ArHi FF #1: Best Kept Secret: Chapter 7 up!

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Thanks for the PM. Interesting concept. 😃 Well written.

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

wow it's getting interesting day by day

loved the update as always dear 😳

eagerly waiting for the next part

thanks for the PM

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

interesting story...!!!!!! khushi is having baby thorough donor..!!!!!
she is hiding something..pls pm me next time.!!!!
accept my buddy request..!!!!1

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

loved d update
is arnav d father
continue soon

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

It's a nice and different concept.

Your story and writing is nice and intriguing.

In the first chapter I was thinking that may be khushi's son is Akash's. That may be Khushi is not his mom. But than that is not the case now.

Arnav was attracted to Khushi all those years ago and so much that he had not been with any one in 6years. He is still affected or more as his hope rises very time he thinks of her but the thought of her son put a check on him.

Khushi to was affected by him and still is.

Chapter 2: loved the sweet bond Khushi and Lav shares and their sweet and fortitous talk. Which even send Arnav's baron on override and made him doubt his own judgement and knowledge that Khushi and Lav could be together. Hahaha.

I have another theory now. I think khushi's donor is Arnav, since she was fearing he would recognize the growing resemblance in his son and Arnav himself felt attracted and an u're he like never before to hold Arush.