SanDhir FF || The Aberration *On hold*

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SanDhir FF || The Aberration
*a Horror Fiction*

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Prologue

Sanyukta Agarwal and Ranyukta Agarwal are twin sisters. Sanyukta, has a recent shocking history of her twin sister, Ranyukta committing suicide.

Sanyukta is already betrothed to Randhir Singh Shekawat from a prominent family.

But, when her mother suddenly falls down from the staircase ending up in paralysis; Sanyukta and Randhir proceed to her Queenies Palace.

Once they reach there, they are into more mysteries as the spirit of Ranyukta starts to haunt Sanyukta, which even physically disturbs her.

Within days from a series of horrifying incidents; arrives Dr. Vardhaan with his style of wit and wisdom, to treat Sanyukta and to help her out of the crisis that she is presently in.

Will Dr. Vardhaan be able to help her out ???
What lead Ranyukta Agarwal to commit suicide ???
OR was it really suicide ???

Why is
Ranyukta's spirit haunting Sanyukta ???

Does spirit / ghosts exist in real or is it just an illusion of our mind ???



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Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4



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|| CHARACTER SKETCH ||

Queenies Palace



An ancient Palace of Agarwal family.
Anju Agarwal along with her daughters live her for past 20 years.
They shifted to Queenies palace after the accidental death of Mr. Agarwal.
Mr. Agarwal 's Mother too lived with them.
She was mentally retarded and was locked in a room for years. She passed away a month back Renyukta committed suicide

MAIN LEADS

Krip Suri as Dr. Vardhaan



A brilliant yet frolicsome Psychiatrist

Param Singh Bhatia as Randhir Singh Shekawat



A very sweet guy. From a very prominent reputed Christian family.
Madly in love with Sanyukta Agarwal.
Working in an Multinational Company in Mumbai

Harshita Gaur as Sanyukta Agarwal



Betrothed to Randhir Sigh Shekawat. Identical Twin sister of Ranyukta.
Working in Radiant Media Pvt. Ltd, Mumbai.
Very jovial, fun loving girl. Good at whatever field she step in;
be it dancing, singing, painting, sports, whatever.

Harshita Gaur as Ranyukta Agarwal



Dead. Identical Twin sister of Sanyukta.
Have vision problem (Please imagine her wearing glasses)
A bit of a silent reserved nature. She is also good at everything
like Sanyukta; but very shy to express herself

SUPPORTING ROLES

Nishha Nehha Nayak as Vidushi



Distant relative of Agarwal family.
Sister of Yo Yo Sher Singh

Prince Dua as Yo Yo Sher Singh



Distant relative of Agarwal Family.
Vidushi 's brother


Zohaib Siddiqui as Kabir: Helper in Agarwal family

GUEST ROLES

Rishi Shekawat : Uncle of Randhir. Head of Shekawat family

Father Damien : Priest

Sahil:
Business Tycoon. Rich affiliated. Willing to buy Queenies Palace

Anju Agarwal
: Sanyukta and Ranyukta 's Mother



Characters will be added / removed as per requirement

Note : If any of you can help me with a Banner for this FF, please let me know. The Banner should include Vardhaan, Randhir, Sanyukta and Ranyukta.
Other characters optional.

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Chapter 1

A busy evening of Mumbai. 'Mumbai' a city that never sleeps ... which is dream city for most of the youth. A busy place ... people walking on the paths, horns of vehicles blowing, red signal, heavy traffic; vendors roaming here and there to sell their items.

In between all these chaos; we spot a black BMW. A young handsome hunk sitting on the driving seat. He had his goggles on making him look dashing. Tapping fingers on the steering, he was listening to music played.

[Music playing in the car]

She's like a star,
(Like a star, like a star)

She's my everything,
Like a morning girl,
She's my angel, up above my world,
And she's the only one, who understands me,
That's why I call her, my new family,

See she's the only one that I want by my side,
She's the only one that I believe can save my life,
She makes me want to be a better man (Oh I)
She's higher than the sky, the suns and the moon,

She's like a star,
(Like a star, like a star)
Ooh baby she's like a star,
(Like a star, like a star)
Ooh baby she's like a star,
(Like a star, like a star)
Ooh baby she's like a star,
(Like a star, like a star)


A smile adored his lips thinking about his lady love. His reverie was broke by the ring on his Samsung Galaxy Note 3 gifted by his ladylove.


