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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

oyee hoyee kudiyeee... this was a brilliant chapter so wat if sarth kissed she pushed him dats awesome...lol
and babes...this part was so fabulous...i really m keen on why is randhir behaving like a wuss...argh...damnit...
m really enjoying ur ff drling
keep rocking
and update as u get time dnt get sressed... :)


Yup...that is the point..she did push him away. So that wasn't an actual kiss. And thank you so much for understanding. I am under a huge bundle of pressure...so much to study and so little time...but still I find time and update this FF just for you guys coz you keep me motivated. Thank you so much for always being there.

Originally posted by: jenny003

please keep parth hooked up to vidhusheee😉


It seems everyone wants that to happen!!

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

awesome update

n dun worry will not kill u for the kiss😛...
akhir hame update chahiye..lol

cont soon
thnk for pm


Ha ha...thank you for understanding!! Much love!!
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhir.candy

really good update

thanks for the PM
update soon


Thank you so much dear!!!

Originally posted by: sandhirlover

itna late update karta hai koi...???

or tabhi mere dimag me name aaya TUM..!! tum karti ho itna late update...
but comin to your update to it was dhansoo...
just loved it..
pichle part me Sandhir kiss dikhaya or isme Sarth...!! back to back..!!
interesting... very interesting...
you penned it beautifully... amazing.
nd the last line.. ahh now I cant wait to read nxt part..
so be a good girl nd update nxt part ASAP.. okk??
love you
Ashka.


Ashka...I have my sems coming up next month...and I have tonnes to study. So I'll be a little late for the updates okay? Try and understand...my first sem in the Uni and I just have to do well enough to score a first division. But will update ASAP. Promise!!


Originally posted by: aastha3688

Nice update but not one of ur best...NO SANDHIR😭...I so wanna kill Parth...How disgusting!! He deserves a girl(or bitch I should say) like Vidushee...Btw u gave a precap after chapter 4...What was that for??


Every chapter can't be about SanDhir na. All the characters have to emerge slowly. And the precap is coming dear. Since I've written it...I do intend on adding it to the main story too. Just wait a little!!
Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

Ashy!
This was nice chap!
Saarth kissed??? OMG!
Vidhushee and Parth Oh God!

NOW UPDATE ASAP!



Thank you. And surely will updt soon!! Stay hooked!!

Originally posted by: Rekha85

Superb Update dear!!!!!!!!!

Never ever repeat a sarth kisss!!!!!!!!!!
Vidushi..and Parth...Good!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update soon!


Thanks Rekha...everyone seems to support the idea of Parth and Vidushee. Will updt soon!!
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suumi

I hate randhir's dad 😡
thank god parth is nt much behind sanyu!
Anyways Suprb update 😳


Everyone seems to hate Randhir's dad!! And thank you for the lovely comment!!!

Originally posted by: 88sandy

wow amazing update dear...
aftr d kiss both are so restless...
i lyk parth bt hw dare he kiss sanyu...


Thank you so much dearie!!!

Originally posted by: G.R.

hey...read d last two updates togethr

nd both updates wer superb
Update nxt part soon plz.


Thanks! Will soon surely!!!
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anu_anya

interesting update yar continue soon :)


Thank you!!!

Originally posted by: Priagrawal

Interesting concept..

update soon 😊



Thank you so much!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
he hiii!!! am new here. joined this forum just for the sake of sadda haq so i guess u can understand how crazy i cud b.. i loved ur ff..
PS: since i share the same name as the lead plz don make parth close to her... randhir is the best!!!!
Posted: 11 years ago

Parth woke up. His head was still aching. He lay on his bed, wrapped in sheets. Looking around and trying to recollect what had happened, he saw Vidushee getting dressed.

"When did you get up?" asked Parth.

"Long before you did", said Vidushee as she buttoned her shirt. She finger-combed her hair and tied a knot. Parth watched, as she got dressed.

"Listen Vidushee", he said "I hope after last night's episode..."

"Don't worry", she said looking at him. "There is a difference between me and Sanyukta. I know how to keep things professional".

"Leaving already?" he asked, getting up.

"I've to get to work in 2 hours",

"You still have time", said Parth.

"No. I have to go home and take a shower", said Vidushee.

"You can shower here".

Vidushee looked at Parth. "I thought we decided to keep things professional."

"Yeah, but you leaving like this. I don't feel good about it. I just don't want you to feel...like..."

