Ek He Khwahish...SK...Pt-82(Pg:123)Imp Note Pg:124 - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
dear me crying...sujal no more..yeh kya baat hui.. 😭
waise me sure is twists mein bhi kuch tho chamatkar ho hi jayega aur humara sujal bach jayega.. kyun bach jayega na...???? πŸ˜‰
i'am feeling very bad & sad for kashish..bechari... 😭 i hope sujal is fine...πŸ˜‰
the twist you gave was unexpected & very intresting...πŸ‘
ab please next part jaldi se post karna i seriously cannot wait for long to read the next part... πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
YEH kya hua sujal ko me very sad 😭 . Pls next part jaldi post karo
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Posted: 19 years ago

come on guys don be sad...
even i was sad writing this part...bt it was essential na...won't tell wht will happen...u hav 2 wait 4 it...
n abt nxt part...2morrow 4 sure i will post...
4 now be happy wid this promo...



Promo:
We see tht strange person standing @ the door....kashish looks @ him...n iz tryng 2 recognize..
bt she can't n then sumone introduces him..
S:meet him kashish...its Piyush...Piyush Raheja...our new bussiness partner..


so do tell me guys..how the promo was..waiting 4 ur comments... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
sujal is no more Nooooooooo 😭 i hate Piyush. my sujal 😭 plz post next part soon i m wait for.
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Posted: 19 years ago
sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllll 😭 guriya yeh kya kiya tumne humare sujal ko maar dala 😭 omg seriously tht scene was sooo saddd!!!!!!! bichari kashish 😭 omg do sutin quick guriya!!!! ufff yeh piush kahan se tapak gaya
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: kash1988_0108

sujal is no more Nooooooooo 😭 i hate Piyush. my sujal 😭 plz post next part soon i m wait for.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

relax kash...don be upset..ok..i hav a gr8 suprize 4 u all...bt u hav 2 wait 4 it...so now don hate piyush..n bear wid me...even i don lik him tht much..par kya karoon kahani...mein thura twist tu dalna tha na...

so wait...n i will pst nxt soon...😊

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: rachandeep

sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllll 😭 guriya yeh kya kiya tumne humare sujal ko maar dala 😭 omg seriously tht scene was sooo saddd!!!!!!! bichari kashish 😭 omg do sutin quick guriya!!!! ufff yeh piush kahan se tapak gaya

even m upset ke becahra sujal marr gaya....😭 😭 n kashish...😭 😭so alone...bt kya karoon karana para..bt as i said...hav a suprize..so wait n watch...n m surely doing sumthng 2 make u all happy..so wait...kahani mein abhi kafii aur twists bhi hain....hehe..πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 19 years ago


Part 16th:
doc:m sorry hez no more...
all in shock...
kashish...who was standing near wall...fell on the floor...n tears r fallng frm her eyes..

song played in the background...
(all r shown cryng bitterly)

Pani pani re khaare paani re
Pani pani re khaare paani re
Nainon mein bhar jaaye(angad n aki are shown...n hav tears in their eyes..angad tryng 2 console aki..)
Neendein khaali kar jaaye

Pani pani re khaare paani re
Pani pani re khaare paani re
Nainon mein bhar jaaye(kashish iz on the floor..jus tears running down her eyes...kripa n charu r also wid her cryng)
Neendein khaali kar jaaye

Pani pani in pahaadon ke gharaanon se
Utar jaana
Dhuaan dhuaan kuchh vaadiyaan bhi aayengi
Guzar jaana
Ik gaaon re ga mera ghar aayega
Jaan re ghar jaaye
Neendein khaali kar jaaye

Pani pani re khaare paani re
Pani pani re khaare paani re
Nainon mein bhar jaaye
Neendein khaali kar jaaye
all r still in state of shock n don believe wht doc said..