He smiled looking at the pic

" Hel "

He couldn't complete, when he heard Sanyukta scream

" Randhirrr "

" Hello Sanyukta ... Hello?!? "

" AHHH!!! "

" Sanyukta ??? Hello Hello Sanyukta "

[Call Disconnected]

God knows how Randhir managed to rush to her apartment in between that busy traffic.
Did he break traffic rules??? is traffic police following him ? God knows

He just don't care ... all he care as of now is Sanyukta, that's it.

He entered into the dark apartment.

" Sanyukta ? "

No response. All he could hear was his audible panting and the clock sound.

He entered in ... he checked his jacket for mobile

"Shit! i forgot my mobile in the car"

He turn around to go back to his car when the door got shut in a swift.

He rushed to the door, but was too late. The door was locked.

" Sanyukta " He called again

No response. He moved inside.

He heard dripping sound and moved inside to the kitchen to find the tap not closed properly. He closed the taps. He was about to turn when he saw a shadow pass by on the kitchen windows.

" Who is there ??? "

" Sanyukta??? "

Sanyukta use to be back home by around 10.30-11. Now its around 12 ... to be exact 11:59 PM ... still where is she?

He was thinking about Sanyukta

When he heard her scream from the hall

"AHHH"

He rushed to the hall ... searched here and there but couldn't find anyone.

The clock strike clock 12...

The sudden sound panic him. Out of blue, someone closed his eyes from behind.

The lights came. He slowly opened his eyes when she withdrew her hands.

The hall was been decorated with purple orchids and different colors of roses. Giving it a natural and classy look.

" Happy Birthday Randhir "
She whispered into his ear.

In a swift, he turn around to look at are

"you okay ???"

"Yes! Randhir am perfectly alright"

"What the hell is this Sanyukta ???
You have no idea how worried i was"

"I just wanted to give you a surprise on your birthday"

"Surprise? you wanted to give Surprise or heart attack???"

"Okay now don't spoil the mood...
am sorry"

She said sorry in the most innocent and with a puppy face.
Now how is Randhir suppose to be angry.

He hug her tight. Kissed her forehead ... nose ... cheek ...
His gaze fell on her lips. He slowly lessened the distance.

Their lips were inches apart almost brushing them yet there was a millimeter distance still remaining to be filled, his warm breath brushing Sanyukta 's face.

But ... he gulped and closed his eyes. "It wasn't right" he thought.

Sanyukta opens her eyes not feeling his lips against her.

" Sorry "

" ??? "

" I know you aren't ready for "

She didn't allow him to complete

" Am all yours tonight "
* gives a quick peck on his lips *

Happy! would of course be an understatement about Randhir 's current state.

He took her up in his arms (bridal style) to the bedroom


Labon ko labon pe sajaao
kya ho tum mujhe abb bataao

Tod do khud ko tum baahon mein meri
baahon mein baahon mein meri baahon mein


Coming to the bed, Randhir placed her down on it and he laid by side, using his arm for support. For a few seconds, Randhir gazed at her... moved his hand forward and tucked a strand of hair behind the ear and then cupped her face softly and kissed her.

Tere ehsaason mein, bheege lamhaaton mein,
mujhko duba tishnagi si hai
teri adaayon se dilkash khataao se
in lamho mein zindagi si hai

haya ko jara bhool jaao
meri hi tarah pesh aao

kho bhi do khud ko tum
raaton mein meri
raaton mein

labon ko labon pe sajaao
kya ho tum mujhe abb bataao


It was his time to show his love to her. He licked her lips and kissed her passionately. Just the way she liked to be kissed. Sliding her blouse and exposing her shoulder he caressed her skin over there making her aware of his intentions. She blushed furiously thinking of herself being totally exposed in front of him. He bit her shoulder bone and kissed her breathing strongly over her skin, burning it at the same time. She arched back being pleasured and moved her head other side so that he can devour her fully.