"A prostitute?" asked Vidushee immediately.

"No...well...that is not what I meant."

Vidushee smiled and said, "Relax Parth. Relax. I can handle myself. You take an aspirin. You are clearly hung-over from last night. However, it is funny, how Sanyukta, of all people refused you."

Parth looked down. "Yeah, well, I sort of expected that. A girl like Sanyukta should probably be seeing someone she does not want anyone to know."

"She isn't", said Vidushee.

"Well," said Parth. "I don't want to talk about Sanyukta now."

Vidushee did not reply. She just kept dressing and fixing her hair. She went over to the mirror and made sure she looked okay before stepping out.

"Vidushee", said Parth. "We'll see each other again, won't we?"

Vidushee looked at Parth and merely said, "Sure Parth. Right after you get an aspirin." And saying this she went out of Parth's hotel room and closed the door behind her.

Sanyukta still had not been able to collect what had happened last night. How did things transform from a friendly rooftop Chinese dinner to a drunk all-of-a-sudden kiss?! She was confused. Sanyukta constantly checked her phone to see if Parth had left a message or had called while she was sleeping, to apologize for his erratic behavior the night before but there were none. She had assumed that maybe he was ashamed of what he had done and was trying to come up with an apology. However, it seemed that she had assumed wrong.

Kaustuki had made orange juice for her. She suggested that because Sanyukta had drunk quite a bit last night, it would be brutal if she drank anything strong like coffee that has lots of caffeine or tea. Sanyukta told Kaustuki about the dinner and the amazing restaurant they had dined at, but she did not tell her how the dinner ended. To Kaustuki, Parth was just a friend who, due to some odd turn of events, had managed to become Sanyukta's fianc, which she was not happy about.

Kaustuki was telling Sanyukta about her cousin brother who, was also engaged, and how she missed the engagement because she had work in Delhi. Sanyukta pretended to be interested but in her mind, she was still thinking about Randhir. It seems that she had correctly judged him. He was arrogant and selfish and card for no one else but himself. How could she? How could she just let a person like him kiss her? She was now ashamed of that night's event and to add to the misery, Parth too had kissed her. But she pushed Parth away even though they were friends. But why didn't she push Randhir away? She could have done so. But she did not. And that made her blame herself.

Sanyukta showered and got dressed. Kaustuki had already left for work. She locked the door and headed out. She was reluctant to go to work. All those paperwork she resented would be lying on her desk. After the Smart House project, Sanyukta was just not getting a chance to display her talents in the practical field. She loved working on the project and really hoped that another project would soon come her way. She also missed Jisggy. She prayed he'd come back soon. He was the only one in the office who was nice to her.

The elevator door opened. Sanyukta got out and she stopped. The first person she saw was Randhir. He was photocopying some papers and did not notice her. Sanyukta looked at him and she could hear her heart beat. She did not know whether she would walk towards him and demand explanations from the other night or just walk away. Randhir clearly had not seen her. Sanyukta took a deep breath and decided to talk to him. In that way, she could focus on her work and not be distracted throughout the day.

Randhir was getting many copies and was trying to arrange the pages as they came out of the machine. Some of the papers fell from the desk. He was about to bend down and pick them up but Sanyukta did that instead. Sanyukta handed them to Randhir who just looked at Randhir, who just stared at her and then snatched the paper from her hand.

"Randhir, we need to talk", said Sanyukta, sternly.

Randhir did not reply but merely kept doing what he was doing.

Sanyukta, realizing that this would ot work, grabbed his hand and shook it. "Randhir! I'm talking to you."

Randhir immediately shook her hand off and looked at her coldly, "I have ears, I am listening."

"Fine. Very well", said Sanyukta. "Why didn't you return any of my phone calls that night? Or yesterday?"

"There is not law that says you have to return a desperate person's calls", he said.

Sanyukta was shocked. "What are you saying Randhir? You do remember what happened before you left the hotel..."

"Stop!" he said. "Just stop!"

Sanyukta stopped.

"I do remember and that is, unfortunately, something I will have to live with for the rest of my life. How I got drunk and did something I'll always regret", replied Randhir.

Sanyukta was quiet. She expected a blunt reply from Randhir al along, but definitely not denial. She struggled for words.

"What are you saying?" she asked softly.

