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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

@Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#831

hi u all....srry 4 nt continuing 4 so long....but was v v bzi...wid job...n den my studies...now m free frm studies...so...thought 2 continue again....as u all wanted me to continue...n i gt many pms...regarding it tooo....so for u all...here is a new part...as promised...

Part 80

Ajj phir 5 saal baad mera uska samna hua...mujhe tu laga tha woh ab mur k kabhi wapis nahee ayegi...par shayad kismet ko ik baar phir zindagi mein humara samna karwana tha...kuch bhi tu nahee badla tha us mei...wohi chehra...jisey mainey toot k chaha tha...wohi ankhein...jis mei merey ilawa kisi ka bhi aks na tha...sab tu wohi tha...haan shayad badal gaya that u us ka dil...jo woh kehti thi...merey ass pass honey pe usey khabar de deta tha...tu ajj phir ajj...kasie usey khabar na huey k mein us k itney kareeb tha...kaisey woh kashish...jis ka dil mom tha...pathar hogaya...usey dukh dard ka ehsas he na raha...ehsas tu shayad 5 saal pehle he khatam hogaya tha..jab usney mujhey chora...mujhey laga tha...meri shart sun k shayad woh ruk jaye...ik maa k liye us ka bacha sab se barh k hota hai...par woh tu sach mein pathar dil nikli...apney he bachey ko...kaisey usney Sonia ko merey hawaley kar diya...dard na hua hoga us ko..apni beti ko aisey...aur woh beti har baar uska poochti hai...dil tu karta hai kahoon...mat yaad karo us pathar dil maa ko...jis ko maa kehna bhi sharam k baat hai...ik baar zindagi mei pheley ik aisi maa se mila tha...jisey apney betey se bhar kar daulat azeez thi...meri apni maa vasu...aur ik baar phir aisi maa se waqt ne milaya...jisey apni khushiyan...apni beti se zyadan pyari thein...apni ana zyada pyari thi usey...kyun bhagwan kyun...meri aur meri beti k zindagi k kahani ik se likh de...merey pass tu phir veena mom thi...par Sonia k pass kon hai...woh kis mein apni maa ko dekhegi...meri mason bachi...mera bachpan tu un tanhayon..un tano...mein guzra...par mein...apni beti k saath aisa kuch nahee honey donga...mein hoon Sonia k pass..aisi maa ka waisey bhi usey kya karna tha...jis ka dil he murda ho chukka hai...usney tu us pyaar k bhi kadar na k...jo kabhi humarey beech tha...kyun kashish...merey pyaar mei kya kami thi...kahan..mainey kuch choora tha...apni muhabatoo mei...k tum ne yun kiya...kyun kashish kyun...

And sujal sits down on the floor and cries his heart out...

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Ajj phir 5 saal baad mera uska samna hua....is liye kabhi India nahee ana chahti thi...yeh desh jahan jab mei pehli baar aye the...kitni khush thi...kitni pyaar bhari sugatein de thein is jagah ne mujhe...meri zindagi k woh haseen lamhein...phir ik baar phir mainey is jagah kadam rakha...us baar apney pyar k naam k sindoor k chamak k saath par...is desh ko mein raas na aye...aur ab ik baar phir...socha tha kabhi phir sujal k samna nahee karongi...magar janti thi...aisa kaisey hoga...angad ney shayad meri khatir us se sab rishtey tor liye hoon...par sneha...usey tu ajj bhi apney sagey bhai se bhar ka manti hai...ana tut ha he usey is shadi mei...mei he shayad dil behla rahee thi...soch ke k nahee ayega sujal...pata nahee agey kya hoga...agar usey adi k barey mei pata lag gaya tu kya hoga...nahee mei kabhi bhi usey adi k barey mei nahee bata sakti...merey jeeney ka sahara ab wohi tu hai...kash adi ko lekey he na ati tu acha tha...par kaha chorti mama papa bhi tu London mei nahee the...kis k pass rehta adi...mei khud kripa k ghar reh rahee thi...mama papa k janey k baad...mujhey kripa se baat karni hogi...kisi bhi halat mei adi sujal se na milney paye...warna...usney merey se adi ko bhi cheen liya tu...nahee mei marr jaongi...plz bhagwan aur nahee...app pehle he sujal ko mujh se durr kar chukey ho...mainey kuch nahee kaha...apka faisla samjh k maan liya...par ab nahee...plz...nahee..

She started crying...sitting down the wall...after some time..

