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Posted: 11 years ago
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well this was bound to happen
all this self hatred
and her remembering those times cant be eays
no wonder she isnt getting peace in her sleep either
what she found out is just tip of the iceberg
there are more painful memories for her to recall
hope she can hope with all the info overload
i rather she not make things worse for herself remembering this past of hers
okay maybe that wont happen
sure he made her cry gave her too much pain to recount and what not
but at the end of the day its him who soothes her too
ahhh how ironic that is
jisne dard diya wohi inhe marham karta hai
why khushi well the answer you shall know soon
maybe because your heart fell for him once and again now
guess some things are meant to be or not
true what she said he is too deeply etched into her
and now its not possible to get him out
not without her hurting
but he would want to avoid hurting her more
if he had his way he wouldnt let her remember all this
but he is promise bound now
that was just la and she is this restless
wait till she knows the rest
am worried for them more as her full past with him is slowly coming out
ahhh yes only one name on his lips
that are hers oh man if only
but its too late for that now
yeah sure she is fine
after remembering those painful days
what do you think arnav
but of course he would ask no matter what
sorry he shall have to say till forever
well what else can he say
so he did say about the miss kiss
she is right in what she said too
he had right to choose whom he wanted to marry
what he didnt have the right was to hurt her like that
make her dream of something he couldnt give her
time for him to give those answers now
you fighting your heart cost her heart break mate
love for him of course cant be real
that father of his man
he ruined it all
and he too followed in his footsteps almost
leading two women the way he did
that he had no right to do
and considering he hates his dad he sure was almost gonna do the same
did he think about that
unfortunately he didnt did he
of course he loved you but just didnt wanna admit the same
why because ASR didnt wanna admit it
but he sure wanted you to admit that you were affacted by it
and in the end making not only khushi cry but la too
of course making life that much harder for himself too
he is his own biggest enemy i tell ya
i know she is right if only he didnt do what he did
they did paid the price
la and her dreams got broken
and all due to him
like i said he broke too m,any hearts
and not only he paid the price for it so did these women
can you blame her for saying all this when its the truth
you cant get away with it now
she forgave you then but dont mean she cant question you
as if he would grovel khushi
he believes in doing it the other way around dear
what khushi let her say it
whatever she is saying is true arnav
but no you had to be a coward and just mess things
for all things said and done he was being right coward by not admitting his feelings
ahhh the damage he did in the past effect the present
and might even effect their future
if they have a future together that is
ahhh yes he did send that creep in her life
thnax to that her life is ruined as well of his di
not to forget he had the audacity to question her on her engagement when he himself was gonna get engaged
why shouldnt she have gone and gotten engaged
that is the problem arnav you never think
for a man who claims to have such shaatir dimaag you never used the damn thing
and due to that you just made her life hell
and yes he never did learn from his mistakes
had he done so maybe they wouldnt be having this discussion
yeh baat toh sach hai
he didnt want her but didnt want anyone else to have her either pathetic if you look at it form her pov
yes but she didnt tell you
if noly she had then her life wouldnt have been ruined from there
but she had to think about you and your sister
and consequence of that well we all know dont we
i know she shouldnt have hidden this
at least then she would have been spared all that trauma and also this too
i cant even begin to think what their break up did to la
but maybe it was better for her to cry now
instead crying all her life as khushi seems to be
she got out in time you could say
tell me about it she was trying to get away from them
but guess that wasnt meant to be damn
ahhh dammit she is close
payash wedding is gonna bring more trauma and truth out for her
and that is the beginning of all those tortures again on her by him
how will she deal with that period
and how will he handle her questions to him then
guess shall find out
hmm so out to ruin his chacha
well one thing he can do at least
oh boy this is getting more hard aint it for them both
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well what else did he expect yaar
she just had to go through a lot of painful memories
and most of which were caused by one man only
and that was arnav himself
give her time and some space too if needed mate
i know if this is how she reacts to lesser of pains given by him
how is she gonna react to those memories he mentioned
damn she is never gonna speak to him then
but then that shall be her choice
and you cant do anything about it either too late
of course she wants to avoid him after the revelation
so time for chachaji to go down
well thats one thing in his control
even if the rest isnt man
no dont you dare think that khushi
yes that man has given you so much pain but you cant punish those who care for you by wishing that
your babuji and amma buaji
whats their fault in this dear
punish him and not yourself khushi
you are stronger than this and there is more lots more am afraid
