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Why is there no 'love' button instead of a 'like'? This is so unfair. *huffs and puffs* Can't someone just love an update :/
Though I'm even struggling to hit the LIKE one, some problem I suppose.
Anyways, coming back to the update...
Holy Christ! The essence of the horror or should I say suspense was intact from the very beginning of the story.
The way Sanyunkta acted, I really felt she was in trouble and the scences following, proved it to be very much real but then 'boom' you burst the bubble. It was his birthday. *sigh*
Their night together was so very well narrated. I applause you for the commendable job. I've read many stories but never or hardly do I find love making so appealing. You decribed it with simplicity and perfection.
And the fear or so you call it anxiety continues :)
Writing horror is something very challenging and I wish you all the luck. I know you would bring the best out of it.
Thanks a lot for the scrap.
Though I'm even struggling to hit the LIKE one, some problem I suppose.
Anyways, coming back to the update...
Holy Christ! The essence of the horror or should I say suspense was intact from the very beginning of the story.
The way Sanyunkta acted, I really felt she was in trouble and the scences following, proved it to be very much real but then 'boom' you burst the bubble. It was his birthday. *sigh*
Their night together was so very well narrated. I applause you for the commendable job. I've read many stories but never or hardly do I find love making so appealing. You decribed it with simplicity and perfection.
And the fear or so you call it anxiety continues :)
Writing horror is something very challenging and I wish you all the luck. I know you would bring the best out of it.
Thanks a lot for the scrap.
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
