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The following fan-fiction Once in a while
is re-writing as new topic, for reading the story please check my posts.
The story will be re-continued there as well..
thank you to everyone who supported me..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4320562

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Asapom thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
so is the mother of child sanyukta ??
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue soon...im really lving this😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm loving it. Please update soon, want to know Randhir and Sanyukta's reaction. Moon is cool
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 3

"once in a while"

"sanyukta ??"

randhir stared at the extunting figures...

randhir: (himself) cud that be?? my son??

he stood there for half an hour counting on his unreplied answers...meanwhile..

sanyukta picked her phone...
kostuki: hai sanyu
sanyu: (stammering) haan kostuki
kostuki : wat happend sanyu? any problem..?
sanyu: kostuki..woh
kostuki: bolo sanyu..kya hua?
sanyu: randhir is here..
kostuki: (confused) kyaa?
sanyu: ya..he is here
kostuki: (shocked) how come?
sanyu: i dono.. but am not gonna let him come close to me and my son..never..
kostuki: but sanyukta sammy (junior randhir's pet name) is randhir's son too
sanyu: so what. upto these years wer was he? U too know na going through how much hardships i raised my sammy.. (crying)
kostuki: (assuring) sanyu i know that..leave it aside no one will take away ur sammy from u.. now guess wat am coming over to uk next month
sanyu: really? thank god...
kostuki: i hv to go nw meetings up.. bye dear..tc and regards to sammy..byee
sanyu: okay bye..


sanyu sat there in the couch still trying to reveal herself from the shock she held few minutes before...

sanyu: par randhir...pls...dnt...

she touched the floor soon...as she woke up afterwards...
laying on a hospital bed...

kostuki: sanyukta are u all right now?
sanyu: ya kostuki.. wat happend?
kostuki: sanyukta woh..
sanyu: (confused) wat is it?
kostuki: (looking down) sanyu.. i know it wud be very hard for u to hold on..but its the reality.. you are now PREGNANT

sanyu couldn't believe her own years...it was juzt like a thunder hittitng her from behind..

"mommy...comeon na? lets eat"

sanyukta broke down from her trance catching her lovely son's concerned voice.. sanyukta nodded her head softly and soon both of them seated over the table.. it seemed so that she was a gifted mother... Sammy had always been a son with such a maturity in his early ages itself..he never asked about his dad..with thought of it may hurt his mom..

sammy: mom.. so ur new co-ceo has arrived na?
sanyu: (confused) wat?
sam: hey mom.. that uncle who talked with me before in the park..he is the new ceo

sanyu was hell shocked right now.. she couldn't absorb the fact she has to be the assistant of randhir... to her dismay she couldn't even quit as the agreement of 5yrs is still on plate..


sam: mom so ?
sanyu: (irritated) wat so?
sam: wat do u think of him.. he seems to be nyc
sanyu: sammy am warning u.. dnt go near to him
sam: comeon mom he is not that bad..
sanyu: sammy u dnt hv to teach me who is bad or who he is good young man.. now finish ur food fazt and go to sleep..
sam: (teasing) okay madamji.. (smirk) and he got out from the table..blowed a kiss to her...and went to sleep

meanwhile sanyu was hell disturbed..the same smirk... which randhir used to give her.. she could juzt ignore him.. so she kept sammy's real name randhir.. still didnt even imagined she would meet him in her life anymore...

sanyu: (herself) so he is not back to here for me..only for his job.. i know him..he will never change.. he would never want to be with me or sammy... if u are here for my forgiveness with apology...u shall never receive it... (a tear left from her bounded eyes with the last words)

In his room...

Randhir sat beside his bed on the ground..

"sanyukta.. i never thought.. (smiling) i will meet you ever in my life..still god hate a differnet path for me..now am not gonna leave you and my SON anymore... you are gonna be with me...and for the first path of it i will first seek ur forgiveness...afterall u are my assistant na... " (a smirk left his beautiful lips)


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so how was it? i know its not that good... made it in a hurry..excuse the mistakes... next part will take time... as am facing exams...tc


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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was fantastic, amazing, awesome, rocking, emotional... And i loved the flow... All i can say is that your ff forced me to comment... Usually i don't... It's so touching yaar... Thank you so much for such a beautiful reading experience... I want more... RIGHT NOW... Kaise bhi kr k, Plzzz... Update it quickly... Love ya for this one... 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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FIRST OF ALL
WELCOME TO IF😊
THE STORY WAS
AWESOME👏
FABULOUS👏
AMAZING👏
IT WAS REALLY REALLY NICE ONE⭐️
THE WAY U HAVE WRITTEN IT😊
IT CANT GET MORE BETTER DEAR⭐️⭐️👏
I HAVE EXAMS ON MY HEAD BUT THIS STORY HAS GLUED ME SO😊
UPDAAATE FAST PLS👏
IF POSSIBLE PLS PM ME
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome dear...
Lovely concept...,
Plz try to update ASAP...
Can't wait to read more...
Love
Shalini
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely superb starting it was very intresting continue soon yar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was really great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice plot!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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