SanDhir FF || The Aberration *On hold* - Page 8

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.

wow...lovely update di...

sanyukta screamed...and randhir was worried...but it was all her plan..

i loved her surprise...

sandhir romance was ☺️

Originally posted by: Iptisha

Very well balanced...with sensuality yet no vulgarity and lust... I guess while writing these kind of hotness the balance becomes the icon... Commendable work!!... I won't say update soon.. Moreover would say take Your time to deliver the best!!... Congo for the new designation this week... Thinking of interesting questions to ask!l

P.s- as the story began i was getting vibes of ghajni... Thank god that it didn't turn out to be alike coz ghajni scene (the death one) was just so painful and I could definitely not see sandhir die...!

Originally posted by: sandhir_arakshi

Why is there no 'love' button instead of a 'like'? This is so unfair. *huffs and puffs* Can't someone just love an update :/
Though I'm even struggling to hit the LIKE one, some problem I suppose.
Anyways, coming back to the update...
Holy Christ! The essence of the horror or should I say suspense was intact from the very beginning of the story.
The way Sanyunkta acted, I really felt she was in trouble and the scences following, proved it to be very much real but then 'boom' you burst the bubble. It was his birthday. *sigh*
Their night together was so very well narrated. I applause you for the commendable job. I've read many stories but never or hardly do I find love making so appealing. You decribed it with simplicity and perfection.
And the fear or so you call it anxiety continues :)
Writing horror is something very challenging and I wish you all the luck. I know you would bring the best out of it.
Thanks a lot for the scrap.

Originally posted by: krisrock

*sorry* for late commenting...

You actually updated the 1st part...I was eagerly waiting to read the 1st part of this story...

Coming to the 1st part...WOW...👏👏.

It was amazing...

I really like your writing skills...

You always forces me to imagine each and everything😆 ...

At first I thought that you are creating such a big suspense in the 1st part itself😕...

But when I read...I relaxed a bit😉...

Awww...their romantic gestures...I loved them😳😳...

I just grew more excited on reading the last line..."that it is their last night of love"...

Hope soon the things will get mysterious😛...

But I wanna complain on such a *Chhotu* sa update😭...

Next time a bigger one😃...

Originally posted by: jtmbarun

OMG..Sonia..Chapter one is awesome!!👏

Very very well-written..The first part I thought something really happened to sanyukta..You wrote it very well..I could not guess at all that it may be a surprise..

And their romance..Oh I loved it..😳

And the last line..What will happen now???😲

Please update soon dear!!😛

Thank you!!!🤗

Originally posted by: -Saba-

oh...u posted chapter one.👏
yeah it is amazing all over.
and romantic ☺️ totally...
first chapter with immense romance would love to read more..
any story with romance gets complicated next.now i am curious
u naughty girl ..really love first part
love the songs u used in it.
now waiting for next one.
sorry for late reply.