Ek He Khwahish...SK...Pt-82(Pg:123)Imp Note Pg:124 - Page 85

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Posted: 14 years ago
plz continue soon.....don't leave us again
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hey dear cont soon....................dont leave us again....................
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hi,,,m not leaving....dont worry...its just dat...was having sum connection prblm...will try to post the part soon.... take carez.... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

hi,,,m not leaving....dont worry...its just dat...was having sum connection prblm...will try to post the part soon.... take carez.... 😊



very glad to hear that u wont leave.....................will wait for the part................cont soon................
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Part - 81
Its another new day..will this new day will bring....new life....into the sad life of sujal kashish....lets see....its sneha's sangeet today....the house is in chaos....seems like nothing is arrange...we see girls going here and there with things in their hands....we see a group of girls going upstairs...we move with them...on the way...we hear someone talking and lets peek in the room and see whats going on...

Sn:haan rishi...bhaiya kal aye the...but i don't think anything can go according to the plan as woh sushmita bhi unke saath thi...and when i talked about har...he was seeming liking he has taken some decision...am scared rishi....ab kya karien...itney arsey baad hum ik koshish karney ja rahee the...but mujhe tu nahee lagta k plan kamyab hoga..

R(on the other side of phone): sneha don't worry...kuch ghalat nahee hoga trust me...us waqt kashish ne humein kuch bhi karney se mana kiya tha...and we didn't utter a word...par ab...itney saal mei sujal ko kuch howa...nahee na...tu kyun woh dono...alag rahein...humein ik baar sujal ko sach batana hoga...par tab tak...bas yeh dihan rakho...kashish kuch ulta seedha na rakhe...as u said...us ne kal party mein usey dekh liya tha...don't let her leave Mumbai...emotional blackmail..kuch bhi karo...but...let her stay...ok

Sn:ok...par hum kareinge kya...aur kaise...

R:you just leave all that to me...tum bas itna dehan rakho...k sujal...har function attend karey...kuch b karke...

Sn:woh tu bhayia will do...i called him myself...par us sushmita ka kya karein..

R:chill yaar aney do usey...waisey bhi i hav 2 talk to sujal na...tu tab woh saath tu nahee ayegi na...let her enjoy our shadi...n will solve the matter...

Sn:theek hai...hope so...your plan is successful...i can't see the kids like that...separated frm their mom and dad...just because of stupid reasons...we have to clarify things...thanks to adi...us ney akal de humein...warna hum ney itney arsey mein unko milaney ka socha bhi nahe tha..

R: u r right...agar us raat adi tum se na poochta about his dad...tu hum tu Mumbai akay bhi bina sujal se miley chaley jatey...par ab nahee...we will...let them meet again...soon

Sn:hmm...ok abhi mein rakhti hoon...buhat kaam hai...will talk to you soon...ok

R:ok...love you...bye...

Sn:love you too...and thanks for supporting me..

R:is mei thanks kaisa...they are my friends too...smajhi..

Sn:jii...ok...bye...

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In another room we see kashish and kripa sitting...kashish is crying and kripa is trying to console her...

Kr:kashish...mainey tujhe 5 saal phele he kaha tha...itna bada faisla na le...apni bachi ko chor k jana koi asan tu nahee...par us waqt u were determined to leave her and just go with adi...tu ab kyun...itney saal baad phir gharey murdey ukharna chahti hai...

K:kripa mein usey yeh tu nahee batongi k mei uski mom hoon....i just want to see her once...jab usey sujal ko diya tha...tab mein ji bhar k ik baar bhi apni beti ko nahee dekh payi thi...plz..kripa...i know only u can help me...tum pe koi shak bhi nahee karega...plz....(crying again)

Kr:acha...phele stop crying yaar....i will try...par kya pata...if she has seen your picture tu....tab tu problem ho jayegi na...

K:i don't think jo howa uske baad...sujal ne usey merey barey mei kuch bhi bataya hoga...yah meri tasveer dikhaye hogi...

Kr:theek hai tu kehti hai tu...i will try...ajj sham ko sangeet mei...sujal will come to...sonia agar saath hui ....tu i will let u meet her...ok

K:thanks yaar..

Kr:thanks bol k mujhey sharminda kar rahi hai...mei bhi ik maa...hoon n i do understand k tera dil pe kya biti hai...acha jab...mein zara neechey dekh k ati hoon...angad ney kitna kaam bigara hai...

K:becharey k pechee he pari raha kar...kitna tu kaam kar raha hai...sari tayariyaan mukamal kar chukka hai...par tujhe nuks he dikhta hai...

Kr:nuks hai tu dekhega...i m 100% sure...neeche jaongi...tu kuch kaam tu ulta milega he milega..

K:sahe hai...

With that kripa leaves...living kashish in thoughts about how her daughter will be now...like...

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We see a office room...sujal is sitting inside...looking lost...thinking about yesterday's event of sneha's haldi...