Randhir looked at her. Ofcourse he was not drunk. He had a few to drink but was not drunk. He meant for the kiss to happen. However, he clearly had no options. He had to lie to her. It was the only way to make her go away from his life. There was no place for Sanyukta or another girl in his complicated life.

"You heard me", he replied. "I was drunk, got carried away and we kissed. Things happened. Let it go".

Sanyukta was taken aback. Clearly, she did not know who to react or what to say. She merely looked at him as he assembled the printed papers form the machine. "So you are going to deny everything that you said that night as well?" she asked.

Randhir remained quiet. He did not reply, rather did not intend to. His silence was enough to tell Sanyukta everything. Her insides were burning. She did not say anything. She pouted her lips and walked away, as Randhir looked on. He kept staring at her as she walked. In anger, he threw all the papers onto the ground and knocked on the wall hard. No one was there to look. He obviously did not want to hurt Sanyukta. Ofcourse he meant everything he said that night, but his father's words kept playing in his head. His mother's betrayal. It pained him. But he had no choice.

Sanyukta kept her bag on her table. She was not going to cry. She was definitely not going to waste her tears on Randhir. She was ready to forget about the kiss and everything that happened. It was a mistake; she would explain herself as long she it would take for her to forget that night. She took one file at a time from the stack that was kept beside her table and began to work. The best way to put away unnecessary thoughts was to bury yourself in work.

The day went by as usual. Randhir and Sanyukta hardly came face to face after the conversation earlier. He hardly even got out of his office. Vardhan sir had asked him to work on a new project, alone. He was grateful that he trusted him enough to assign an individual project. He took some mechanical parts and was working on a trial design when Sahil came in.

"Randhir", he said. "I need your help".

Randhir tuned around. "Kya hua?"

"I have made a design for the auto water pump I am working on. I just need you to check on the details of the design so I could start my work," said Sahil, handing him the design he made.

Randhir saw the design. He took a pencil and corrected the design. The design had plenty of faults. Randhir was surprised that it did. Sahil was very dedicated engineer and was a passionate about building stuff just like Randhir. The fact that a bright man like him was capable of making such mistakes and overlook the most inferior details was shocking for Randhir.

"What have you done Sahil?" Randhir asked, irritated.

Randhir explained all the crucial pints to Sahil and told him to work on it again. "You look distracted." Randhir told Sahil.

Sahil looked at Randhir and asked, "Is it that visible?"

"Kya?" asked Randhir.

"Arrey kuch nahi. I just had a quarrel with my fianc. A big one."

"And that is why you are so distracted that you made such mistakes with your design? Where is your head Sahil?"

"Arrey it was a big one but the issue was petty."

Randhir leaned back on the table and said, "Teri fianc...she is a designer na?"

"Yes."

"Isiliye problem hain", said Randhir. "Two ambitious people in a relationship matlab hi problem."

"Aisa mat bolo", said Sahil.

"I am telling you the truth. Dekh, abhi teri shaadi bhi nahi huyi and you guys are fighting over silly stuff. Imagine what will happen when you do get married!"

Sahil sat down on a chair, looking worried. "We have to find a way not to ruin this relationship."

"Good luck with that bro", smirked Randhir. "I hope you don't end up getting a divorce like Mr. Patel."

"But I don't agree with your notion. Two ambitious people can be in a relationship."

Randhir looked at Sahil, expressionless. He was not going to debate with Sahil regarding this silly topic.

"I mean a relationship is all about compromise and making each other happy. And there will be choti-moti-fights, that is what keeps the relationship healthy. Every relationship should start with a solid friendship. Understanding one another. Ab humari Sanyukta ko hi dekhlo..."

Randhir froze. His wandering eyes were now fixed on Sahil. "What do you mean?" he asked, sternly.

"Arrey yesterday, I was standing in the balcony at night. And I saw Sanyukta and that architect guy, Parth Kashyap coming out of that new Chinese restaurant that ahs opened in front of our house. They were talking and laughing. At first, I thought they went to dinner as friends. But no! They kissed! I mean actually kissed!"

Randhir just kept looking at Sahil. He thought that Sahil was just messing with him to irritate him. But why would Sahil mess with him? He does not know how Randhir felt for Sanyukta and that kiss that they shared the other night. Various thoughts were spinning in his head and he was fuming. Randhir was already aware that Ankit had fixed Sanyukta's engagement with Parth. Was this an actual date? Was Sanyukta actually serious about marrying Parth?

