Arshi ss That one Night which changed their life..chp 12 up on pg 41 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonder where aashi is...
aarav loves her alot...
i feel abd..
anjali tried talking..
armaan s really close to everyone...
and they share a beautiful bond...
tomorrow the party for the celebration...
hmm kashish in saree...
fabulous update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
next update awaited😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: beenish248

Fabulous update dude ...Very well written chappy. ., i really loved Family Time. .. Poor Ashish Arnan don't leave a chance to tease Him 😆So its Ashi ans Aarav's Birthday .. Angel You better Reveal soon about Ashi where is she ???I loved Anjali and aarav's Scene though it was bit Emotional ..what is He up to huhh ??? what is he Gonna ask her ??Aashi and kashish sing too 😲eagerly waiting :)




thank you yarr .. just wait a little past will reveal soon 😉



Originally posted by: madhu1210

superb cute!!

who is this Arman???😕

like the nok jhok between all kids and love the way whole family is there...

how long will u take to reveal Aashi??? and what happen to her??




Thank you for your lovely Comment..
As i had said earlier Arman is kashish bestie and about his family just wait a little you will know once story will progress ans about Aashi All i can say is Wait a little More please 😊 .. It will take time to reveal About past too .. I hope i clear all you doubt , if you have any other Question just scrap me or pm me as you like 😊


Originally posted by: tparvaiz

Fabulous dear

It sad when a twist of in not their😭
Arav is same as carbon copy of arnav as wel khasish.
😆 Amaan is really naughty ... to khushi he is call girlfriend😉
Arav listing to Anjali... she knows how to handle him because
After all she knows how to handle his father arnav😉
😆Waistband to khasish...

Please continue
Thank you for MP
Looking forward to seeing more. 😳😉




thank you 😊

thanks 😊


Originally posted by: suwin

awesome update...
thank you...



thank you 😊


Originally posted by: DIYA_21

Heart Touching update!!
Let go the Past and embraced the present - this is the way to lead a life..
But sometimes Past related with some bitter-sweet memories which cannot be forgotten..
So, it's better to live accept the past as a beautiful one..
Aarav is doing the same..
Waiting for next..



thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb.. Thanks for pm..


thank you 😃

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

hey thanks for the pm,loved d update. beautiful. all the characters are Awsum. family time was well described, njoyed evry bit of it. update soon


thanks dear 😃


Originally posted by: pooja_arshi

lovely update dear!!!
loved the way u wrote about each n everthing elaborately!!!


thank you yarr.. 😳

Originally posted by: sana11

wonder where aashi is...

aarav loves her alot...
i feel abd..
anjali tried talking..
armaan s really close to everyone...
and they share a beautiful bond...
tomorrow the party for the celebration...
hmm kashish in saree...
fabulous update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
next update awaited😃



thank you for lovely comment , just wait dear you will know every thing soon 😃


Edited by Preciousangle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Angel No update ??
Its been week you didnot update ??
Update soon .. I can't wait more ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: beenish248

Angel No update ??

Its been week you didnot update ??
Update soon .. I can't wait more ..





yarr was busy will update soon 😳




Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply amazing
loved itb




thank you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

"Teaser From chapter 8''

please Ignore Typos ..

Arman: Ladies and gentlmen may i have your attention please. Today Is my Friend Aarav's Birthday And I want to say sorry to him, Confuse instead of wishing him Why i am saying sorry Well thats because i had make him Mad so this is my Gift and i want to give you Aarav (Laughing) Don't be mad at me after seeing what gift is and i know You are curious What my Gift Is well its was recorded Some years Back umm when you were 18 so lets Enjoy . Suddenly lights went off and vedio were playing on LCD.

"Pool side Area"


Aashi were sitting near pool Dipping her legs in crystal clear water she turn her head otherside sensing his presence.

Aarav( sitting beside her): Di he put his hand on her shoulder.

Aashi: Leave Me chotte.

Aarav(Turning her face towards him):

" Toffee se mithi hai
Churan se kathi hai
Kathi meethi hai teri kahani
Aashi Di hai sab se sayani"


Di aab aap ki Bari he said wipping her tears.but she remain siltent and turn her face on otherside .

