ArShi SS : Safe In Your Arms (Complete) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful as always cont so tanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
Enjoyed reading it
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
That was a lovely start...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Wow
another new story frm u !!!;
Loved it
tjank u fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Nice start dear...your Arnav is a selfless person...he is protecting and stalking Khushi...first chapter is an introduction for the characters...which is very nice...Arnav is holding himself responsible for Kashish death...Payal and Lavanya are there to take care of Khushi and sent by Arnav...But Kashish is aware of Arnav's love for Khushi...interesting dear...please continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Chaverah should I say Safe In your Arms or Story is safe in ur Arms Chaverah , becoz all ur story is always safe and light heartened dat never feels disappointed in reading it again and will be eagerly waiting for d update very soonYou'Re The Best
Now to d SS; Beautiful SS Chaverah Kisses , though at first part it was sooo heartbreking to see Khushi all alone and in sooo much pain in loosing her only family member her brother . And now really wonder what Arnav has done dat he's sooo much on guilt even afraid to confess his love .
Nevertherless loved how he and his friends has sent der girlfriend into Khushi's life to make her come out of her grief . Update soon and thanks 4d pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So the prologue and first chapter have kept the curiosity high so far. They all are like a small happy family, but behind the facade, everyone is trying real hard to fight the past demons, Arnav and Khushi especially.
She feels lonely and sad but is surrounded by the most amazing people and is being watched by that one person who probably holds all the reins to her happy life while on the other side he's even more lonely and is shouldering all the unwanted and massive burden of guilt. I hope this distance between them is gone, letting them share their lonliness with each other.
Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awesome update
khushi is falling in love with him..
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for sharing your story with us
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue is interesting
1st update is making curious to know what happened

Khushi crying and remembering her brother Kashish gupta and how he promised her she will never miss he will see for it Arnav watching her from behind tree and he too remembered his, Kashish, Aman and Aakash friendship and how Kashish said him to confess his love to Khushi before she come to him with other person she loves and how he said he loses everyone who is close to him and he don't want Khushi to be one of them and how Khasish asked him to promise he will never leaves her and he promised his friend.

Loved the bonding of three girls Khushi, Lavanya and Payal. Khushi re-started bakery after her brother's death and Lavanya and Payal joined her and they became inseparable to each other.
Aman and Aakash are owners of Music store which is besides Khushi's delicacy and she admired them for their hard work and full of life. Lavanya and Aman , Aakash and Payal are pairs.

Arnav saw girls run around and Aakash said Khushi is fine and Arnav thanked him and Aman and they both said they are family and they don't need thanks and said Arnav is not responsible for what happened and he and said he and Kashish both did it.
Arnav remembered how Kashish asked to promise him that he won't hold himself responsible for this and he will go back to Khushi.

Loved the way Khushi and Arnav meet by colliding each other and how he helped her from falling and how Khushi introduced herself to him and how Arnav gave hand shake and felt her touch sent shivers down his spine and how he too introduced himself.

Waiting to know what happened with Khashish gupta
Edited by sudhareddy - 11 years ago

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