S(thinking): kya woh sach much...kashish he thi...yaa mera weham tha...nahee woh kashish he thi...ho sakta hai sneha ney usey invite kia ho...jasiey usney mujhe invite kiya...tu ab itney saloo bad phir se ik baar tumse samna hoga kashish...kitney mushkil se koshish k thi tumhe bholney k...aur ab lag raha tha k bhool jaoonga...sush k madad se....but...tum ik baar phir...itna sab kuch karney k baad kyun wapis aye ho kashish...kyun...kahin Sonia ko leney tu nahee...nahee mein...apni beti par tumhari parchayi bhi nahee parhney donga...kabhi nahee...haan ajj sham ko sirf mei akela he jaoonga...sneha k sangeet mei...sonia ko ghar par he rakhna behtar hai...jab tak kashish is shehar mei hai...mei sonia ko apne saath kahi nahee lejaonga...agar merey saath us ne Sonia ko dekhliya tu...jo kuch humarey beech tha...woh ab waisey bhi khatam ho chukka hai kashish...aur tum ne wada kiya tha mujh se kashish...tum ne jo chaha mainey diya tha kashish....par meri shart thi....uski yahi saza hai...k tum poori zindagi apni beti ka chehre dekhney k liye bhi tarso gi....nahee chahta k meri beti par tumhara saya bhi parey....kabhi nahee...ik aisi aurat ka...jis ko wafa karna na aye...jis ney merey pyar k tauheen k...kya kami thi...merey pyaar mei...kya..sab kuch de diya apna...par badle mei kya payaa bas tanhai....

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Its evening time now...and all guest arrived...sujal comes with sush...and gets involved in talks with sneha and rishi...kashish has saw him entering and is now...trying to avoid him being at side...she saw tht Sonia was not with him...and is disappointed and she wanted to meet her daughter...as soon as possible....sneha n rishi leave them there 2 meet oda guest wen...kashish she dem 2gther...she is not able to and leaves....just dan...sujal gets her view...she is dressed in a pink and white churidar and looking very beautiful...seems like time has not touched her...she is same as she was when he met her 4 da frst time...after their marriage...nothing seems to change her...she was always beautiful and now was looking more beautiful...he broke his trance...n cld nt stay longer inside...as it was gtg suffocated...he excuses himself from sush...n goes out in the garden...2 gt a grip on his emotions...here on the other side...kashish also lost in emotions...went 2 da terrace...da scene now....kashish on the terrace...thinking about past and sujal...and sujal downstairs in the garden...thinking about past and kashish...

(song in the background)

koee ye kaise bataaye ke wo tanahaa kyon hai (we see kashish sitting beside the terrace railings...lost in another world...sujal siiting on a swing...)

wo jo apanaa thaa, wahee aaur kisee kaa kyon hai (Kashish thinking about what she saw just a moment ago...the sujal she loved was no more his...thinking...if he now remembers her or not...as he was looking happy talking with sushmita)

yahee duniyaan hain to fir, ayesee ye duniyaan kyon hai (looking lost...toward the skies...as if asking God why??)

yahee hotaa hain to, aakhir yahee hotaa kyon hai?

ik jaraa haath badhaa de to, pakad le daaman (sujal thinking how close they are now...under one roof...yet they are so far from each other)

us ke seene mein samaa jaaye, humaaree dhadakan (kashish gets up...and stands close to the railing...looking straight...(not down)...sujal...stands up looks here and there as if feelong someone very close...being very near...same is with kashish)

itanee kurbat hain to fir faasalaa itanaa kyon hai?

dila-ye-barabaad se nikalaa naheen abatak koee (sits on the ground thinking...why he cant forget everything when she has moved on...why he is just stuck in life)

ik loote ghar pe diyaa karataa hain dastak koee (why he is always lost in...that one moment when she left him alone...all alone...leaving his house...his life...why he still is waiting for her...)

aas jo toot gayee hain fir se bandhaataa kyon hai? (why now after seeing her...he feels tht thngs can change...wen he knows...they cannot...n neva will...)
tum masarrt kaa kaho yaa ise gam kaa rishtaa

kahate hain pyaar kaa rishtaa hain janam kaa rishtaa

hai janam kaa jo ye rishtaa to badalataa kyon hai?

(both lost in each others memories...memories of there lovely moments...there love...whch are no more now...thinking why and what happened tht there life is lik tht now....)

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Thats it for now...hope you all will like the part....do comment and tell me how it was...do press the like button...would love to read ur replies...do try to listen to the song...mentioned...its by jagjit singh....it clearly demonstrates sk emotion...at this time..
till next time...
do take carez... 😊
Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb part now pls get sujal and kash close to each other and a bit longer part next time
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part thank you so much for pm and this part i love it they both come close to each other so sweet thank you for pm.contii soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally you posted...I thought u forgot abt your fic again...Hehehe..
But it was a very short part....bas gaana ne hi pure part ki space le li...
Continue soon !!
Cant wait for SK's confrontation and for Sujal to know about his son.
Luv,
Vandu😛
Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
glad that u posted the part................but very short dear................plz post a bigger one next time and the next time let it be soon...................very nice part.....................sujal doesn't know about adi and doesn't want to bring sonia with him.................when will SK talk with each other and the confrontation will happen???????????can't wait for that..................cont pretty soon dear..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally u post the part but too short yar....................i hope kashish jaldi apni beti se mil le.................n sujal kashish ki misunderstanding khtam ho jaye..................con't soon

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