"Papad ka tokraa hai" but she remain silent. Di Thappar Laggao mujhe jo chahe Karo bus mujhse munh maat morro main jee Nahi paunga aap janti hain mujh se koi bhi Naraz Ho mujhe koi faraq Nahi padta Per aap Mujh se Naraz ho ye main seh Nahi Pataa Di please baat karo mujh se I...I am S..Sorry Di his voice Cracked .

Aashi's Eye widden Hearing his sorry He rearly say sorry to any One she slowly turn her head to see him his head bowed . Her all anger wanished in a second.


Aashi(Cupping his face and kissing his fore head): Papad ka tokraa hai
Jab dehko ukara hai
Dehta hai apni Di ko
Aasu mote mote
Woh hai gussewala
Hamara chotte"


Aarav(Similing): Di you forgive me he asked.

Aashi: Chotte hum ne aap ko maaf kiya lakin aagar dubaara aap ne Phir se Kisi sey ladai ki tou hum aap se kabhi baat Nahi karengy she said frimly.

Aarav(flaring his Nose but tried to calm himself): I will not fight with anyone unless They keep their eyes to themself he promised but if any one eye My sisters i will break their bones and It's Aarav Arnav singh Raizada's promise And get up not Hearing his di warning and worry.

Aashi(Sighing): Bua Sahi kehti hen "Tumhara chotte(Aarav) bilkul hamare Chotte(Arnav) py gaya hai " She laughed shaking her head.

the screen freez on her laughing face and lights turned on.he turn his Gaze to meet the sight which always warm him up their stood Aarav sigh Raizada wrapping an arm around his choti, Samrat and ashish, He always adore their Bond and loved them to bits.

He still remember the day when he first enter in Raizada mantion The warm welcome he get from Everyone the way his khushi Maa accept him just like her own son , he will be lying if he say he missed her Mom or Dad , Mom or Dad a painful smile lit his lips mom died when he were just 4 year old and Dad had No time for his own son and He has no time for him Now His all time is for his one and only family raizada's. His smile widen when arav Opened his arm for him he run and hugged him Tight.

Aarav: Thank you Arman it was best gift you give me today he wishpered softly.

Arman: welcome , by the way What are you going to ask kash han he asked curiously.

Aarav: thank for reminding me he smriked patting his back .

Khushi(placing Fresh Chocolate cake on table): Time for cake she said excitedly.

Arnav(placing hand on her waist): always Eager for food Mrs.Raizada he teased.

khushi: I am not She shot back .

Arnav: Bet you will start eating cake once Aarav will cut the cake he smriked.

khushi: Lagi shart hum cake nae khaegy ,aap haar jaengy dekh laina she replied.

Arnav(smriking): we will see.

Khushi: Game in on Mr:Raizada.

Arnav(tugging her hair behind ear): I am already on Mrs:Raizada he smriked seeing her lips forming in perfect "O".

Anjali(Clearing throat): If your Romance is over Shall we Cut the Cake she said mischeivously.

Arnav immediatly step aside.

Khushi: yeah Di lets go she said embarassed. Family gathered around table singing Birthday song while Aarav blowen the candle and cut the cake .

Aarav(holding little peice of cake): Mom he fed her . Khushi's eye turn wide remembering challenge she turn her gaze to meet with smiling eyes of Arnav. Damnit how can i forget Laddoo always fed me cake first.Laad Governer she muttered While Arnav smriked at his victory.

Aarav(feding her cake): time for my gift choti.

Kashish(chewing): What you want bhai she asked.

Aarav(seeing in her eyes): Sing Di's fav: Song choti just like you do on our birthday. All blood drained from her face.

A/N:

My Appology for keeping you wait for almost 2 weeks but I have projects to submit so i am posting small teaser .. Hope you guys understand Life is getting shity
Chapter is taking lot time so Chapter will be Up next Week,. Hope to see you all then ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
You Are teasing us with teaser ???Fabulous teaser.. What did arman do that Aarav is Mad at him ??Vedio Were so sweet .. I can't wait more..Eagerly waiting... its okay yarr we can wait ..
Edited by beenish248 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome teaser
Arnav bet to khushi.
Khushi too.
And khasish ... 😲 by his brother gift.
Looking forward to seeing arshi romantic scene.
And will khasish sing ...😕
Please continue.
Thanks for mp
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey thanks for the pm,loved d teaser. Fantastic. The screening part was wonderful. Aarav is a possessive brother . Lovely. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
thnx 4 the pm...
looking forward...


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Posted: 11 years ago


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