sandhir ff...always together part 78 pg 141 last part and imp nte

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Anisha Singhal

@AnnyLaughaholic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#921

Aah- so cute and romantic!

Loved it..

Finally the last part... but cant wait for new parts!

And pls upd Just for u too na.. *pleads*

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@..Mellifluous..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#922

heya anisha...

awespme part yar..i loved it...

u penned it beautifully...

sandhir were amazing ..

niha and vradhan marriage is over...

lovely one...

parth n vids marriage is on the way

arohi n saree one is hilarious..

i think next sandhir baby hoga..

am looking forward to it..

thanks for d pm!!

love,harika..keep smiling..

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shalini_shakti

@shalini_shakti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#923

Awesome update...!!!
Waiting for last part...!!!

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Anisha Chowdhury

@chowanisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..
heya anisha...
awespme part yar..i loved it...
u penned it beautifully...
sandhir were amazing ..
niha and vradhan marriage is over...
lovely one...
parth n vids marriage is on the way
arohi n saree one is hilarious..
i think next sandhir baby hoga..
am looking forward to it..
thanks for d pm!!
love,harika..keep smiling..

yar harika tujhe sab pata kaise chal jata hai??????😲😆humesha tu gues kar leti hai...per koi nhi ...chalta hai...thnks a lot and keep reading...😊

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#925

Hi Anisha
dekhna mein kitni late hogayi:(

coming to update!
Tu kitna achha likhti hai!
Prachi khush hui!😃😛
Loved this part!
Now Vid and Parth ki shaadi! YAY!
And also neharika ko sab yaad aagaya THAT's AWESOME news!

Eagerly wsaiting for ur next part
UPDATE SOON!

-In Hope Of Loads Of Updates
and Love
-Prachi

PS:Unressed my comment on pg.136

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Awesome update 👏

So now vids & part will get married😊

Waiting for last part & plot of new always together

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Nia | Rii

@anyania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#927

No. U r not ending this. I love this so much. I mean part 77 is not a calkwalk. Nd i will be missing this. Well this part was full too romantic. Nd for the first time i m telling this DO NOT UPDATE SOON. sholly.

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Anisha Chowdhury

@chowanisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#928

ok so the LAST PART of my ff...thnk u so much guys...love u al...

part 78:

after 2 years...

rd ws in a meeting discussing about his next project which wud b the mst expensive one...he hd gven al his strngth to crack the deal wid the foreign delegates...and here he ws discusing his biggst project ever...suddnly his phn strts ringing fr the unteempth time bt he ignred it ...wen one of his employee came in...

rd:wat ???cant u see i am busy

empl:bt sir i think the call is mre important ...sanyukta mam is in hospital and ur family is expecting u dere as its time fr ur child to come...

rd:wat...i am so sorry gentlemen bt i have to rush their bcse i dont want to miss the momnt ...sorry ...hey aman pls luk after dem and he went away runng...

all dere family ws present ANDtensed bcse sanyu's scream ws making dem hell tense...and rd came their runng...

arjun:lo tujhe call kar raha hu aur tu

rd:bad mei datna...sanyu itna kyu chilla rahi hai...

arohi:offo chillate hai rd

rd:arrey per tere waqt to tune itna nhi chillayi thi itne zor se...i tell u agar docs k liye ho raha hai to mei mei

jiggy:arrey mei mei bad mei karna andar jayo...sanyu ap pe gussa hai zyada

rd:uff ye ladki ab bhi mujhse ladni hai...and he ws taken wid a nurse inside...he cud see sanyu screaming and tears were coming out frm her eyes...he at once ran to her...

rd:hey hey tum ro kyu rahe ho...

sanyu:aaahhh wat aahhh the ...h..hell ..r..a..randhir...itne time koi ...lagata hai...aaahhh...

rd:meine pehle hi kaha tha ki koi zarurat nhi hai hume bache ki ...dekha isi liye bola tha..tumhe kitna dard ho raha hai ...

docs were smiling ...

sanyu:raaandhir...aaahhh...ye sab bolna band karoge...

nurse:sanyukta pls push hard...its time...pls...

rd:wat...and he ws shaking

sanyu:doc pls is idiot ko bahar bhej dijiye...ye kaha mujhe sambhalega khud kap raha hai...

rd:w...wat...m..me..mei nhi ja raha mei yehi rahunga...aur farzi dekho tum apna kam karo...dekhna meri princess ko agar kuch hua na

sanyu:had hai yar tum ap bhi ladka ladki aaahhh pe fight kar...o...and she passed out...

rd:sanyu sanyu...kya hua...

nurse puts a hand on his shoulder:relax...apko beta hua hai...wo dekhiye...aur apki biwi bhi thik hai...rd luks up and sees a little creature wid tiny fingers and legs hairs ws held by the doc...after few minutes...nurse handed the child to him...

rd:o my god...ye kitna chota hai...ise pakru kaise and the boy starts crying...

meanwhile sanyu also gts back to sense...and at frst her eyes falls on rd who ws trying hard to stop the cry of their child...she giggled little...

rd saw her and smiled...rd:ye dekho meine bola tha na mera champ hoga...dekho bilkul mere jaisa dikhta hai...and he places the child beside sanyu ...

sanyu:rd mujhe ise god me lena hai...mujhe uthao...rd helps her...and places the chld on her arms...