tere jasbaaton mein mehaki si saanso mein,
ye jo mehek sandili si hai
dil ki panaaho mein, bikhari si aaho mein
sone ki khaaish jagi si hai

chehare se chehara chupaao,
sine ki dhadkan sunaao
dekh lo khud ko tum
aankhon mein meri aankhon mein

labon ko labon pe sajaao
kya ho tum mujhe abb bataao


She was moaning in pleasure which was making him go mad all over again. Now he couldn't stop himself. He took off his shirt while kissing her and then took off her top at once. And started kissing her very passionately. Then he took the blanket and covered them from it and made love with her.

Eventually, both fell asleep in each others' arms, in complete bliss and pure love. Little did they know that tonight was their last night of fun.


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Chapter 2

The bright stars faded deep in the sky and the crescent moon slipped to calm sleep welcoming its neighbor sun to guard its duty. The sun-rays took its path into the room besides least bothered about the closed window panes. It kissed her face making her mumble in her sleep.

She opened her eyes lazily and saw him lying beside her. Her lips automatically curved to a smile. She tried to wake up from the bed but something stopped. His hands were wrapped around her waist tightly making her unable to move. She rustled his hair gently. He moaned a bit due to the sudden discomfort and took off his hands from her waist to cover his face from the bright morning sunlight. She smiled at him. But there was one more hindrance. Oops! She was naked. She grabbed a blanket from nearby, wrapped it around and started walking towards the restroom.

She splashed some water forcefully on her face. She touched her bare shoulders "sss.." she hissed in pain. She never expected this. The better phrase would be that she never ever dreamt of it. She could feel his love bites and nail marks all over her body. She slowly let the blanket drop, when a warm pair of hand pulled her holding her waist sending goosebumps all around her body.

Fortunately or unfortunately Sanyukta forgot to lock the washroom door, which has now allowed her Randhir to enter when she was inside. Sanyukta gasped feeling him and tried to move but he did not let her move. Randhir hide his face inside her hair and let out a husky warm "Good Morning" which forced her to close her eyes and feel his closeness early morning.

Randhir kept on holding her and swaying along with her a little still half asleep. After a minute or two Randhir slowly opened his eyes and looked at her messed up morning face through the mirror. He was totally lost in her and her eyes. A crimson blushed crept through her cheeks.The moment she realized what he was up to she quickly held his hand and stopped him.

Randhir opened his eyes and met his eyes with her through the mirror and gestured her "What?" through his expressive eyes. Sanyukta gripped his hand and tried to push, but Randhir never let that happen. "Let me feel you Sanyukta" he pleaded. "Leave me Randhir, we are getting late" "No" he said in a husky tone lifting her and placing her under the shower. In no time both were covered with foam and soapy bubbles flying around unable to withstand their love.

*~* *~*

Sanyukta quickly kissed his cheeks and got down from the car. "Bye Randhir ;) See you in the evening" "Bye!" Randhir threw a flying kiss to Sanyukta and she grabbed it and send it back by blowing it gradually spreading her fingers towards him. Randhir smiled and then drove off.

Sanyukta was in her cabin, her mind drifted towards yesterday night incident. She blushed furiously at her thoughts. Out of blue, Sahil (her colleague) rushed to the cabin making Sanyukta jump out of her skin.

"Sanyukta, you need to help me"

"What happened???"

"Sanyukta, please its very urgent. Please can you go to Camelot for the Advertisement shoot on my behalf"

Listening to Sahil, Sanyukta was lost in her thoughts. Sahil shook her to bring her back from her thoughts. Sahil looked at her; made her face him by holding her by shoulders. Sighing he said "See Sanyukta, i know ... i know you don't want to go there ... Camelot is near Queenies Palace and you haven't been there after Ranyukta's " *he didn't complete the sentence as Sanyukta shot a look at him* Again sighing, he continued "please do this for me. I have a very important function to attend and Arnav (their Boss) won't allow anyone else other than you"
Sanyukta looked at him, calculating something in her mind; she said with a low smile "Ok! i will go. Talk to Arnav and make the arrangements"
Sahil gave her a quick hug and left the cabin to make the arrangement for her trip to Camelot.

