#3 - AsYa/KaBhi SS: Stalker leading to the Super-Hero..EPILOGUE(19/04) - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Finally the so much awaited nikkah is here !
The mother-daughter scene was so emotional !
Zoya knowing that her mother will have to live alone afterwards !
"Ammi, isn't it possible for you to come along with me ? I don't want you to live here all alone..."
Aaaw ! Zoya is such a cutie pie !😳
Only her can ask something like this😆😆
Loved the way Zainab reasoned her👏
And then Rashid really asking her to come to their place😲
That's so sweet !😳
And he also accepted Zoya has his own daughter👏
Oh my ! Loved Dilshad's answer about the society thinking !👏👏
She's so right !!!
<font size="2">Oh so Mr AAK sent his parents😆</font>
<font size="2">My poor baby Zoya ! Still being teased🤣</font>
<font size="2">He sent them to convince Zainab stay with her😲</font>
<font size="2">He is really Mr Perfect😳😆</font>
<font size="2">Their messages were so cute !</font>
<font size="2">Zoya being jealous😆and impatient to be Mrs Khan 😳</font>
<font size="2">And finally the nikkah happened !🥳</font>
<font size="2">They both are so adorable !</font>
<font size="2">Zoya kissed him and then was all embarassed because of the driver😳😆</font>
"I'm letting you go now, don't expect me to do so tonight..."☺️Naughty are we ?!

A beautiful story has ended * crying out loud on NEB😭*
It was beautifully written👏
<font size="2">But no more drooling on Mr Stalker😆</font>
<font size="2">Oh well, There's still Mr Romantic and Mr Arrogant to drool on😎😆</font>
<font size="2">It was an awesome update like always Baby Sis !👏</font>
<font size="2">Keep writing !😃</font>
<font size="2">Love you always🤗</font>
<font size="2">❤️
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<font size="2">Ps : 1 down 2 to go !😆Wait or maybe 3 comments ?!😕</font>
<font size="2">Oh well never mind ! I'll find out🤣</font>

<font size="2">Pps : When am I getting my dance in Asya's love story ?!😡😡</font>

<font size="2">Ppps : Yeah I know I'm being greedy ! But that's why you love me😳😆</font>
<font size="2">Hey wait you gave us 4 updates in a few days😲You rock Baby !😎⭐️</font>
<font size="2">But I want my dance though😛</font>

<font size="2">Ok Now I think I've finished !😆😉</font>






Ya finally the nikkah ! Asad was waiting for that since their 1st meeting by making her Mrs. Khan ! 😉 😆
Honestly i was crying while writing the mother-daughter exchange ! 😆
Ya i had pity for Rashid because he's present in the SS mais il sert un peu a rien donc pourquoi pas un petit role 😉 🤣
I hate this thinking about the society ! 🤢 thats kind of my answer on the question of "society" 🤢
Indeed Mr. Perfect ! 🤣
Zoya ! *facepalm* 😆 she kissed him but then... 😆
Since i didnt wanted to write a SR (never intend to !) i thought why not a pinch of naughtiness? 😉 ☺️

It had to end na ! *patting ur back on the NEB* 🤣
Awww so sweet ! 🤗
Bye-bye Mr. Super-Hero ! 😳
Even though there is still Mr. Romantic and Mr. Arrogant ! 😆
Awww 😳 🤗
Love u too ! ❤️

PS: i think there r 3 ! 😆

PPS: errmm... Maybe in the next update 😉

PPS: yes, i love u ! 🤗 ❤️ i said that i would be back with a bang so here i am with updates ! 😃 dont worry u will get ur dance ! 😆

😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys ! 😃
See i'm back with an epilogue 😃 😉 i really enjoyed writing this whole SS, so this epilogue goes to each and every readers who read this SS ! Love u guys ! Enjoy !


EPILOGUE :

****2 MONTHS LATER****

"Zoya, where is my file ? Zoya why can't i find anything ? Zoya did you see my watch somewhere ? Zoya..." After two months of marriage, Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan couldn't find anything where he would leave his things, at least that's what he thought, the truth was that he would forget by drowning in his beautiful wife's eyes, Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan.

