Originally posted by: ShahSAIR
Read it.. Bt need some tym for comment.. Ryt now i m happy n my eyes r teary..ryt now Only i can say Her love is pure
ok ji here i goes.. Sbse pehley thankyou so much Seperation nahi horaha hai...
It was in my mind that something lyk dis wil happen n c my imagination comes infromt of me through ur update.. Aapney copy kr liya kya..
The last part where khushi's mind & heart was fighting with each other.. U made it so original it was lyk i m seeing it infront of my eyes..
Now update soon.. Tk cr.. Love u olways.. If i remeber something regarding update then dfntly i wil edit it.. Til thn tk cr
Hehehe Most Welcome Bahu. You know it right.. we always think alike. May be copy kardiya maine. 😉.. Thank you for feeling it bahu. I spent one whole day to write just that part of Khushi's cogitation. I am glad you liked it. Ok.. Will try to update soon.. lekin.. your FIL is coming home today. So he needs my attention atleast for two days. I will update on Tuesday. Love you too. Sure.. you can tell me anything at any time. Take care of your health.
Originally posted by: aayt
Superb it was
Khushi took right decision by accepting his request to hear his side of story n glad that made it clear for her how deeply he is in love with her
He is not one of those who show their vulnerability but he did for her sake for his love
They made it easy for Khushi to see through all n she took wise decision
Thank you for liking it. Love doen't need any explanations.. but our muddled mind needs proofs sometimes. When our mind took control of us.. we won't think emotionally. If Love fights over our mind.. nothing makes difference. Khushi just fought over her mind and took the decision to not leave him and to not lose him.
Originally posted by: madhu1210
lovely update!!
like the way Arnav openup his feeling and his pain to her..
wow!! from the first time he saw her he was lost in her😳
that poem explain very well khushi's state👏
finally they are together👏
pl pl update the next part soon with loads of arshi😛
Thanks .. Yes he needs to open up one final time to get their life back on track. He loved her from the moment he saw her. He was attracted to her from the second he saw her.
This contemplation is needed for Khushi to see the depth of his love. To realize the intensity of her love.
I will come with next update soon.. but loads of Arshi .. I doubt it.. Before giving all Arshi there are many things to clear. There are many holes to fill.
Originally posted by: hesinahi
nice update!
the poetry where the title(of chap) comes is so beutiful showing the fight b/w khushis mind and heart..
i know that u dont make separation for long..i guessed that khushi will understand him and am so happy that she indeed understood his love for her
poetry in ur note is too good...
with lots of hugs,
ur siri.
Hey Siri Darling.. Thanks a lot dear for liking the poem. You know me very well Siri.. that's why you guessed it right. Where did I write poetry in my note.. I guess I should search for it. 😆
Originally posted by: hesinahi
i liked the way arnav telling his every feeling for her from the day1 he met her..i enjoyed it...
so khushi might have loved it a lot...becaz it is lovely to hear from our loved one what they felt when they saw us first time and their every feeling towards us before we completely accept each other..
Siri you commented twice. I like it. yes he confessed his every feeling towards her.. it is good.. But about she enjoying his confession.. not right... becasue their love is beyond the confessions. beyond the expressions. She didn't change her mind after listening to Arnav.. She changes her mind after her contemplation. That's why I said.. she doesn't need any proofs.nor any explanations.
Thank you for liking it. The time I spent to get those lines is nothing after seeing your comments. I am feeling jubilant.
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