Sanyukta rang Randhir to let him know about her trip. Randhir ask her to come to the reception area of Radiant Media (her office) as his Uncle, Mr. Rishi Shekawat had come to meet them. Sanyukta was nervous, but somehow manages to reach there soon.

They discuss about Ranyukta. Rishi Shekawat consoles her. Sanyukta says she is planning to bring her Mother too to Mumbai, they don't want to stay in Queenies Palace anymore. Rishi supports her decision. They also discuss about SanDhir marriage. And comes into a conclusion of holding marriage exactly 45 days from now. Rishi wants to hold the marriage in Shekawat Mansion (which is just 20 KMs away from Queenies Palace), as all their relative prefer the same. Sanyukta reluctantly agrees to him; as she knows it won't be good for her, to go against Mr. Rishi Shekawat.


*~* *~*

Week swift like a flash in the pan making everyone busy in their works reaching the end of week. Finally Randhir's wait came to an end, Sanyukta will be back from Camelot today. It's been 72 hours Randhir haven't seen her. He himself don't know how he survived and how he planning to survive for next 3 more hours. He had just made may be around 320 calls and 450 messages during these 72 hours. After his birthday night every thing changed, he just wanted to spend each and every moment of his life with his love.

Waiting...waiting for someone is most tiresome thing one could ever want to experience. And this waiting process seems more difficult and hateful when you are impatiently waiting for the one you love the most in the world. At such times every single progress of minute seems like ages has been gone. Just the way Randhir Singh Shekawat was feeling right now. He glared at the exist
for like millionth time as if the exist will generate her, fearing his glares.

Just when he was about to dial her number a soft wave of breeze whispered her arrival in his ear, making him close his eyes. He sighed in automatic relief which surrounded him just with her presence. Randhir opened his car door for her and gestured her to get inside the car. Randhir closed the door and hopped inside the car from the other door. Both of them tied their seat belts. He ignite the car and drove towards their apartment. She was quiet mostly and he kept on stealing glances at her.

Sanyukta gets a call on her cell. She was taking on the phone, she ask Randhir to stop the car as she was not able to listen to the call properly. Randhir parks the car to the side and looks to his side to find a lifeless Sanyukta dropping her mobile from her hand.



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Chapter 3

~ After 40 days ~

A cold Northerly wind blew bitterly, chilling him to his marrow as he opened the rusty ancient cast iron gate. Overhead, dark clouds blotted out the full moon from time to time, casting the centuries old cemetery into an inky blackness, yet further a field, he could see the storm gathering. Lightening flashed in the distance and he hurried along with the chore that brought him out in the middle of the night.

Thunder light falling on his face and drawing attention to his paleness. A guy in his mid-twenties, his eyes seemed worn out from the long awaken night. And his face had an unreadable expression, it was almost plain; as if having no emotions. His head was over loaded with many thoughts.

Moving further into the cemetery, a fresh chill ran anew along his spine. Grayish white head stones dotted the landscape before him. Everywhere he turned, a silence prevailed, yet not so silent that no noise at all spoke to his un - steadied nerve. Amongst the tree's, the wind whispered, called to him. A bush, its living green now dormant rattled against some unknown tombstone.

The clouds started to rumble and in no time it started raining. At first it was drizzling; but soon it turn to heavy pouring. He was shivering badly in the cold rain. A lone tear escaped from his eyes as he stood in front of her grave.

