Start of Something beautiful #Tujhko jo paaya ( KR ) part 7-pg31. - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Oh it's nice... Please PM me when you update..

Rey is in airforce... Wow. This keeps getting better and better...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Interesting totally loved it
Kriyam are sooo cute and thats an awesome twist
Kriya's cuteness is sooo good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
that's suprbbblyy amazinggg ... I m totaly in lov wid dis stry babe... Diff. Frm othr wrks of urs... Amazing concept... Humor , crazy , hilarious , funny , nt so gud romance eid a shocking couple... ;) knowing u it's going to be KR so m waitinggg howz this gona happen... :p nd ur crazy mind k crazy ideas...:p :p nd nd plzzz mri maa iss stry ko update kr diya krna kripya krke aapka bht bda ehsaan hoga... :p nd one thing rey n jb siren bola hopefuly wo sharon k liye nhi tha...???? *kaan fuse* continue suprrr sooonnn... :D hate u... :* lov u only for stry... :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
just finish read both ur parts ... this is superb and fantastic...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is too ultimate...i love this kriya...and reyam ,...oh yeah...upd8 soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Interesting chapter
KriYaansh fight at first meeting 😆
Please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Part - 3

" Swayam rukh !! Aur Miss. Doll ab se tum chal sakti ho " He let her down and sat down.

" Dikhti ho barbie doll ki tarah par bohut bhari ho " Rey said panting. .

" Mai itni bhi bhari nahi hun " she said annoyed.

"Wo tumhe uthane wale ko bolo, God, bohut bhari ho " Swayam laughed silently seeing Kriya's face, which went small by her pouting. He very well knows Rey and his love of irritating girls.

" Bade bade baatein kar rahe the ki army , defence whatever mei ho aur ek ladki ko nahi utha sakte?? " she hissed.

" Haan , cheezein uthane ki aadat hai ladkiyon ko nahi!! Wo humara kaam nahi hai " he shot at her.

"Whatever , Swayam chalo na chalte hai !! Raat hone se pehle iss jungle se bahar nikal jayenge "

"Haan tumhara garden hai ye ki raat tak bahar nikal jaogi " Rey mocked.

"Mai Swayam se baat kar rahi hun "Rey nodded his head and walked to Swayam . Taking his bag he looked at swayam who made a known face. They are now in the jungle and it will be difficult to cross it and they can't even go back.

"Kriya !! Hum jungle mei aa chuke hai , ab bahar nahi jaa sakte par time lagega isse cross karne mei " Swayam walked to her and wrapped his hand around her shoulder.

" Kitna time?? " she asked feared.

" 3-4 din minimum lagenge " he replied very well knowing her reaction. So he gripped her shoulder tight.

"Kya?? 3-4 din?? Kaise rahenge hun iss jungle mei??? " she almost made a cry face.

"Agar jaldi nikalna ho toh hume abhi chalna chahiye " Rey for the first time ever spoke to her normally . Nodding her head she looked at Swayam who looked concerned at her.They kept walking with Rey leading them and Kriya holding Swayam's hand.

" Agar beech mei koi animal aagaya toh ?? " she asked feared.

" Toh kya kha jayenga " Rey joked.

"Rey!! Kriya already dari hui hai , tu apna mazak band kar . Kuch nahi hoga Kriya, tum tension mat lo " Swayam consoled her. Rey sighed .

" Agar kuch aayega toh ye haina " He took his revolver out .

" Tum gun leke ghoomte ho?? " she made a face.

"Kyun tumhare dad nahi ghoomte? " and for this she had no answer.

"Swayam , it's getting dark !! Mujhe dar lag raha hai , aaj raat ko kaha rahenge ? " She looked at him tensed.

"Kriya tension matlo, we will find a way okay? " She smiled nervously.

"Rey !! Hume rukhna chahiye !! Subah se chal rahe hai , thak gaye aur bhook bhi lagi hai " Swayam called out to Rey. Rey nodded his head agreeing.

"Bas thoda aur chalte hai swayam, rukhne ki kuch jagah mil hi jayenga " agreeing Swayam followed him.

"There " Rey pointed out a open space. And that's when they realized they were on a small mountain. And they could see the large forest ahead of them..

"Hume ye sab cross karna hai ?? " she asked shocked.

" Haan!! " Rey said casually and placed his bag down and stretched his arms out .

"Kya?? Hum wapas chalte haina swayam. Mujhe dar lag raha hai . Please " She grabbed Swayam's hand pleading him. Rey looked back and as Swayam cupped her face he turned around and walked to clean a place and start his work, giving them their privacy.

"Kriya, hum wapas jayenge toh , hum donon ki kisi aur se shaadi pakka aur wo bhi jaate hi , itna risk kiya hai tho thoda aur ?? " he said to her lovingly.

"Par Swayam kuch hogaya toh ?? Tujhe pata haina mujhe jungle se dar lagta hai "

"Haan pata hai , aur tum akeli thodi ho , mai hun aur Rey bhi hai . " He tried to convince her.