ahhh he came seeking her here too
damn she just cant get over the painful memories and i wouldnt expect her to that easily either
nothing to be happy about munna
your khushi di would prefer to be away from him and alone than be with him
well cant even bare her ignoring you can we mate
what about when you did same to her and yet she forgave you then
wow he really wants to speed her memories
but hope he dont make it worse for her
for him its too late now
not another set of painful memories give her a break will ya
could this not wait for a while mate
but of curse better get it outta the way
if she wont faint what else would she do
dance in joy to the way you have treated her
ab kya comfort denge
isnt it enough you have ruined her life
damn i have gotta stop being so harsh to him
but he just brings out the wrong side of me
ahhh that came to light too
how she had to break her parents heart
kash woh waqt change kiya jaa sakta but it cant be
why does he do anything without thinking and jumping to conclusions dear
because he dont know how to use his shaatir dimaag though have doubts if he has one
so due to that you ruined her life
did you really think by doing that your di would be happy for long
and we all know she was heart broken eventually
but of course he didnt think all that
he just wanted to punish her and himself too
and you just believed that lying cheat just like that knowing if he can lie about loving your sister he could be lying about this too but no you didnt pause to think rationally again mate
that is the million dollar question
why didnt he ask for her side of things
probably because he was afraid you would say the same
or maybe because he was ASR by then and ASR doesnt ask for explanations he just punishes
why mince her words now
its all done and dusted
she can say that much at least
i know if only he thought about it
but what does he do
not think just act and then suffer due to it later
sorry dear you just fell for a man who cant even trust his love
her anger is justified
she never got to do this before their re marriage
now they can go over this fully
her demanding the answers and him giving them too
there is only so much she can struggle against the one she loves
but is it safe to trust her heart to him again
what if he does the same again
yes she was his guardian angel for sure
she was the only one who knew
and even then he didnt realise how much lost he would be without her
oh but he did return dear and managed to separate you both again thanx to ASR
he didnt tell her how he came back and ruined it for them again
good question how can she still wear that MS
she still dont recall your no show mate
well that aint hers anymore since he never came
this is what you were missing but
well she has nor rights on them does she
but there is still more to find out
more of past which she gotta uncover
and this could just push her over the edge
though i hope not
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so at least something is going in his favour
his chacha is on the streets
just like they were at one point
is it sunheri come to meet him
well who else can it be
hmmm will know wont we
now who is this new character yaar
hmmm seems she knows arnie
but how where when why
ahhh his chachi thats who she is
of course she came to see him
she seems to have taken after arnie
to see the woman who cared for him in his childhood on streets cant be easy
no arnav hasnt forgotten you
how can you hate this lady
seems she too was an innocent like his mother
ahhh she has come to ask for a week
well what can he do in a week i wonder
something which ever arnav wants to know about
seeing her am sure his need for revenge might just go away
ahhh not her chacha but his chachi needs time
and he gave it to her too
so she can shift easily
hmmm she seems to be made of sterner stuff it seems
no he doesnt believe in god
why i wonder she asked him about this
ahhh they have no kids
guess what they say is right
bhagwan ke yahan der hai andher nahin
and that just got proved too
he did get better upbringing than he could have had
the only minus point really was his mother
i know the less we say about that wicked witch the better
her sons were rotten through and through
and so was she that she couldnt control her sons for their inadequacies
that woman man seriously wish could do something to harm her
at least his mother didnt suffer like his chachi did
well but then she took her own life made her children orphans
so maybe her chachi had it better
no she didnt not really
but she could take it better than his mother
guess was used to it right
his chachi is of course right from her pov
she escaped the agony of it all not her kids though
oh man his chachi had it worse than his maa
and i hope no one else have to face what his chachi did
how did she cope with it all
how did she not kill her husband long before
am surprised she didnt man
wow she hit right on target this lady
no you are right he didnt kill himself but was killed by your husband
well his chachi is so bang on aint she
he did kill his brother course he did
oh god thats horrible
he injected his wife so she cant stop him from throwing arnav and anj out
thats really pathetic
gosh these malliks were just mean people
and i dont mean his mom or chachi they werent really malliks
guess she is right
they are best away from those malliks
better the more far they are
all was well with them till shyam happened
ahhh yes anj is lucky she isnt with that creep of husband
at least she escaped didnt she
thank god for small mercies
aww this family reunion was so cute
chachi is funny when she said that about mami
good question she asked
arnav was married at one point but not now