Zoya came in their only to find her dear husband with his collar up and an undid tie hanging around his neck and a cute frown on his forehead while strands of his hair falling on his eyes, searching for his watch in the cupboard's drawers, she smiled looking at him and crossed her arms accross her chest and marched towards him.

Zoya smirked at him and opened the drawer next to Asad's and took out his red file, handing it to him. Then marched towards the side-table of their bed and handed him his watch, he gave his sheepish smile.

"Zoya, did you see my h...?", before he could complete his question, Zoya turned him around and pointed towards the open drawer with her arm resting on his shoulder, and yes, there it was, his handkershief.

Asad smiled to himself and pulled Zoya in front of him and held her by her waist close to himself while she tied his tie around his neck with a hint of smile and little blush creeping up her cheeks at his stare. When Zoya tip-toed to reach his collar for adjusting it, Asad bent closer brushing his stubbled-cheek against her soft one and inhaling her scent making her lose her sense, but then controlled herself.

"You smell so good, Mrs. Khan..." Asad whispered in his husky voice making her shiver ans she slightly turned and kissed his cheek, lingering there making him smile.

"Asad, don't you think you became a little forgetful as to where your things are kept ?" Zoya asked smiling at him and he brushed his nose against hers in an esquimo kiss.

"That's all your fault, Mrs. Khan... You are the one spoiling me... You are the one who make me forget everyth..." Asad got disturbed when his phone rang and made faces while Zoya giggled.

When Asad hung up his phone, he had worn his 3-pieces suit's jacket, he encircled his arms around Zoya while she was folding the clothes Asad had left scattering on the bed, she smiled.

"Asad, there is something poking me from your jacket's pocket..." Zoya bit her lip knowing what she had placed in his jacket.

Asad frowned and removed his arms from her and rummaged through his pocket and took out a stick and looked at it awkwardly as if asking to the object, what the hell are you ? And what are you doing in my jacket's pocket ? Asad glared at it as if angry for not getting answers from the object.

Zoya laughed at his expressions, "What's this, Mrs. Khan ? And why are you laughing ?" Asad asked confused with his cute little frown and Zoya put her arms around his neck.

"That's your contract for being promoted..." Zoya replied confusing Asad even more.

"What are you talking abo...", before he could complete his sentence, realisation dawned upon him, his eyes wide open, his mouth in "o" unable to voice a word out, he slowly put his hand on her stomach, asking through his eyes and she nodded.

Asad picked her up in his arms and twirled her around in his arms making her shriek in delight then complaining about her dizziness making him stop, he put hr down and hugged her close to himself while whispering non-stop thank yous and she rested her head on his shoulder.

Asad broke the hug and kissed her softly, lovingly, as if a porcelain afraid to break in pieces.

"Zoya, you just gave me the world's best news, you just made me... Ahh i dont even have words... Thank you Zoya... Thank you so much !!" Asad expressed while stroking her cheek lovingly.

"You dont need to thank me, you made me the world's luckiest girl by marrying me, having such a caring and loving husband is not in the faith of everybody..." Zoya replied tearily and he kissed her forehead taking her into his embrace once again.

*********

Zoya hid shyly behind Asad when they announced her pregnancy to their family.

Everybody shrieked in glee, Zainab, Dilshad and Najma litteraly jumped on Asad to reach Zoya, he moved away his hands up. Rashid took him in a hug, then Ayaan's turn, both congratulating the soon-to-be father.

After a moment Ayaan spoke with a devilish smirk and whispered, "Hmm... So this time it's true, huh ? Wow Bhaijaan, you dont waste time ! Just married only since two months and Bhabhi is already pregnant ! Waah Bhaijaan !" Ayaan winked at Asad and he muttered 'shameless' before smirking.

"Ammi, Abbu, do you know who i saw yesterday while coming back from office, i was on the road and there was some traffic so i was stopped near the park, and guess who i saw ? I saw...", Ayaan was pleading Asad not to reveal anything through his eyes and Asad being Asad, covered him, "Zeeshan." Asad winked at Ayaan and Ayaan looked at him gratefuly.