" Par Swayam "

" Kriya , I won't force you but socho wapas gaye toh that will the last, hum kabhi ek dusre se baat tak, baat chodo dekh tak nahi sakte... I am sure hum donon ko utna dur kardenge. But if you are so scared about it we can go back. Okay?? Abhi keliye rest karo , kal subah jo tumhe lagega hum wo karenge okay?? " Kriya smiled and hugged him tight feared.

" Kuch nahi hoga na hume yaha " Swayam smiled at her cuteness and hugged her back.

"Nahi hoga , ab chale ?? Kuch khalete hai " With that both walked to where Rey was. He is taking things from his huge bag.

" Waise Rey itna bada bag?? " Swayam asked settling beside him. Rey tooh out a bedsheet and spread it over.

"Oh gudiya !! Yaha bait sakti ho , kuch nahi hoga " with that he walked back to his bag.

"Arey hume pata nahi kab , kaha rukhna padega aur waha kuch milega ya nahi , aur hum sab trip se aarahe haina so basic things needed , bas. Tum log baito mai abhi aaya " grabbing a stone he stood up shifting it from one hand to other.

"Kaha jaa raha hai ?? " Swayam asked tensed. Roaming in the dark is not safe.

" Bas yahi thodi dur, aag keliye kuch sticks lane jaa raha hun "

"mai bhi chalun?? "

"nah tu rukh, darjayegi akele " with that Rey walked away.

" Swayam wo abhi tak aaya kyun nahi? Kuch hua hoga kya?? " after 15 minutes Kriya asked a already tensed Swayam .

Even before swayam could speak Rey spoke from behind startling both.

" Rey ko sher kha gaya , mai uski bhoot hun " he laughed hard seeing them scared.

"Bas ye kuch fruits the waha toh wo thod raha tha " he handed them some mangoes.

Lighting the fire three of them sat around. Swayam and Kriya have already packed some sandwiches for themselves to have on the way , so three of them shared and a bit later Kriya yawned but rubbed her . Seeing this Rey stood and walked to his bag and taking something out.

"Kya kar raha hai wo?? " Kriya asked swayam who shrugged his shoulder. But soon both realized that it was Tent which Rey is setting up. Soon Rey walked back .

"Jaake so sakti ho " he looked at Kriya who is hesitant.

"Kya hua?? "

"Nahi sona mujhe, agar kuch aagaya toh " for this both Swayam and Rey laughed.

" Mai nahi sone wala hun tum jaake so jao , subah subah nikalna hai "

" thanks " and Kriya left to sleep.

"Tu bhi jaana "

"Kaha?? " swayam asked confused.

" Arey I won't mind jaa uske saath soja " Rey winked at Swayam.

" Dude, hum shaadi karne wale hai , par aisa kuch nahi jaisa tu soch raha hai, mai yahi tere saath rahunga " Swayam shifted uncomfortably in his place.

"Don't tell me ki tum logon ne abhi tak kiss bhi nahi kiya " Rey made a face.

"haan nahi kiya toh .. Usme kya hai " Swayam said feeling uncomfortable under Rey's gaze. And made a sad face as he heard Rey laughing his ass off.

"Sach mei kuch bhi nahi hua?? God Swayam , u are still the same right?? The good boy !! " Rey laughed again.

" Acha isme kya badi baat hai ?? " Swayam said annoyed. Rey understood he is offending so he suppressed his laugh.

"Acha chal theek hai , ab tu soja kal subah nikalna hai "

" nahi mai tumhare saath jaagunga " Rey nodded his head.

" acha tu bata , koi hai teri life mei?? "

"Meri life mei?? Nah aisi koi hai nahi .. "

" Tumhare team mei koi ladki nahi hai?? "

"Haina , 4 hai.. Par unme se 3 ekdam bekaar hai , meri types ki nahi hai "

"acha toh ek hai ?? " Swayam teased.

" Haan , par wo meri friend hai , so tu apni dimaag ko wahi pe halt pe rakh. "

" hmm theek hai aur bata kya kya hota hai waha ?? " Swayam asked curiously.

Rey started sharing his stories but stopped seeing Swayam sleeping already. With a smile he walked to one end trying to call someone. But it failed , due to no network. He sighed and grabbed his guitar and sat a far end of the place and slowly started playing it, and checking KriYam in frequent intervals.



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Reviews Please !!


-Deetha 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
resss

unres...


dee ek baat puchu??? ismei kriyam ka romance kab khatam hoga????

i feel pukish...🥱


but haha update was nice...acha tha...

i loved how rey irritated her...and poor soul getting scared... 😆


and...hey...wait... kriyam never kissed...??? shukar hai 😆

and guitar... me liking it...


mast tha dee..

Edited by Effacious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Awesome update..

rey teasing kriya..& kriya's gussa 😆
Rey treat kriya like spoilt princess..😃
love his nick names for kriya.. Barbie doll, gudia.. so cute..
Excited to read further story..
loved it.😊
Edited by mir_mishti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
diii this is awsm update saachiii
Di jaldi kriyam ko end karo and kriyaansh ki start karo plsss
and thankgod kriyam didn't kissed
this update was super cited
he he rey irritating kriyaaa and kria is scared poor Herr
jaldii update next part soon
waiting eagerlyyy

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