... ? THAT WAS SO LONG TIME WE MET ... !!

she luk at him wid sweet smile n said I M GOOD WHAT ABOUT YOU ?

jagat smile at her n said i m also good hey by the way i want to meet u someone

she luk at him confused expression

meet RAJKUMARI JAYNANDANI OF DEVGHAR

she luk at her wid sweet smile n said HEY !!

jay luk at her wid attitude n said HAYE ... !!!

JAGAT LUK AT HER N SAID

N MEET YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SING OF JAYGHAR

she turn her face wid full attitude n said HAYE MR. YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH she luk at him such a range of her eyez ... n she take her hand forword to him

uday luk at her wid smrick he meet his hand wid her he luk at her eyez n he found some range in her eyez ... n when she touch his hand ...some current pass there he luk at wid confused expression ya it is strange her one touch litreally affect him so much .. how can she affect him so much ...? when that was our first meeting ... her eyez .. her big brown eyez remined me someone else but whom i didn't rember ...

LADIES N GENTAL MAN

we r here n this is a party night n you noe what guyz we r so lucky today shanya singhaniya is here for entertain us wid her beauty full voice ...

when she listen this her eyez were just pop out she didn't expecting such think like that...

OH GOD !!! Y R YOU DO THIS TO ME ... FIRST MAJNU THAN THIS SHANYA THAN THIS YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH N NOW THIS... KIS JANAM KA BADLA LE RHE HO ... she thought wid pleading eyez ...

come on shanya come on the stage n entertain us

she thought ... what she is thinking that i m prostitue who alwayz entertain her HAD HAI !! as she rolled her ...eyez

in other side uday was noticing her ... SOMETHING IS STRANGE ABOUT HER ... he thought

...

all lights were switch off

n than start a song aslaam -e-ishq from (GUNDAY)


ishq hai vo aatish ghalib
jo jalaye na jale

she is turning her face her back is front of the audience ... uday luk at her wid smrick ... dadi shaab luk at her wid smile ...

uljhaye na uljhe ...
she turn her face n go toward brijraj n grijraj ... n they both start singing n dancing together

apni salamti hai mangti tujh se nazar oh nazeenen
salaam se nakaam se dil kayi baate bani

as they both try to flirt wid her ... n she start dancing wid a rythem ... on that party every guy just drool on her ... she snatch jay's spot light tonight ...

asalaame ishqkum yara ..
asalaam e ishqum
asalaame ishqum yara
asalaam e ishqum
oh mer adaayein teer hain
haan meri aadaayein teer hain
mera yaar nishana tum ..

she go toward uday n take her middle fingure on his chicks he luk at her eyez don't noe y but he pull her waist toward him ..she is luking smking hawt no doubt

asalaame ishqkum yara
asalaam e ishqum
asalaame ishqkum yara
asalaame ishqum

she push him aside n again she start dancing n singing the song ...

apni salamti hai mangti tujhse nazar ho nazzene
salam se nakam se dil kayi baate bani

everyone on the floor dancing wid her ...

aslaame ishkum yara
aslaam e ishqum ...

song come to the end ...

everyone clap for her ...

she just luk at uday ...he is luking at her wid such a killer smrick n she gave him a angry glare ...
...

dr shaab aap kya baat kar rhe hai ? dadishaab luk at him wid confused expression

komal come inside n luk at dadisaab wid tense luk

kya hua maa shaab

dadishaab turn her face n luk at komal n said

MURARI PAKDA GAYA ... !!!


KRITZ ...

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Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it so exiting...plzz plzzz update back soon ...eagerly waiting.
Edited by Asyalover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update. Manyata went to Mahel to hide. So Manveer come face to face . Manyata identify Uday but uday can't even remember Manyata.Omg murarit got caught. Thanks for pm. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow.. this is amazing kritu...

loved it..

pls update it soon




with loads of love
moumita
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Posted: 11 years ago
murari kitna late pakda gaya hai hyaar
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: babydolll

murari kitna late pakda gaya hai hyaar

update soon

🤣🤣 aeee meri murari ke bade mai kuch mat bolna🤣🤣🤣 teri samr ke tarah nhi hai ye 🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: perfection

🤣🤣 aeee meri murari ke bade mai kuch mat bolna🤣🤣🤣 teri samr ke tarah nhi hai ye 🤣🤣

m\haaye mera samar 🤣🤣🤣 kab khulega ye naya thread 🤣🤣
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Edited by babydolll - 11 years ago
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dekh isme ye tooh bhi hila raha hai 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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