~*~ Flashback ~*~

A limousine car stopped outside with a huge screeching sound. Before Randhir could say anything, Sanyukta came out of the car. She was standing in front of Queenies Palace. Randhir parked the car and came out with their luggage. Queenies Palace Luxurious, Grand, Magnificent, Immense, Towering, Picturesque. A well maintained Palace with around 50-75 workers at a time. Listening to the sound of the car, workers came running. Sanyukta stood lifeless in front of the building. The man being in his late forties, wore a dark mustache which gave his features an even more demeaning look, if that was even possible. He was a dark man, with a masculine figure. He wore a black coat, which helped him hide his existence in the dark from the rest of the city. He had an evil smirk on his face which could make a shiver run down one's spine. He came stood in front of Sanyukta. Giving her a comforting hug; he walk towards Randhir. Randhir stood puzzled, not understanding who he is. Sanyukta turn around and said "Randhir, he is Kabir. He looks after Queenies in our absence". Randhir nod his head and look at Kabir.

Kabir : When did you guys reach ??? Met Anju Ji ???
Randhir : Ya, we are coming from the hospital. We started as soon as we got the call. What actually happened here ???

One among the worker says "its all done by Ranyukta ... her spirit is roaming here ... many among us saw her here for last few days"

Everyone looked at him except for Sanyukta who was sitting on the sofa and looking petrified.

Randhir : What rubbish ???

Another worker (Lady) : No Beta, it isn't rubbish. Anju Ji herself told me, two days back she met Ranyukta and spoke to her.

Randhir looked disgusted at the fact.
There was growing fear in the community that Ranyukta's was not some ordinary death. There were rumors being spread around like wildfire that Ranyukta's spirit is roaming around Queenies.

Kabir (to workers) : Enough ... now all of you go back to your works. Sanyukta and Randhir will be here for few days; make the required arrangement. Now, leave all of you.

Kabir (to SanDhir) : You both don't worry. Anju Ji slip down from staircase, may be cause she was carrying lots of cloths with her. She will be fine soon

Sanyukta starts crying thinking about her Mom.

Randhir signals Kabir to leave, and will handle Sanyukta. Kabir leaves.

Randhir : *cupping her cheeks* Its ok Sanyukta. Mumma will be fine soon.

Sanyukta : Her whole body is paralyzed, she can't move any body parts nor she able to speak anything. Doctors too aren't sure when she gonna get ok ... what about our marr
She stopped there, getting a bit conscious.

Randhir cupped her cheeks and looked into her eyes "Trust me, everything will be fine soon. Now you go freshen up. You must be tired after the journey. Take a nap, everything will be fine"

Sanyukta nodded happily "Thank you for always being with me"

Randhir : No matter what ... i will always be with you, Sanyukta.

"Forever and beyond" she said softly as his lips descended upon hers and showered her with the gentlest kisses as his mouth moved slowly upon hers, making her heartbeat thunderously, making her close her eyes and vanish in a toe curling kiss.

~*~

She walked in to her room and looked around. Memories of her and her sister came fresh in her mind. Each and every corner had a story to say. The days both sisters spent together with their Mumma.

Ranyukta was always silent and reserved whereas Sanyukta was a chatterbox. Ranyukta took time to make friends; in fact all her friends (which was not more than 2-3 for sure) was through Sanyukta. Sanyukta loved Ranyukta a lot, she was ready to do anything and everything for her. On the other hand, though Ranyukta loved Sanyukta, she was always jealous of the love Sanyukta receives over her. She had created her own shell and use to live in it. Ranyukta had always thought Randhir loved her; when she came to know SanDhir was in love she was beyond angry. She blamed Sanyukta for all and always hurt her with harsh words.

Sanyukta dumped her bag in the cupboard, tying her hair in loose bun, turn around to collect her belongings from the cupboard to freshen up.

A hissing sound was heard, something snapped. Sanyukta looked around wondering where that sound was coming from. Sanyukta began to shudder. Her heart began to fill with despair. She began to hyperventilate.

Suddenly some force grabbed Sanyukta by the hair, pushed her on the floor; kicked her in the stomach

Sanyukta let out a scream...Ahhh

Sanyukta who was in shock couldn't believe what she saw...Ranyukta ?????

The Spirit burst in laughter...HAHAHAHAHAHA


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Omg omg i would love to read it...plz update soon
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WOW something very very new... Eagerly waiting... Though I don't like horror but still looking forward 😆
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