A:angad...i thnk we should check ourself..might the doctor hav been mistaken..
Ang:par akshat h can the doc be mistaken..
A(helplessly):plz..angad tu ja ke dekh an..sujal aisey nahee...plz yaar.. 😭 😭
Ang:par.. πŸ˜•
jus then kashish stands n says..
K:angad plz..ik bar ja ke dekh aoo...i don believe sujal aise...plz angad kuch karoo... 😭 😭
n then she again falls on ground n strts cryng.. 😭
Ang:ok..i will chk..
now its been 5-10 min angad went..n hasn't come yt..all r worried...jus then we see him comng out of OT..
both aki n kashish..came near him..
both 2gether:angad ...bol..wht happen..hez f9 na..
K:i knew he would be f9..usey kaise..itna mamoli accident aur...
A:oh..thank..god hez f9...
angad iz quite nt sayng anythng jus then ..
Kr:angad tum kuch bol kyu nahee rahe ho..angad bolo na..
Ang:kya bolo..haan kripa...bolo kya boloon..ke main ne..angad ne..apna sabse kareebe dost kho diya..bolo..kya kahoon akshat ko..jo ke soocta hai ke sujal is alive..ke us ka woh bhai..jo us ke jaan tha..ab nahee raha...haan..yah bolon..us kashish ko..jis ke ankhoon mein abhi bhi umeed hai ke woh bach gaya hai...bolo na kaise sach kahoon..aur kaise in sab ka dil toroon bolo..
n wid sayng this he sits on the floor n strts cryng...😭
when all hear this..they jus loose the one single hop they thought they had...
aki goes near the wall..n hits it hardly..n then we see tears flowng frm his eyes...
all r cryng...
bt wht abt kashish..shez nt movng @ all..in a state of shock....
there r no ters in her eyes..n she sits on the nearby bench...n flashes of sujal...r comng in her mind...

a song in background...


ishq ka dard hai.....
dard hai ishka ka....
ishq ka dard hai.....
dard hai ishka ka....


(the scence of there frst meetng...when by mistake she thought of him as kripa...n tell him 2 tie the knot.. n when she gts 2 know..hez flirtng wid her..
S:waise app apne samne kisi ko bolne kahan dete hain..
grl:phir app ne mujh par zyada bolne ka ilzam lagaya..app..
S:ok.m sorry...n i leave..app jo hogaya..jus 4gt abt it...anyways..m sujal..sujal garewal..
n he extend his hand..bt no response frm the grl..
S:arey janab..ab aise bhi kya narazgi..app hath tu mila he sakhte hain..
she jus shakes his hand..)


meri duniya mein aake......
mat jaa...mat jaa....kahi mat jaa
meri duniya mein aake......
mat jaa...mat jaa....kahi mat jaa


(the scence when kashish's name iz told by kripa..n somment of sujal on it...
S:ok as u wish..magar han harat rahegi waise..app ka haseen naam jane ke..
grl gives no response..n then we see..sujal iz abt 2leave..when kripa enters n says..
Kr:woh kashish..tum tayar hogaye..sab neeche agayae hain?
S:oh..tu app ka naam kashish hai..?
K:do u ahv any prob..jus go.. )


kya maine paa liya hai kya maine kho diya hai
shayad ye sochkar hi dil aaj ro diya hai
(remebers the time they both beacme frnds...the same nite...)
tuhi to thaa mera apana kaise phir ye toota sapana
tu jo milke kho jayega jeena mushkil ho jayega
(the time when the car hits him...n she screams n ran 2wards him..n hez in kashish lap...)


meri duniya mein aake mat jaa...
mat ja...kahi mat jaa
ishka ka dard hai dard hai ishka ka
ishka ka dard hai dard hai ishka ka...



the song ends..n so does the flashbacks..
n we see now tears fallng frm kashish eyes... 😭
as she jus now realize..how much in luv she was wid sujal..
bt she lst him..b4 even she could gt him..
n tears of regret r there..n shez even cryng more hard... 😭 😭 😭
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ok guyz this was the end of 16th part...n i know ur nt likng much as sujal is dead now...plz wait 4 sumtime...i will sure make u all happy..
nxt part:a suprize 4 all...
Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part. Bt pls sujal ke saath aisa kyun
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Posted: 19 years ago
veryu damn intresting.. πŸ‘
please post the the next part soon.. 😊 πŸ˜› πŸ˜ƒ me waiting for the suprise eagerly & i think i know what the suprise is... πŸ˜‰

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