Everybody had a good family time together, all were excited for the entry of this future new born baby, their excitement knew no limits !


****8 MONTHS LATER****

After eight months of over-protectiveness, of love, of care, Zoya had been rushed to the hospital when her water broke, with Asad all panicked for his queen and princess, indeed they were going to have a daughter.

Asad was by her side throughout the delivery, himself feeling weak looking at Zoya's state and her cries, but remained by her side knowing that she needed his presence and his re-assurance for the moment.

After many hours, Zoya delivered a beautiful, healthy, little baby. Asad was the first one to take his princess in his arms, he was overwhelmed looking at this angel in his arms, few tears escaped his eyes and he kissed that little angel's forehead after giving her an esquimo kiss.

Zoya looked at both of them in awe, she was now a mother and Asad was her child's father, how could she get luckier, he had proved himself being the most caring and loving husband throughout her pregnancy, taking care of her, bearing all her tantrums and being present at all the stages of the angel's growth.

Asad looked at Zoya who was also crying tears of happiness looking the father-daughter duo. He went and sat beside Zoya, encircling his arms around Zoya's arms, so that both of them were carrying their angel in their arms, Zoya bent to caress her cheek against the baby's, then leaving a feather like kiss on her forehead, while Asad kissed her temple, "Our angel, our Muskaan... (Smile)", both whispered at the same time, the name of their angel, their Muskaan, Muskaan Ahmed Khan.


****5 YEARS LATER****

Asad carried Muskaan in his arms to the emergency of the hospital, when Muskaan bruised her knee while getting down from her three tyres cycle, her cries scaring the hell out of him.

After shouting in the hospital's emergency for a doctor to check his daughter, a nurse came to warn that they were in a hospital and Asad kept shooting daggers at him, shouting on her that his daughter is hurt, she gulped down her saliva and called for a doctor.

The doctor checked on her, examined her, Muskaan holding her Abbu's hand throughout the examination, she was indeed her Abbu's princess, Zoya smiled looking at the scene unfold in front of her, she was pregnant once again, it was her sixth month.

When Muskaan was getting scared for the injection, scared looking at the needle, Asad distracted her, telling her a fairy tale, but he couldnt help but wince secretly when he saw the needle poking in her skin, everything was over and Muskaan's treatment was done.

"That's like my angel ! See Angel, there was this huge needle poking in your skin, but you didn't even cry, Abbu is proud of you !" Asad said while tugging Muskaan's long hair behind her ears and kissing her forehead before picking her up and going out of the hospital carefuly holding Zoya with his arm encircling her shoulder, she shook her head at the father-daughter duo's cuteness.


****18 YEARS LATER****

Asad cried for weeks, ever since his Angel's marriage was fixed he cried as if he was the bride himself, but never cried in front of her, not wanting to make her upset. Zoya would always comfort him telling him that there was Zayd, their son, who would always be there, even though Zoya was herself fighting in an inner turmoil, too emotional thinking that their angel who wasnt little anymore, would be going away.

Asad hid his tears from Muskaan on other days but not today, it was her wedding day, Muskaan had slept last night in her Abbu's arms, keeping her head on his chest while her Ammi kept caressing her hair lovingly throughout the night.

When Muskaan was ready with the help of her Ammi, both had kept shedding tears just like Zainab and Zoya on her wedding day. Then Asad came in the room, admiring how beautiful his angel was looking in a bridal attire, finally, freely, tears escaped his eyes and on seeing them even Muskaan couldnt control her own tears and crashed herself in her father, in her Abbu's arms, while he hugged her back tightly, kissing the top of her head.

Asad kept on murmuring 'my Angel' and Muskaan 'Abbu', while Zoya freely let her tears flow down her cheeks. Asad and Muskaan kept on crying in each other's arms, even Zayd entered the room and stood next to them, crying he also, whispering 'Aapi'. Asad took Zayd into the hug and also gestured to Zoya to come for the hug. They all hugged each other, together, in family, knowing that such opportunities are going to lessen, they hugged telling how much they love each other, they hugged with all their might.


