SanDhir SS :: As Long As You Love Me *Day 4 Updated* - Page 5

Originally posted by: forevermine

hahahahahahah definitely mee damon lover !!! bechari Soni *the gals signature ur staring at was so jealous she is crying out of it!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 hahahahah she is in love with jermy!!!

hahahahaha sneha read my updateee duh!!! 🤣 🤣

Beautifully penned down the first chapter. So he gave her the first reason to live are the machines. Very unique idea.

Okay , Okay . This time it's my turn . I saw this SS , and I wanted to read all the 10 parts at once . I know :') that didn't work out .
Firstly , the prologue new concept , reminds me of Anjaana Anjaani :D
Secondly ,
The colorful part was -Sonia di I guess and the Grey part -Saffy . It's combined so all give you a on the whole perspective .
Randhir : Uhmm I think I like him , he's someone who looks forward to life and I thank the Lords he's helping Sanyukta find reasons to live , even though he doesn't know why , neither do I ? But that's a reason to live . * Saw a slight symbolism : She trusts him , with her life , quite literally*
Sanyukta : I'm sad for her , but I dont think that's a reason to die . Ma'am Randhir se seekho .
SanDhir : I'd love to see how this goes forward . Btw , Randhir is so observant and smart . What an Idea ! :O
Saffy : I'm judging color wise , so by presuming it's you . You should be punished for not writing . I like the way you write :P
Btw , you cracked me up on * No ones POV * that was funny . A good start to your part already , I loved the pace . I'm enjoying it .
Sonia Di : Presuming you wrote the POV's they were really good . I loved both their POV's .

Bye , scrap kar do next part :D

Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

Okay , Okay . This time it's my turn . I saw this SS , and I wanted to read all the 10 parts at once . I know :') that didn't work out .
Firstly , the prologue new concept , reminds me of Anjaana Anjaani :D
Secondly ,
The colorful part was -Sonia di I guess and the Grey part -Saffy . It's combined so all give you a on the whole perspective .
Randhir : Uhmm I think I like him , he's someone who looks forward to life and I thank the Lords he's helping Sanyukta find reasons to live , even though he doesn't know why , neither do I ? But that's a reason to live . * Saw a slight symbolism : She trusts him , with her life , quite literally*
Sanyukta : I'm sad for her , but I dont think that's a reason to die . Ma'am Randhir se seekho .
SanDhir : I'd love to see how this goes forward . Btw , Randhir is so observant and smart . What an Idea ! :O
Saffy : I'm judging color wise , so by presuming it's you . You should be punished for not writing . I like the way you write :P
Btw , you cracked me up on * No ones POV * that was funny . A good start to your part already , I loved the pace . I'm enjoying it .
Sonia Di : Presuming you wrote the POV's they were really good . I loved both their POV's .

Bye , scrap kar do next part :D

Originally posted by: forevermine

nidhi the entire thing was written by me babes!!! hahahah its gonna alternate chaps!! 🤣

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I just got confused :$ Oops !
But it was really good . I love the pace an you have an exceptionally refreshing style of writing .
Ahmazing :D
Loved it !
Next part please scrap karo <3

Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

I just got confused :$ Oops !
But it was really good . I love the pace an you have an exceptionally refreshing style of writing .
Ahmazing :D
Loved it !
Next part please scrap karo <3

I have no idea why but when I was reading the Prologue I remembered Pink's Just Give Me a Reason.

Awesome update!!!😊