rd:dekha farzi iski nakh...hoth...chehra sab mujhpe gaya hai...

sanyu:ha ha iski ankhei bhi to gayi hai hai na tumhari ankhei to bhure hai ...

rd:ha to ek chiz tumpe gayi hai

sanyu:o commn mcp hum dono ka hi genes hai...wo to bad mei pata chalega ki kya kya hai...

meanwhile all comes...

parth:arey yeh kitna handsome hoga dekhna...

vids:ha per pls tum dono ise bigarna mat...

rd:arrey mei kaha bigarta hu

arjun:ha ha arush aur akanksha ko to mei bigarta hu

rd:arrey chachu hu unke aur agar ek ko kuch sikhayu to dusra bhi sikh jata hai ab dono twins hai to mei kya karu...

re:offo abhi ye choro...

sa.mom:ha ha ghar me ladna...sanyu ye bilkul tum dono pe gaya hai...kisi ki nazar na lage...

vd:per ha tuum logo ki tarah farzis bilkul mat banana

arpita:ye guarante hum nhi de skte and al bursted out laughing and den sanyu kissed her child's forehead and rd hers...

4 years later...

shekhawat mansion...dining table...two twins...of 5 year old and a boy of 4year was whispering something to each odr ...den suddenly dey tuk the spoon in one hand and fork on odr and started banging the table...

5yr boy:aku tu shuru kar

5yr grl:nhi nhi arnb shuru karega...(luking at the 4 year boy)

arnab:no no arush bhai ap karo...ruko ek sath karte hai...ready steady go...

all three:mummma dinner do ...mummma diiinnneeerrr...and dey were continuously shouting and banging the table...

wen sanyu and arohi came in

arohi:ye sab tum logo ko kisne sikhaya

at once dey point it towrds rd and arjun...

sanyu:tum dono ne hi in bacho ko bigar k rakkha hai

rdad:sanyu beta chordo na...

adad:ha ha per bacho maza aaya na...

re:sanyu rehne do ye ghar ke ladke hi sab bigad te hai...per chod do

arnab:offo mummy,papa sehi kehte hai ap kitna lazy ho...itna time lagate ho dinner lene mei

sanyu:oye papa ka chamcha

rd:dekha khud kya sikhati hai aur mujhe bol rhi thi...

akanksha:tum sab jhagda bad mei karo na hume bhuk lagi hai...phir nanu hume story bhi sunayenge

arohi:ha ha beta abhi deti hu...dey had dere dinner...

aku:kya chachi ek behen la do na...ye arnab aur arush humesha mujhse jit jate hai mei akeli hu isiliye...aur phir kabhi arnab akela par jata hai

sanyu:per beta

rd:dekha kitna brilliant hai...

arnab:yes dad bilkul sahi kaha mom pls ek behen la do na to phir equal ho jayega di akele har jati hai...aur hume aise khel k maza nhi ata hai

re:waise bacho idea acha hai odd nos hai...and all were laughing and here sanyu ws blushing...

arjun:to phir aj ek kam karte hai...ap sab aj ek sath so jao...mummy papa apne rum me so jayenge aur ap sab ek sath

arush:wo dad idea acha hai...chal arnab game resume karte hai...

rd:ok den its decided...he asked something in sanyus ears and sanyu nodded suprisingly and den he continued:ok den i think 9 months bad ek aur team member add hoga...so bye bye and he lifted sanyu on his arms and reached the staircase...

sanyu:arrey rd...tum bhi bacho k sath...mom dad...

re:bst of luckk...

rd:arey kya yar socho agar tumhe bhi twins ho gaye to ek cricket team hi ban jayega

sanyu:rd niche utaru...

the children were going wen arjun stopped dem,...

arjun:ap sab kuch bhul rahe hai

arush:o yes...aj humne sikha ki

aku:hume sabko pyar karna chahiye

arnab:sabki madad karni chahiye

arush:aur humesha ek sath rehna chahiye...

and deyy left...

re:i wish ye family aise hi rahe humesha ek sath

wen sandhir speaks together frm upstairs:ALWAYS TOGETHER...

AND DEY AL SMILED TO LIVE THEIR LIVES TOGETHER IN AL CIRCUMSTANCES...

SO HERE I END MY FANFIC...THANK U ALLL WIDOUT UR COMNTS LIKES AND LOVE I WUDNT HAVE GONE TILL 78 PARTS...SO THNKS A LOT FRM THE CORE OF MY HEART...AND AS I PROMISED THE NEXT SEASON...SO THE IDEA WIL B IN NEXT COMNT...DO TEL HW IT IS AND ALSO GVE UR IDEAS ...ONCE AGAIN THNKS A LOT...

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Anisha Chowdhury

@chowanisha

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#929

NOTE

as i said...fr next season...the story wud b something sort of like dis...

rd and arjun wil b back to india after many years just to handle thier dad's busines...and den dey wil come to knw about their dad's dream project and wud call the best engineers and architects frm deir partners to build the project up ...dis wil the time wen rd and arjun wud meet their lady love and few frnds fr rest of the lives...mre or less characters wud b the same...jsut here and dere sme chnges wil b made...

so tel me u guys like it or not and surely u can give ur ideas...i wud love to use it...

Edited by chowanisha - 11 years ago