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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..
omg randhir left her..once again...plz dnt do that plz bring him back
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh man... again same thing...randhir left😕 why😕
poor sanyu😭
hope all gets well😊
update next soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb continue 😛😉sonnn😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Anjala,
Sorry I couldn't comment earlier...Have been very busy!
Just read all parts in a go and totally loved it!!!
U write so well!!!!
It was a pleasure reading it!
Love,
#Anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
Feelng sad fr sanyu.. :( js do smthng i cant c her lyk dt.. Nywys u wrote d emotions n turmoil of sanyu's heart so wel.. Lovd it.. Witng fr d nxt 1 :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely . Please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its been a long tym , pls update soon...😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Shit! Again! Poor Sanyu.

Update soon re xP
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Posted: 11 years ago
A/N: Firstly thank you so much for this support you are providing me with. On the last update I was happy to see all those comments. Thank you so much to all those di's who took time to comment here within. I personally dont like the no. 13 and therfore this is going to be so mean!.. Pls ensure rolls of tissues, and keep away the harmful things from ur reach.. I dnt wanna die at this young age ..

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Chapter 13.
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"Once in a while."

No proof read, so ignore the typos please.
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On every knock at door, sanyu fled towards it with throbbing heart. The felling face with dismay of zero hope was a usual sight for kostuki after each time the door opens.
Kostuki couldn't bear those swollen eyes of her friend anymore, her friend's constant sobs in dark when sammy is not around, she knew her facade of joy and smile which her friend held for sammy's sake will betray soon. Its time to talk directly, she can't let her friend shatter again for the same man.
So she walked upto sanyu who was busy arranging the cupboard of sammy's. She knew that all her friend is trying to do is engage herself so that the realities takes a break from plotting pains against her.
Kostuki sat over the bed gently adjusting her creases on shirt and calmly called her name, "sanyu"

Sanyu busy with the trance of her life sat next to kostuki.

Kostuki: sanyu are you listening..?
Sanyu: hmm
kostuki: so.. *period* you thought about what I said?
*silent*
kostuki looked over at sanyu who kept looking onto ground like they held the solution for her problems.
Kostuki: sanyu... *sigh* sanyu I know its difficult for you.. But you made ur choice of not aborting the child na? To be sincere am not entirely happy with your decision.

She looked over at sanyu for any such reaction, but she kept on looking down.

Kostuki: So the only way around is that you do what I said... You cant alone make a leg for both children in this busy world..

She again looked and was revealed to see sanyu staring at her.

Kostuki: sanyu I know its hard,realities are hard dear, but we cant let it harm us.. Look sammy is only six now and on the other hand you are one month pregnant. So dont let the decision on cue.. Its not that I wont be there for you.. I will be with you whatever happens... but how long? The children deserves a good father, a man who would love you and stand beside you always. And "HE" is going to be a perfect father and husband unlike randhir.

Sanyu who was brimming with tears with the mention of randhir, the one who betrayed her twice. She couldn't take it anymore. She cant let him destroy her son's life anymore. Not after he knew the truth about his father's whereabouts. She still remebers how sammy broke down crying and wailing last week knowing about the truth of randhir, his senior, his dad. It took a lot of time to console him. He deserves a good dad, someone who loves him more than himself. But she wants to know the truth first, the truth behind his sudden disapperance, the truth behind those rumours from tabloids. So she took her mobile without even considering kostuki's answers. She dialed the number her distant friend gave her two days back.

Sanyu: hello.. Is this shekawat mansion?
( a man who sounded in his old fifties answered)
Man: yes..
Sanyu: can I speak to Mr Randhir Singh Shekawat?
Man: sir is not here, he is on with a business proclamation.
Sanyu: Is there anybody in the family I can speak to ?
Man: yeah, let me call Madamji.. Please wait..

After sometime..
Lady: hello.. Who is it?
Sanyu: am sanyukta aggarwal speaking.. Can I know who this is?

" yes.. Mrs Shekawat here.."

She abrubtly hanged the mobile, knowing her doubts were clear, her answers given.
She felt a sudden prick of pain in heart but didnt let it takeover her. He is not worth of her tears anymore. She looked at her friend kostuki, whose eyes beared the mountains of concern. She cant let her loved one suffer anymore. Not one more child to growl in words of "bas***d".
She took her mobile again and dialed a number from yesterday's call log. A Man with sweet voice took it and enquied with voice full of concern, "sanyu, are you okay? " . But her next statement resulted him bewildered with joy and shock.

"I am ready for the marriage.."

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do leave your comments and likes please.. Depending on it so much as inspiration. And please do check my other ff and ss.

With love,
anju



Edited by anjalanilofar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res unres
at last,
im first!
anju thune ye kya kiya...
hamare sare hope shatter kar diye.
well nxt chapter jaldi update karde and sanyu ki life mein thodi si happiness dalde.
wait kar rahi this is update ke liye.
I bugged u off over the top to update.
im sorry if I caused u trouble.
lekin plz current ongoing track ko lekar sab log bohot upset hai. we are on the verge of sarth in the show (that is what cvs has got us thinking) tho yaha tho Randi boy ko sanyu ke paas rehne do.
she shud not marry this guy who she said yes to.
Randi boy shud come and take her away with him and give hr all the happiness she deserves and a lot more.
he has to be der for his kids.
the day sanyu got pregnant with Randi (carrying Sammy) she became his responsibility.
he has to be responsible. he has go come back.
this is what I feel and u know how big a fan I am of this ff.
tho update thoda sad tha lekin I wont bash u more. I did enough upar.
thu typos ke bare mein worry mat kar, u dnt usually have any.
tho 13 no. ne depict kiya danger. ab alteals 14 se happiness start karde phir se.
update ne thoda rulaya. but u know how to keep ur readers stalking u.
tho ab ke liye bye, all the best and keep writing and sandhir ko milade hame sha ke liye!
👍🏼
love, snigdha
Edited by sniggybabes - 11 years ago

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