****15 YEARS LATER****

"Can you guys imagine ? Your Naana/Daada and your Naani/Daadi met like this ! Isn't it true Mrs. Khan ?" Asad told their grand-children about his and Zoya's love story.

An old Zoya came and sat next to an old Asad on the couch, while all the grand-children were sitting on the carpet, looking at Asad while he was telling the kids their love-story. Him calling her Mrs. Khan still had the same effect on her, she would blush like a newly-wed, that really amazed Asad.

Asad put his arm around Zoya, "Thanks to that Stalker, who led me to MY Super-Hero...", Zoya said looking lovingly in Asad eyes who smiled back at him, they were together, forever...


**********THE END**********




PS: yes, this SS is officially over, completed, i enjoyed every bits of writing this whole SS, i hope u liked it too, Thank you so much for supporting me at each step, for showering your love upon me, Thank you so much for being there and commenting !! 🤗 ❤️

PPS: guys i hope u wont disappoint me, please do give ur feedbacks for a last time, i will be waiting for it !! 😳

Love u guys ! 🤗
Your Bano/Apple ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You indeed gave the Epilogue ! 👏
Guess you DIDN'T have a choice ! 🤣
Aaw ! After 2 months, Asad is totally dependent on Zoya ! 😳
It's so funny to see how Zoya keeps giving him his things 😆😆
The tie scene was just cute 😳
Asad is still naughty
And Zoya is still teasing him
You are the one spoiling me 😳 it made me think of the famous : I want to spoil you
Asad and the stick ! 😆
"That's your contract for being promoted..." Oh well , that's how to announce to your husband you're pregnant in Zoya's stylish ! 😎 Wifeys ! Learn from her ! 🤣🤣🤣
The announcement to the family was so cute ! 😳
Ayaan ! 🤣🤣 He's so funny ! Shameless ! 😆
But Asad always knows how to get back at him ! 😎
Apple Baby ! You learn from Asad ! 😉 To get back at your Rakshas bro 😡😡
(*me advising you on NEB hoping you won't get mad at me for calling your bro Rakshas ! * 🤣🤣)

And finally the little princess is here ! 😳
The little moment between the moment was a bliss ! 👏

Omg ! Poor nurse ! To face the wrath of AAK ! 😆
Asad as always overprotective 😳
And Zoya is pregnant again !? 😳
Did I tell you how much I love Asad here!? ❤️
He's such a cutie pie !

Aaaw ! His little princess is getting married !
But Zayd is there 😳 Even though it wouldn't be the same without her !
The scene was so emotional !
I thought she would ask them to come with her as Zoya did ! 😆😆
The family hug ! ❤️👏

And Asya narrating their love story to their grandkids was perfect ! 👏👏
"Thanks to that Stalker, who led me to MY Super-Hero...",
You think I'll find miine before the end of this year ?! 😕🤣🤣
You know what I mean 😉

It was just FLAWLESS Baby Sis !!
Loved it ! And love is still a small word !
It was one of my most favorite SS !
And I'll surely miss it A LOT !
Thank you so much for writing such a piece of work !
And for giving me another reason to keep drooling on AAK ! ☺️
This time is the form of a romantic and naughty Super-Hero
You're an amazing writer ! ⭐️
Keep writing !
Love you always 🤗
❤️

Edited by zola007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it!!!

Awesome!!!

I'm sad it's done now!!!

But happy the way it ended!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Waah kya epilouge tha 👏
Ek hi baar main kitne leaps 🤣
But srsly bohut cute tha 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome + cute epilouge...👏

Just love it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
THAT WAS TOOO CUTE I LOVED IT THANX FOR THE PM AND PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING CANT WAIT FOR UR NEW STORIES 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome finale..
Loved the family hug..
keep penning..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bano ji awesome epilogue Buddy. Loved how you narrated the story till they had their grandchildren. That's a first I saw in any story on the forum.
Thanks for the pm. Hope to see your new ff soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks... super ending...with lots of love 🤗

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