"Acha Randhir I have to go. Need to work on this design. See you later!" said Sahil and left.

Randhir threw his pencil on the floor and dashed out of his office. He was looking for Sanyukta. He first went to her office only to find that it was empty. He then asked one of his colleagues about her whereabouts. One of them said that she saw her in front of the water-cooler on the third floor. Randhir quickly took a lift and went to the third floor. Just as the lift door opened, he saw Sanyukta, drinking water. There was no one on the floor that he could see yet. He quickly dashed towards her, took her glass, and threw it in the dustbin beside the cooler. Sanyukta was shocked.

"Randhir! What are you doing? I..." she began but Randhir interrupted her.

"First tum bolo ki what are you doing? Are you on this kissing spree or something?"

Sanyukta could not understand what was Randhir talking about. She looked at him. The silence irritated Randhir so much that he grabbed her arm and pushed her against the wall and guarded her.

"Randhir! What the hell! Don't make me scream. "

"You kissed Parth?"

"What?"

"Don't you dare lie to me Sanyukta! I know you did."

"Toh? What is the problem then?"

"So this morning's conversation...were you testing me or something? Wanted to see if I am still interested in you? How many guys do you want?"

Sanyukta shook Randhir's hands off hers and raised her forefinger. "Dekho, don't talk rubbish. Don't you dare question my character!"

"Kyun? Feeling bad. The truth always make people feel bad doesn't it Sanyukta?"

"Randhir stop it. Just because I do tell you nothing does not mean I am numb. If you raise one more allegation against my name, I'll report you to the Human Resource Department. Besides, why do you care? I can kiss whomever I want, I should not be answerable to anyone" . Sanyukta could not believe she just said that.

Randhir did not reply to her question. He stepped back. He obviously should not care about anything. It was his life and he had chose to distance Sanyukta from his life. So naturally, he should not care whether Sanyukta and Parth were in an exclusive relationship. He slowly turned around and went towards the lift. He had nothing more to say.

Sanyukta returned home to find a hot cup of tea and a batch of pakodas waiting for her.

"Tumne banayi?" she asked Kaustuki.

"Just learning, " Kaustuki replied.

Sanyukta dug into the food immediately. She had an awful day in the office. It was nice to come home to such an amazing treat.

As Sanyukta ate her pakodas, she thought about what had happened in the last couple of days. First, she kisses Randhir. Then he does not answer the phone and ignores her. The she goes on a "friendship date" with Parth only to end up drinking and kissing him. Actually, he kissed her. She pushed him away. And today, in the office that pathetic confrontation with Randhir. Twice. How did her life turn out to be so upside down? Was she actually on a kissing spree like the one Randhir had said? Parth still had not called her. An entire day had gone by but no calls or text messages from him. At first, Sanyukta thought of calling him herself and asking him how things were. But she resented the idea. But Parth was descent enough guy. Better than Randhir, at least. But does that mean that she should actually consider a relationship with him. Surely, there were no boundaries holding them back from having one.

"You know what Sanyu?" said Kaustuki. "Today I saw my favourite film, Rehna Hain Tere dil Main."

"I have seen that movie. I really liked Diya Mirza. But is that your favouirte film?" asked Sanyukta, who was a film addict and have watched better love stories than the one Kaustuki claims to be her favourite.

"Yes. I just love it. Kyun? You don't like that movie?"

"No I do. But I just did not understand the concept of the story."

"It is a love story Sanyukta. There is no concept", laughed Kaustuki.

"Every story should have a concept. I just did not understand. I mean dekho, Diya Mirza was about to marry this really nice guy like Saif. He is kind, considerate, and intelligent and understands women. But Mandy, this rude, unconventional, carefree guy, comes in, lies to Diya about being someone else and hurts her. And yet, in the end, Diya choses Mandy over Saif. I mean...what was that yar?"

Kaustuki laughed loudly. "Stupid girl. That is love."

Sanyukta was still confused. It really did not make any sense to her. What was so lovely about that?

"Diya and Mandy were in love. Even though Mandy was not the ideal man for Diya, he loved her truly. In addition, yes, they did have their differences, but they still fell in love in spite f those differences. She never felt that love when she was with Saif. She liked him, yes, but she loved Mandy. And that happens really rarely. How many of us can say that we'll be happy with our presumed' love?"

