Pyar Ka Intezaar (Waiting for Love): Arshi FF: Thread 1 Completed - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awee its such a sweet update...very light hearted...romantic in its own sense :)..
the gazebo...fairy lights...she in red and he standing in his usual style there...she checking him out...hahaha...cool ...poor arnav he wanted to do so much with khushi but as that hug caused so much havoc what is going to be her reaction if he kiss her on cheeks...infact RED cheeks:)...beautifully written...very very sweet moment between the two..

he worried abt her ...obviously lavanya is going to eat her up ,she that crook..but hope khushi keeps repeating his advice to her in his absence :)
i loved the way khushi being worried abt her feelings...good to c her sharing it with arnav...both unknown to these kuch kuch hota feeling :)...and when he laughed at lavanya words ...lovestuck teenagers...that moment was aweee so sweet...i can imagine his big smirk /smile right there on his face :)

hope payal not stupid here...she needs to be real good friend ...infact sensible friend...as opposite side lavanya is hell sharp...she can manipulate things very badly in her favour...so khushi needs a sensible friend with her...
i loved the dialogues between khushi and mohan /asr...hehe..very nicely written yaar...very good :)...perfect timing of humour and all...
so she is having mb now...hope they stay in touch more now and less communication gap between ..kiran very nice update dear...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
That was beautifully penned. Light and romantic but just a line to keep the suspense going about the mysterious past ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very well written I am new to ur ff , can u pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
just read chap 10...its too god...i like ur way of writing the correlations of arnav s memories whenever he is with khushi...i liked khushis reasons to ignore arnav..and her jealous towards sheetal...liked arnavs desperation to make khushi as his khushi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lalarukh

awee its such a sweet update...very light hearted...romantic in its own sense :)..

the gazebo...fairy lights...she in red and he standing in his usual style there...she checking him out...hahaha...cool ...poor arnav he wanted to do so much with khushi but as that hug caused so much havoc what is going to be her reaction if he kiss her on cheeks...infact RED cheeks:)...beautifully written...very very sweet moment between the two..

he worried abt her ...obviously lavanya is going to eat her up ,she that crook..but hope khushi keeps repeating his advice to her in his absence :)
i loved the way khushi being worried abt her feelings...good to c her sharing it with arnav...both unknown to these kuch kuch hota feeling :)...and when he laughed at lavanya words ...lovestuck teenagers...that moment was aweee so sweet...i can imagine his big smirk /smile right there on his face :)

hope payal not stupid here...she needs to be real good friend ...infact sensible friend...as opposite side lavanya is hell sharp...she can manipulate things very badly in her favour...so khushi needs a sensible friend with her...
i loved the dialogues between khushi and mohan /asr...hehe..very nicely written yaar...very good :)...perfect timing of humour and all...
so she is having mb now...hope they stay in touch more now and less communication gap between ..kiran very nice update dear...:)


Thanks for the long comment Lala.. I am very happy that you are following my story so close. You are right, how can we not imagine Arnav and Khushi in the romantic scenes. The complete scene that wrote was playing in my imagination like a picture while writing it. I love them yaar. Payal is a good friend and will become more than that, we will see.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hesinahi

just read chap 10...its too god...i like ur way of writing the correlations of arnav s memories whenever he is with khushi...i liked khushis reasons to ignore arnav..and her jealous towards sheetal...liked arnavs desperation to make khushi as his khushi...


Happy to see you back on thread Siri (hope you don't mind). Looking forward for further comments..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Awesome awesome chapters..Sorry been held up with other stuff, didnt get chance to read chps..
I LOVE LOVE the red dress..She must have looked like cute red button..The best I liked is the way he tried to make her understand to talk not to ignore.

And my favorite scene is, infact 2 scenes, when he involuntarily walked to her in gazebo when she was rattled with questions and second one is the way they slowly held hands and Oh forot one more scene, he gesturing that he will call...

Awww how sweet can he get...

I will kill lavanya if she gets inbetween them...I love protective Payal and I would like to see what she is going to do. Looks like Lavanya will crew Khushi's brain and Payal will witness all these and will later tell Arnav...My brain working super fast..

But I will shut my prediction and wait for you to unfold the story..

Love to Love...LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepthiya

Awesome awesome chapters..Sorry been held up with other stuff, didnt get chance to read chps..

I LOVE LOVE the red dress..She must have looked like cute red button..The best I liked is the way he tried to make her understand to talk not to ignore.

And my favorite scene is, infact 2 scenes, when he involuntarily walked to her in gazebo when she was rattled with questions and second one is the way they slowly held hands and Oh forot one more scene, he gesturing that he will call...

Awww how sweet can he get...

I will kill lavanya if she gets inbetween them...I love protective Payal and I would like to see what she is going to do. Looks like Lavanya will crew Khushi's brain and Payal will witness all these and will later tell Arnav...My brain working super fast..

But I will shut my prediction and wait for you to unfold the story..

Love to Love...LOL


Ofcourse your brain will work so fast Deepu..you are amazing after all. And you don't have to say sorry fro me.. I know how hard it will be for you... with the emotions going on with TVK... Oh man..I am stuck in that tooo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
How could I miss this great story!
I read all the chapters in one go. Wonderful storyline! Arnav is so protective of Khushi. Lavanya is evil and some kinda hold on Arnav because if his past.
She will surely try to take advantage but I am sure she cannot keep Arhi apart.
Waiting for next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all ...i m so happty hearing u call me as siri...my close friends call me like this...read chap11...too good...i didnt expect khushi asking him directly about the unknown feelings she has for him..so innocent...and too cute...in this FF i feel khushi like a 19 years innocent girl and ASR is so matured and caring man of her...khushi is looking too beautiful in the red dress.i could see her...ur description is too good...wow...arnav is controlling him a lot not to kiss and hug her..😳...he is so worried to leave her and go...and khushi too..now only they are coming to the track...i liked payal so much..khushi is lucky to have her as friend...lavanya...i dont want to talk abt her..i hate her...wow ..arnavji has gifted cell phone to khushi..and it is so funny conversation b/w khushi and mohan...i enjoyed it a lot...LOL..arnies paper notes and the way he wrote is too good...he asked her to wear that dress and later regretting too for making others also to see her...enjoyed his feelings for khushi...and his compliments in the garden...totally very nice update...i cud come out of TVK at least for a while when i am reading it...

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