Sujal...kyun tum ne aisa kiya...kyun sujal...tum tu humara yeh rishta bhi torney ko tayar the...meri tu majboori thi...par tum ne...ik baar...sujal...ik baar bhi nahe poocha..kashish...kya hogaya aisa k tum yeh sab kar rahee ho...tum tu kehte the...u knw me so well...itna he jana tha...k un jhotoon pe aitebar kar liya kyun...kyun...tumharey accident se pheley mei tumhein sab bata dena chahti thi...woh blackmailer...uski call...usney jo kaha but...jab tumhara accident hua...mein darr gayi thi sujal...par tum...mein dur hogaye tum se...is darr se k kahein meri wajah se kuch ho na jaye tumhein...par tum...tum ne ik baar poocha nahee k kyun kashish kyun nahee aye..tum hospital mujh se milney...mera poochney...phir jab humein itni bari khushkhabri mili...tum aye the merey pass sujal...par buhat dair ho chuki thi....mei kaisey ati wapis...beech mein buhat kuch choot gaya tha sujal..buhat kuch...merey pass tu chara nahee tha...i had 2 ask 4 divorce...par pata nahee kyun mujhe yakeen tha...k tum kabhi nahee choregey mujhe...apni kashish ko...par tum ne mera woh maan bhi tur diya sujal...jab tumne...aur woh tumhari shart...sujal...kitney kathor hogaye the na tum...ik maa se uska he bacha maang liye...kaisey sujal kaisey...woh meri zindagi ka sab se mushkil faisla tha...agar...haan na karti tu....aur phir adi hua...uskey saath he meri beti...bhi...twins...huey thee...par mei darr gaye...k kahein tum dono ko he na cheen lo mujh se...is liye...tumse jhoot bola...aur adi ko leke chalee gaye...bhag gaye...tumse miley bhagir...janti the...mil lete tu shayad marr he jatii...meri beti...kitni baar mainey usey yaad kiya hai ratoon mei uth k...jab adi rota tha...tu mera dil...us nanhi se pari k liye tarapta tha...kitney kathoor nikley tum sujal...ik maa se uski beti ko cheen gaye...mujhe tu yeh bhi nahee pata ajj meri bachi dekhti kaisi hogi...har choti bachi mei apni beti dekhti hai...jab kripa k haan ria hui thi tu...mera dil tab bhi apni beti k liye tarpa tha...par mujhey tu us ka naam tak nahee maloom tha...aur jab mainey us din kripa se yeh kaha...tu us ne mujhey ria soonp de..k mei is ka naam rakhoo...aur ria mei he tab se apni choti bachi ko dekhney lagi...kya karti maa thi...ajj bhi...beti k yaad tarpa jati hai...(gets quiet for a moment and then thinking something speaks again)hmmm jaisey tum ayoge shaadi mei...ho sakta hai...shayad meri beti bhi aye...kitni bari hogaye hogi app...porey 5 saal k...adi k tarah...mein kripa se keh kar(rubbing her tears)haan us se milongi...tum se chup k...bas ik baar dekhongi...uskey baad shayad kabhi na dekh payoo...kabhi nahee..(and she starts crying again)

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so here is the part after a long gap...

do tell me how it was...have been out of touch with writing for v long...so dono...how da part has formed...hope it is as per ur expectations...

and the number of response...will decide about my next update...so...

till next time...

take carez...😊

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 15 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#832

thank god finally u r back........................am so happy dear..................thanks for the update.................was missing the fic like hell.........................

nice part.....................so sujal doesnt know that he has a son too...................that kashish had twins.....................and he put that condition to kashish............wonder what happened before the leap........................now cont soon and plz pm me.........................dont leave us once again with any long gap................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz complete the story...........................

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#833

amazing part

i really liked the way u described both kashish and sujals feelings it was really an emotional part cant wait till they meet each other and their kids.

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 15 years ago

#834

thanks for the update..... Good to see u back.......

This was a beautiful update.... Pls cont soon

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Priya

@pinky901

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Posted: 15 years ago

#835

Thank u so much for continue it dear

Awesome comeback dear

u described both of dem feelings very well.i can imagine their pain.

pls cont so soon dear.i literally miss ur fics....

Welcome Back Dear

Hurrayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ruhee

@Ruhee_95

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Posted: 15 years ago

#836

thanks for the update....great part....you described their feelings very well 👏 👏....really want to know what happend before the leap....plz make sk meet soon 😊 & plz pm me whenever you continue 😛

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#837

Finally you continued !!

Nice part !! Though I only have a very faint recollection of the story now...Will have to go thru the whole story again !! Hehe!

Continue soon now !

Luv,

Vandu

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

@Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: spvd
thank god finally u r back........................am so happy dear..................thanks for the update.................was missing the fic like hell.........................

nice part.....................so sujal doesnt know that he has a son too...................that kashish had twins.....................and he put that condition to kashish............wonder what happened before the leap........................now cont soon and plz pm me.........................dont leave us once again with any long gap................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz complete the story...........................

thanx 4 liking da part....will cont soon....in a day or two...am working on da nxt update....u will know...about everything as the story will move on....keep reading...

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
amazing part
i really liked the way u described both kashish and sujals feelings it was really an emotional part cant wait till they meet each other and their kids.

m glad ...i hav conveyed to u all da feelings of sk...as i wanted 2 show it 2 u all....da parts may be...more emotional...in future 2...as the story will unfold....keep reading...

Originally posted by: golu_1677
thanks for the update..... Good to see u back.......

This was a beautiful update.... Pls cont soon

m glad 2 be back 2...neva wanted to leave the story in b/w....bt sum circumstances...u see...anyway thnx 4 liking da update...will cont v soon...

Originally posted by: pinky901
Thank u so much for continue it dear

Awesome comeback dear

u described both of dem feelings very well.i can imagine their pain.

pls cont so soon dear.i literally miss ur fics....

Welcome Back Dear

Hurrayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thnx 4 such a sweet welcome...am happy 2 be back 2 writing....its a relief frm daily stress...n lets out ur emotions in words....n m glad...dat m able 2 still write...in da same way aftr lng gap...will cont soon....

Originally posted by: Ruhee_95
thanks for the update....great part....you described their feelings very well 👏 👏....really want to know what happend before the leap....plz make sk meet soon 😊 & plz pm me whenever you continue 😛

thnx 4 liking...will update soon...n will pm 2....keep reading....😊

Originally posted by: togepe30
Finally you continued !!
Nice part !! Though I only have a very faint recollection of the story now...Will have to go thru the whole story again !! Hehe!

Continue soon now !

Luv,

Vandu

yes finally....updated...thnx 4 liking da part....will try to post a reminder recap....b4 nxt update...so u don't have to go through all...80 prts...lolz... will update soon...tc...😊

and thnx 2 all da silent readers as well as the one who liked the post....

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 14 years ago

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samrah

@cute_samrah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#839

hey welcome back.......................grt update after soo many months yar..................miss ur fic ..........................plz con't with the story soon