yes only she can make him so soft and tender if only he hadnt let go of her and his happiness
dude she is nothing like your dadi please dont insult her
yup she is beautiful inside and out as he knows too well
well you are her bahu too of sorts anyway dear
damn man that was just hard to see
shame she is leaving would have been nice to see more of her
yes he did do well but not when you know what he did to khushi and himself too
so his chacha is gonna die soon
and this prolonged illness sure will make him suffer ahhh what justice
she is still gonna take him
well thats her prerogative
i knew he would say that transfer the property in her name but she didnt want it
if only he didnt punish himself and khushi for their sins man
hope he goes quicker i rather this lady be with raizadas
maybe by that time khushi will be with him too maybe
since to meet his chachi she is sweet lady
and man did she go through a lot or what
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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not her again man
dadi is back too
well best to tell her how wrong she was
and that her sons were at fault not anyone else
hmm he does care for her
despite of what she did to ruin his life
and not to mention his wife
ohhh so after this she wont be coming
well thats good to know
we will be rid of her too
khushi all shall be revealed soon
but will it be something disastrous
i blooming well hope not
why are you so surprised they are here
oh wait she would be
considering he got rid of his dadi from his home
mami was so cute there
some things can never change though
she still cant shut up and stop spouting crap
especially when she knows nothing of the truth stupid woman
usually its the elders who keep the family together
but this woman believes in breaking it
finally he stopped her
and he better have or else
oh hello what proof that was nothing you thought it to be
if only he had married her
well time to tell her about it
all that poison for wrong person
when it was her son who was wrong not garima
shocked are you with your beloved (pathetic) son real truth and face
i cant believe she still has no shame
god these malliks what to say about them
i cant believ it she is evil witch
hope she rots like her sons
no compassion she has does she
man am tempted to swear at her but dont wanna waste my breath
no sorry you son is at wrong
and she still wont accept it
and she never will
he is right in what he said about his father
if he is fit to be called that
her mother was freed and his dad was week too
why else would he do what he did
i know they are so right in telling her off
how could she do this
your sons were scum for sure
and dont you dare even praise them
so tell her what her second son did
oh but wait dont you wanna know who he killed
not what you are thinking
ahhh no he is saying the truth
he killed his elder brother would you believe it i do
nani was so right to question her upbringing
hers was screwed up unlike garimas
ahhh just love how they are taunting her
she deserves it all
well they are rid of her once and for all i hope
she can come for that snake but not for her grand kids pathetic much
stupid woman still singing praises of that snake
he himself confessed to it all
her sins have no limits too like that of her kids
so taking what belongs to his ma and wife again huh
cant be good surprise for sure
meeting dadi never can be right
she isnt manhoos but you sure are witch
well yes so true you cant be a dadi
yup its all coming back
the last of it all i hope
yup it is all coming back to her finally good or is it bad
oh boy that sure had the effect i thought it would have on her
yes God caught up with HIS justice to anurag what about this lady though
oh dear so this is what caused her to fall
but who was the woman they mentioned
ahhh dont know who she was wait was it even him
probs thats what led to her fall
no no no this cant be true
shessh this is bad
dont tell me she lost her baby
she was pregnant
damn what a place to stop dear
oh well shall wait till then
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new thread !!! emotional update.. loved the way arnav arranged things for suneri and her daughter..

thanks for mail 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You touched my heart and made me cry...this man has come a long, long way. Thanks to Khushi he is now in touch with his real self- a person who puts others before himself and is fiercely protective of his loved ones.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this update brought tears to my eyes..
don't have words...
but am very happy that arnav took the responsibility..he is a changed man
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arnav is really the best brother.
Asha is lucky to have him.
His father and uncle were monsters.
No wonder he is ashamed of them.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new thread
that was a brilliant and emotional update
wow arnav has really change
and poor girl=//
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread, this story deserves many more.

Chapter 21 was brilliant yet so emotional and heart breaking,

Honestly reading the update bought a tear to my eye, it was very touching.

Sunheri has had a very hard and difficult life, especially with her daughter being ill as well.

Arnav is such a gem of person the way he has promised to help sunheri and her daughter was just amazing,

I can't believe it's Arnav's chacha that killed his own brother, I hope Arnav deals with him well.

Love the part where Arnav introduced himself to Asha as her brother, a beautiful moment.

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM xx

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