Sanyukta just stared at Kaustuki. She obviously had not thought about ti like that. Every time she came across this name, Rehna Hain Tere Dil main, she thought of it as a sily love story with a good-looking female lead. But something pricked he this time. Was it the way Kaustuki explained the story to her? Or was it something completely different? Something she could not understand.

"You keep thinking about this Sanyukta. I am going to get some bread. Clearly, you have forgotten. I told you this morning", and saying this Kaustuki took her purse and went outside.

Sanyukta was finishing her pakodas when she heard a cell phone ring. It was not hers because the ring tone was not "Tere Liye" from Veer-Zaara. She looked around and saw that Kaustuki had left her phone on the table. It was still ringing. She did not answer it.

After sometime, it rang again. And again. And this happen for like 6-7 times. Sanyukta was wondering where Kaustuki go. The call must be important because it just kept coming. Finally she decided to answer it and tell the person on the other end that Kaustuki was out and will be back sometime.

The number was a private number. She answered it and was about to say "hello" when a deep male voice from the other side said, "Where were you? Anyways, I am in a hurry. Listen this is very important. The photos you sent of the project and the inauguration party, I showed it to the bosses. They did their research and your theory checks out. Vardhan Shukla is definitely laundering black money into the business. But we have to wait before we can take some serious actions. You keep doing your work. I'll call you later. Bye!" And he hung up with a confused Sanyukta on this side of the line.

NOTE:I am terribly sorry for updating this late but you guys have to understand that I am under a load of pressure from my University. I am going to be really inactive from now on but will manage to post a chapter every week. Please forgive me my dearies. Please post your comments/suggestions/criticisms below. Press the 'LIKE' button if you think I deserve it. Hopefully you'll understand my severity. Love you all!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ress...
And the stalker of the week award goes to me... Aaj to maine ff stalking k records hi tod diye...🤣
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Unres
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I don't know where to start from.. A lot to say, but no apt words to be found..

Parth- a decent person (or that's what he tries to depict) who is not that decent.. He's not what he looks.. And noone can say who he really is.. A face hidden behind masks.. Many shades he has got..

Randhir- Doesn't wanna get affected by Sanyu but has unwillingly and unwantedly started falling for her.. There is no harm though, but due to his father's consistent brainwashing, he's made to think the other way.. Love is a poison, or that is how he thinks..
He cares for Sanyukta, but still he doesn't and has no right either... Lieing to himself.. Caging his ownself .

Sanyukta- another confused character... Likes Parth, loves Randhir, realizes none.. Has no idea what's wrong, what's right.. Going through a heavy turmoil.. Making wrong assumptions about right people and vice-versa.. But then, it's not her fault. She assumes what she sees. Her heart understands the difference but she is too reluctant to follow her heart.. Marriage, no marriage, love, friendship, mistake, kiss, she's hell too confused and clueless..
If all that was not enough, her friend Kaustuki.. She's been spying through her, indirectly though.. She came to party through Sanyukta to get proofs against her boss.. Vardhaan..

A hell lot of confusion among everyone..
Lot of mysteries to unfold..

And you portrayed everything sooo well...
Hats off mane..!!!
You just nailed it...
A huge round of applause for you my jaan..!! 👏👏


Thanks for the update..!!!

Love ya..
Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES!
unresing!
I just loved this part!!!!!!!!!
realising that we r in love...its beautiful...!!!!!
U explained it beautifully!
The inner turmoil in Sanyus and Randhirs mind...Keep going on!!!
I think ur precap about Randhir and sanyu..is nearing!!!!!!!
I am waiting!
Keep Writing!
With Love Rekha!
Edited by Rekha85 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg ...now I m really confused about this creature name is parth


I thought he actually liked sanyu but at the end he was with vidhushi...and more on that he actually care for her...

And the way vidhushi handle things between her and parth I was quite surprised yaar...
Vidhushi and this much solved a d mature talks...too much to digest it...


I m daam sure wo vidhushi nahi koi aur, hai...jo bhi ho lekin ek baat to confirm ho gayi...parth is out out from sandhir path...wow...


And now our sandhir...inka kuch nahi ho sakta...aur ye sahil...usane to aag mein ghee ka kaam kiya...phewww


Lekin last part...what was that...


I mean rehna hai tere dil meinmki definition to kamal ki thi ...

But kaustu was she using sanyu for her work...is she hiding so e imp from sanyu...

I hope this will not harm sanyu in future

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