Pyar Ka Intezaar (Waiting for Love): Arshi FF: Thread 1 Completed - Page 6

awesome update..
looks like buaji is starting to smell love between arshi...
looking forward to read more..
thanks for pm. 😊

Awesome part. Really hating La 😡 Please update next part soon...

loved ur story dear...
plz continue soon and pm me when u update...

awesome chap 10 and 11...kiran first of all i must say that u r writing it too good...read earlier chaps in a go and these two just now...u r doing amazing job...must say u r writing it in finest english :)...i loved the way u have written khushi's inner thoughts ...then how she composed herself and replied back to arnav...each and every word of her shows immense caring nature of her...arnav listening to those concerned filled words and then softening down...loved it...i loved ur going jallebi here :)...hehehe...nice sense of humour :)

just starting this story want to read more pl pm me when u updt am obses for arshi am also following deepthiya latesest story TVK realy she is amazing writer thanx

Originally posted by: lalarukh

awesome chap 10 and 11...kiran first of all i must say that u r writing it too good...read earlier chaps in a go and these two just now...u r doing amazing job...must say u r writing it in finest english :)...i loved the way u have written khushi's inner thoughts ...then how she composed herself and replied back to arnav...each and every word of her shows immense caring nature of her...arnav listening to those concerned filled words and then softening down...loved it...i loved ur going jallebi here :)...hehehe...nice sense of humour :)

arnav is lonely here...and the way u have written his past...his parents sacrificing there lives while saving him...although its not his fault...but his pain of being left for this harsh world...facing it all alone...beautifully written dear...

part 1 of chap 11 ...again very nice...the outfits u selected for the party...cool and hot in a way ;)...i loved it the way khushi all bubbly with sheetal ...i am liking there friendship...now i under stand y arnav so much caring towards sheetal...as he knew that she is young and just being used here by her sis and mom...

loved the way he defends khushi in front of lavanya...

both forsure lonely in their own sense and circumstances...and i think they both coming close ...as they both deprive of love ...so something similar is clickied in between them...i liked them coming close at slow pace ...slowly slowly they opening up...

kiran i am really happy to see the way u r writing it ...and i am enjoying it loads :)...best wishes dear

Originally posted by: lovedrops

Thank you Lala... I am so happy after reading your comment. I scrapped you before reading this comment. I am out of words that you liked my writing. It helps me get better.

Awesome update...loved their lovely talk and their budding relation.

Awsum update...
They both r in love...